Samarpan (An FF) Part 11 (Thread 1/Page 139) - Page 2

Wow wow this story is so nice dear. and the speciality lies with the grown up kids and i like aayu so much !!!

Awww very intriguing start Pal 👏 👏 👏...Glad to see that you took that leap of faith 😉 🤗

Indu - pal, that's probably the silliest question you have asked!! Of course you should continue - and that answers your niggling doubt - yes ma'am, it definitely has potential, a lot of potential.

Did I miss Ansh in the prologue? I liked the glimpse into the older Payal and born-and-decisive Ayu. He's sooo cute!!

Yes definitely - do continue.

Samarpan ...wow just wow

Indu, you started another story, thank you. I loved Sparsh and was sad that it ended. I love your style fo writing and looking forward to Samarpan. Awesome prologue.

Wow Indu. Are you going to write a story? Whats an SS? Well everyone seems very excited about this and so am I. I love stories.

WOW indu, u are back with another SS am so happy..So love the convo between Aayu n papa Superb👏👏

wow,,,indu u are back 

indu...


me waiting... please continue...

very interesting ... please continue.