hai, guys
Its me achu. This is my first attempt to write a os about our beloved virman. I dont know that u guys like it or not. So i will post pt1 here. u guys read it & let me know that what is ur opinion about my os. Lets read it...

PART 1

Morning
virat came from bathroom after the bath. He saw that his beautiful wife ironed his uniform. Sometime he stared at her.
"How cute she is looking" he thought. "How care she is"
He goes behind of her and hugged her from behind. she shivered in his touch. Virat placed her hair aside & kissed her in just below of the ear.
"virat, pls , let me iron ur uniform"
"no Mrs.Manvi vadera , first u give me a kiss. Then i will let u to do ur work"
She turned to face him. she saw the naughtiness in his eyes.
"Wow, ACP Virat Sing Vadera is very romantic in this morning. what happend?"
"Hello, my wifie, y ? a ACP cant behave like a romantic man? Iam a husband too yaar. So i want to do romance with my hottie wife"
Maanvi blushed very badly to hear him.
"Hey, give my hottie sweetie kiss pls"
she placed cute kissess on his both cheeks. She just about to kiss his lip just then his mobile ringed. virat picked the phone.
"hello? yes sir. ok sir. i will be there within 30minutes. ok sir"
He cut the phone .
"what happend virat?"
"Maanvi, i have a urgent meeting with IG"
He take his uniform and wear it. He take his revolver and placed it in revolver box.
"virat, can u came early in evening?"
"I'll try dear"
He placed a kiss on his forehead & goes to his office.

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hey guys, here is the part1. u guys like it. can i continue this story? if u like it , pls hit the like button & comment

Edited by iam-in-love - 16 July 2013 at 6:34am

Plz continue soon

Edited by susmita12 - 19 February 2013 at 7:53am

nice start
continue soon

its really nice. plz continue soon

nice start

Nice start achu
Virat is Assistant commissionar of police.
Really like it. Continue soon

Nice stat .pls continue soon

Awesome start......plz continue soon...