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Posted: 21 February 2013 at 5:04pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by lovely_nikki

Can't believe that I am second to comment. Read it at one go. Loved it. Hug

What I meaningful title Clap

loved the way you've described the meaning of the word " Samarpan " Clap

So their kids are grown up, sounds interesting. Loved the bonding between the trio Clap

Can't imagine a quite Aarti Confused

. My reaction was like Aayu's, Aarti and quite Confused

, but I am sure something major must have happened in her life. Can't wait to know what it was, but I know I'll have to wait for it Cry

. But sometimes waiting is good, hai Na? Wink

And OMG Yash first saw Aarti on the day she was born, so that means their love story started from that day Day Dreaming

Indu please please please update soon and PM me.

And Indu thanks for coming with another story, I am sure it'll be as good as SPARSH Heart

Dear me Nikki...you are such a biased sweetheart. Hug

I really needed an honest opinion as to whether this was worth progressing with...Guess, I should have known better where you are concerned. LOL

Thank you for liking whatever came out as a prologue. I don't know where this will go, but it is going to be somewhat different from Sparsh...Please give me some time to think about the nitty-gritties of the storyline.

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Posted: 21 February 2013 at 5:05pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by princess121993

oh wow...absolutely amazing...i m speechless...please update soon and pm me the next update..please

Thanks. Sure I'll mail you as and when I come up with Part 1. Smile

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Posted: 21 February 2013 at 5:07pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by IsYaRoCHeR

Wow re!! You came back with another S Story...

After I was missing the Sparsh.. here come another S.. Samarpan!!

OMG.. Just loved the prologue! Another beautifully written piece of writings!

Aayu is here.. The conversations are too cute of the mini family here.. Palak, Ansh and Yash Papa!

Excited for more, Indu!! Thank you for coming up with another story!

I want PM pls..

Thanks Isya. Of course, I'll let you know when I finally begin... Smile

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Posted: 21 February 2013 at 5:09pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by gcluv

yupieee Indu .. you started a another story

I am very excited

thank you dear

Will read and then shall comment on it

Thanks Aditi...Pls read it and give me your honest opinion. I don't want to stain your expectations by getting into something that you all may not accept wholeheartedly. Embarrassed

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Posted: 21 February 2013 at 5:10pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Sri_Radha

For new ss dear Clap

Great title... Star

Amazing prologue Clap

..So interesting.. Tongue

Wow..cute little aayu and yash convo superb Heart

Eagerly waiting for first part dear Day Dreaming

Thanks Radha... Smile

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Posted: 21 February 2013 at 5:14pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by miti16295

di di di Hug

u r back

u r my fav. writer di Hug

wow

i m so happy that u r back with another SS

first of all nice title Smile

so meaningful Clap

beginning was excellent Clap

thanks for starting another SS so soon

di just like aayu i can't believe aarti & quiet Confused

ur starting has made me more curious to know more about this story

pls pls pls update soon and pls pm me Big smile

PS - di can u give me the link of SPARSH

i lost it

and i want to read it again

Thanks for the confidence Miti. I have this vague idea about the story...Just don't know where it'll take me.

Here's the link to the first thread of Sparsh:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3308447

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Posted: 21 February 2013 at 5:22pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by MelodiousDreams

Indu! A new story?! You're asking us if this has potential or not? I haven't read the prologue yet, but you should know my views on the aforementioned matter. I received such a happy shock when I saw this after I came online just now. So happy to see this!

*RESERVED!*

Borna, my friend, I was banking on you to come out with a neutral opinion...the on-your-face one. Don't want to get into something that I won't be able to do justice to. With Sparsh, I knew the beginning and I knew how it'll end...but here the beginning itself is the ending...it's the in-between I shall have to pan out. At the moment my mind flies in various directions regarding the characterizations of Yash and Aarti. I am going to be a little slow at the beginning with this one...till I charter the course and there's clarity.

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Posted: 21 February 2013 at 5:36pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by sheema_rajoo

OMG OMG OMG... Indu when I saw your name and the title Samarpan( An SS) I was literally jumping in joy..

You've no idea how I terribly missed your writing. I was really hoping so badly that you would write a new SS and now knowing that you've started a new one, I'm over the moon happy... YAYYY.. One of my favourite writer is back in action. Dancing

Again another title which made me go wait what's Samarpan. Thank goodness you explained it and the prologue is so intriguing Indu. I absolutely loved it and am starting to get really curious as in to why Aarti was silent before.

Please please please do continue.. It has all the potential in the world, especially if the writer is you.. Plus asking that question itself is a crime. Love it and love you for starting a new one.
Here is a jhappi and super tight hug from an overly excited me... Big smile

Sheema...I am going to take my jhappi first. Hug

Really need it especially when you refuse to give me an impartial opinion. The whole idea of putting this as a prologue was to request you and all my friends to give me an honest opinion. I was so apprehensive that I posted it and went to sleep over it. Didn't even pm anyone

Having said that, I have to say I am simply overwhelmed at this blind confidence. I have my fingers crossed now as I tell myself, "Indu! Hope you know what you are doing?" Embarrassed

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