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Posted: 20 February 2013 at 8:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arnavbarun

awww

just loved it

wish they meet again

I remembered a quote (not sure if its relevant) but that was the first thought which came to my mind "Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing
and rightdoing, there is a field.
I will meet you there."(Rumi)

Thanks for the comment :-)

"Out beyond ideas of wrongdoing
and rightdoing, there is a field.
I will meet you there."

Oh it's relevant! It's such a beautiful quote. It's makes sense... It makes so much sense for them :-)

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Posted: 20 February 2013 at 8:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arnkush

oh my god that was terrific, why don't you make this ff or ss or 3 part series or something like that. Please don't leave this story like this.. It would be interesting to read more of your thoughts. Please consider it...

Hey, I really don't think that I'd continue this, I'm sorry. This story is not meant to be continued...
Like I had mentioned in the last lines of this os... this was one of those once-in-a-lifetime-moments :-)

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Posted: 20 February 2013 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by massu91

omggg

soo sooo cute..nyc...heart touchng
loved it a lot...
it does happen wit everyone

omggg i can totally relate to it bt d scenerios r diffrnt

yes it was gud u stopped it here..

it was awwwsum
u wrote it so welll



Thanks so much for the comment :-) I'm glad you liked it.
It does happen, doesn't it? It doesn't even have to be all that dramatic... maybe sometimes even tiny 5 second moment can make you want to seize the moment.

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Posted: 20 February 2013 at 8:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Happy-go-lucky

This OS was a very different attempt, and many can relate to the practicality of the situation in this OS, because things like that happen in one's life, like a shared smile, a little nod, a silent communication... You get the drift... Some things in life are better left as it is. They don't have to have an ending - good or bad... Like we'll never know what the boy thought of this interaction, or if it affected him as much as it did to the girl (and I'm saying 'boy & girl', and not Arnav and Khushi, because, I feel that one can relate to this even without this being about A-K)... A nice one, Ana!

:-) I love this comment, jina! Thanks...you put it out really well.

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Posted: 20 February 2013 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by winiwonka

Lovely!!!!!
Could actually feel the feelings... It was so tangible...Smile
You know the feeling cuz it happens!!!
At some point, it has happened to all of us...

Smile

Thank you <3
I'm glad you liked it and could relate to it.
That was the intention :D

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Posted: 20 February 2013 at 8:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Anupama.

This is wonderful..i loved it.
Yet it really hurts me to think what could have been if it isn't for indo-pak..so i wont think.but this is reality.

Thanks for the comment :)
Yeh...lets not even go there. That area is rather...erm complicated. 

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Posted: 20 February 2013 at 8:53am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AngelTeen

That was absolutely fantastic and one of those piece of writings which take you back to some moment, some feeling...great job! And I loved the fact that no names were used - added to the reader's scope for imagination. The ending added to the effect of melancholia over an important yet you dont really know why moment which you know you can hardly ever get back...great job! :)

Hey. Thanks so much for the comment. <3
Loved it :-)
I intentionally din't use any names :D

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Posted: 20 February 2013 at 8:55am | IP Logged
Originally posted by TwilightStar_JP

Firstly I'm not asking you to continue this Ana coz certain things are best left unsaid, for our imagination which can run wild!

Amazing story! I could feel the longing you havr for your frn!

Superb work! Separation indeed is pain but it oso gives us some sweet pain which ul relish!

Cheers

Thanks for the comment :-) I do love reading your comments a lot.
Thank you for understanding :-) yes, certain things are better left unsaid. 

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