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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 12:28am | IP Logged
i'm sorry everyone i'm taking so much time to update but again 2morrow is my computer exam and after that i've four days holiday for preparation .. at that time i'll update ... and one more thing ... for PMzz.. add me to your buddy list  ... luv kriyansh

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update pls
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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 2:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anjori

So guys here is the update '. I got very less time so it would be a short one but please understand '

 

CHAPTER 1

1 MONTH AFTER KRIYA LEFT '

Rey ' (sitting in rehearsal hall alone) '(thinking) ' why did u leave me .. I love you so much please come back .. my baatcutter .. ican't believe you played with my emotions .. please come back to me.. I need you ..you are everything to me .. my life .. my breath ..

Everybody ( the whole gang) comes in the rehearsal hall )

Swayam ' come on rey you need to move on in your life .. now let's just forget everything else and practice for our dance competition '

Sharon ' please rey 'we can't see you upset like this .. from the last one you are not even talking to us properly .. nor hanging out with us .. you just sit and cry '. Please we all are missing our rey ..the REYANSH SINGHANIA ..

Rey- but sharon  '

Sharon ' no buts ..just come on and practice with us .

Whole gang ' yeah rey ..

Rey ' no guys ..i've decided .. I won't dance till I find kriya and know the reason behind her betrayal'

Gang ' what ????

Swaron ' have you lost it  '. You won't dance .. is your mind ok

Rey ' yeah I'm totally fine ' I will go to dehradun and find her '

Swayam ' please don't do this .. how will you live without dance '

Rey ' swayam .. if I'm able to live without my kriya for the last one month then I would be able to live without dance ' I love kriya more than anything ..

Nilesh ' but rey you doing this for the girl who left you and didn't even thought about how you would feel '

Vicky ' ya dude 'nil is right  ' she left you and now you are leaving dance for her '

The weaklings were standing and listening to the conversation and how they were pin pointing kriya but they did not want to say anything because kriya was their friend ' but vishakha with very much difficulty spoke  ..

Vishakha ' rey she doesn't deserve you 'don't go looking for her ' she will say something rude to you and then again you wouldn't be able to bear the pain '. ( inside she was feeling very sad for rey and kriya)

Rey ' no vishakha ' I want to know the truth '

Neha ' but neha wondering how will rey come to know the truth ??

Rey ' that i'll do '.

Soon the gang accepts that rey will not listen to them ..so they give up but '

Sharon ' we all with go with you ..

Neha ' neha also saying this

Amar ' han yaal .. hume bhi kliya se milna hai ( han yaar ' hume bhi kriya se milna hai )

Rey ' par tum log college miss karoge '

Vishakha ' yes dude ..anything for kriya ..

Swayam ' han yaar .. uski wajah se ho toh aaj hum sab talent ko jaan paye hain hum sab challenge dehradun ..kriya se milne '

Simmi and rinni ' agar Sharon aisa chahti hai toh hume koi problem nahi hai  ( looking at each other )

Vicky  - .. yeah bro .. neha bhi kriya se milna chahti hai ' hum sab tere saath hai  ' don't worry everything would be fine  '.

Rey ' thankyou guys tum log kitne supportive ho  ' you all are the best '

Sharon ' par hum jayege kab ??

Rey ' hum kal subah nikal rahe hai  '

All ' kal ??? itni jaldi  ..

Rey ' haan yaar ab mujjhse wait nahi kiya jata  .. mujhe use milna hai  ' please yaar thoda sa compromise kar lo  ..mere liye

All ' awww .. koi baat nahi hum kal hi jaa rahe hai  '

The rest of the day rey was thinking about kriya and the incidents that took place one by one '

Everybody has taken leave for a few days saying that they have a friends marriage in dehradun  '

In the evening 

Everybody is packing and and thinking what would be kria's reaction on seeing them  '.

Next morning

Rey ' is everyone here ..

All except neha ' yes

Vicky ' lekin rey bas neha nahi aayi abhi tak ' pata nahi kaha reh gayi meri deewani

Neha ' ( coming towards the gang ) ' sorry sorry .. voh neha getting late a bit

They all start their journey

(I'm skipping the journey )
( rey was busy thinking about kriya and falls asleep)

 

So for now it is this much only  ' but I would give you all a precap  -

After 2 day they find kriya heading towars a building ..crying and in a very bad state ' they all hide and watch her go inside the building  '

Next morning they are shocked to know that  ''

 


Hey dear really amazing concept !!! Clap
 
Hearty welcome to Kriyaansh Land !! Big smile

Hope u'll enjoy wid us to the fullest ... Wink

Btw hey am Shailja  Tongue

Loved ur start ... do continue soon and Pm me !!! Embarrassed

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 2:00am | IP Logged
nice

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 2:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anjori

i'm sorry everyone i'm taking so much time to update but again 2morrow is my computer exam and after that i've four days holiday for preparation .. at that time i'll update ... and one more thing ... for PMzz.. add me to your buddy list  ... luv kriyansh

Hey don worry !!!

It's fine ... Sabke exams chal rhe hai ... So chill and first tc of ur exams !!!
~Shailja Embarrassed

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 5:21am | IP Logged
welcome to the world of kriyaansh
and im really liking the way u r proceeding with the story
pls update soon
awesome work

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 5:24am | IP Logged
All the best for your exams !
you dont need to hurry with the update..every ones exams are going on Smile

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 5:48am | IP Logged
heyyy dear jus read ur work...

do pm me whenever u update...

n yaa all the very best for ur xamz...

do well...

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