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Posted: 21 February 2013 at 6:29pm | IP Logged
Indu this is such a pleasant surprise.If onle you could see the look on my face when I saw this. You just  made my night. Don't even think of not continuing this. It was such a brilliant start and has lots of potential to turn out even better than your first venture. Loved what you wrote.

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Posted: 21 February 2013 at 6:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lovely_nikki


Dear me Nikki...you are such a biased sweetheart.Hug I really needed an honest opinion as to whether this was worth progressing with...Guess, I should have known better where you are concerned.LOL Thank you for liking whatever came out as a prologue. I don't know where this will go, but it is going to be somewhat different from Sparsh...Please give me some time to think about  the nitty-gritties of the storyline.
Sorry Indu if I sounded biased. But I truly enjoy your work and your writing. That's why I was so excited when I saw your another FF and was super excited that I was the second one to comment on it Dancing

I always like to give my honest opinion, especially if someone's writing is as good as yours. I know that sometimes I sound like I am doing maskebaazi, but sorry that's how I express my feelings. I genuinely believe that If you like something never hesitate to praise it. But do it with honesty.Heart

 Just the other day I even told my husband that one of my friend in the forum is such a wonderful writer.Remember I had even asked you that why don't you write professionally? And I sincerely hope that you will listen to me, as I feel that you've got a natural talent in you. Opps sorry once again, in know I did it again. 
 Ok now update soon, as we all want to know what happens next.
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Aww...don't get me wrong my friend. You have no idea what a morale booster your responses are to me. It's a good feeling that what you so lovingly write is being appreciated with so much of genuine love. There's an honesty in your compliments that I find so very endearing. Love you for supporting through everything...Hug
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Posted: 21 February 2013 at 6:32pm | IP Logged
Awesome please continue

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Posted: 21 February 2013 at 6:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Zetter

Awww I understand you fears but you can do this and yes it is worth a shot, you give it all your best and everything will be alright plus remember I'm here for you and so are many more members Hug 

You take your time and have faith in yourself XOX



Thanks Zet...What'd I do without you...Your two words are a mountain of support  and mean so much to me. Hug

I am going to go slow with this one...at least initially.


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Posted: 21 February 2013 at 7:30pm | IP Logged

Apsey yeh nivedan karti hoon mein iss kahani ko likney key liye hudh ko apna galam key liye atma samarpan kar ley!LOLEmbarrassed

Pfft! LOL I don't know what I said is correct so let me say it in English: Please surrender yourself to your pen to write this story!


BTW: Lovely story and would love to read more about the character traits of Aayu.


PS: Thanks for the PM! Otherwise I would have not found this story!Embarrassed



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Posted: 21 February 2013 at 7:43pm | IP Logged
Continue, please continue! 

I loved every word of it! It was absolutely beautiful and it has piqued my curiosity. I can't believe you came up with something so soon after Sparsh but I'm excited to see where this new journey takes us. I love the title and I want to know the story behind it. 

Thank you so much for the PM Indu! 

Looking forward to the next update! 

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Posted: 21 February 2013 at 7:58pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by InduG64

Originally posted by lovely_nikki


Dear me Nikki...you are such a biased sweetheart.Hug I really needed an honest opinion as to whether this was worth progressing with...Guess, I should have known better where you are concerned.LOL Thank you for liking whatever came out as a prologue. I don't know where this will go, but it is going to be somewhat different from Sparsh...Please give me some time to think about  the nitty-gritties of the storyline.




Aww...don't get me wrong my friend. You have no idea what a morale booster your responses are to me. It's a good feeling that what you so lovingly write is being appreciated with so much of genuine love. There's an honesty in your compliments that I find so very endearing. Love you for supporting through everything...Hug[/QUOTE]
My sweetest friend, I didn't get you wrong, once again I was just giving my honest opinion. Your writing is such that it automatically brings out praises from your readers. Clap
I was just wondering (seriously),  how do you come up with such appropriate and meaningful title?  ConfusedI wrote one short story and it took me 2-3 days to come up with the title name. I want to write something more, but once again I am stuck with the title name problem. I'll write only if find the appropriate title. 

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Posted: 21 February 2013 at 8:31pm | IP Logged

YIPEEE!!! DancingDancing
Indu
is back with another OS!!!! Am so, so happy!!!! Hug
And hey, do you need to ask us whether to continue??
You're such a good writer my friend, how can we say no...

I love the beginning of this, very new to my taste...
Samarpan?! What a word!!! I don't even know the meaning of it, but you bring it with a good explanation through Yash.
With the book about Aarti and Yash life!!! I'm loving it already..

And oh, Can't believe Aayu is in the house, you really loved him, do you? And Payal being the outspoken one!!!

Can't wait for Aarti to come out, and her past, very intriguing ha..
So, they meet when she was born, soulmate indeed!!!

Looking forward for the next hun, waiting for the next pm.. Embarrassed





Edited by smileymj10 - 21 February 2013 at 9:32pm

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