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Posted: 25 February 2013 at 4:11am | IP Logged
hi purviSmile
gud dat u made a single thread 4 all ur stories,did u read my feedback in ur last threadSmile

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Posted: 25 February 2013 at 4:27am | IP Logged
Good job

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Posted: 25 February 2013 at 6:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rosepink.

hi purviSmile
gud dat u made a single thread 4 all ur stories,did u read my feedback in ur last threadSmile


yup i sure did thanks
and i have excluded my first story in this threadSmile
btw call me poo or puru

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Posted: 25 February 2013 at 6:30am | IP Logged
bt mjhe tumhe purvi bulana acha lagta h,chalo koi dusra naam sochti huWink
btw kb aa rhi h tmhari new story, i m eagrly waitng

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Posted: 25 February 2013 at 6:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by rosepink.

bt mjhe tumhe purvi bulana acha lagta h,chalo koi dusra naam sochti huWink
btw kb aa rhi h tmhari new story, i m eagrly waitng


jo bulana hai aap mujhe bula sakte ho di
meri new story ko abhi bahut time hai, koi story sujh hi nahi raha hai
btw i edited my girls cid team 4 ka scene 3 pleaseee read itSmile

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Posted: 25 February 2013 at 9:13am | IP Logged
fantastic purviClap
fabulous..d editd part ws wel xplanatory nd well written,only a small i feel cops nt alowd 2 shoot ny1 dirctly in d heart
i mean they cn shoot in arms or legs below knees,
rest evrythng was fab..chalo nxt tym dhyan rkhna
gud jobClap
i must say u r a great writer..Thumbs Up

Edited by rosepink. - 25 February 2013 at 9:16am

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nd ya take ur own time for nothr story,v readers cn wait for long 4 sch a fab. writerSmile

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Scene 3 is really nice. Clap

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