OS: Itni Si Guzarish part 2A pg6 Updated - Page 2

Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome OS tani darling..
a different and unique story line...
itni si guzarish...the title by itself was so different and poetic...

Loved it...So Arjun is going to meet Riya for fulfilling her last wish...
And i was wondering why Riya insulted Roshni...

Cont soon! 
bas itni si ghuzarish hai humaari ke tum jaldi se aage likh dho aur post bhi karo! πŸ˜†
Posted: 11 years ago
😭 very sad n touching πŸ˜­
kahin you are not going to kill Riya?
😭
very beautifully written, please continue😭
Posted: 11 years ago
Purvi its your first emotional writing & i can say you have sustained the heavy feelings in it.

Riya's last wish..this thing slways reminds the tragic death of Riya. feeling lump in my throat reading it.

Riya had unknowingly hurt Arjun & his deceased wife but as she is genuinely sorry Arjun should give her chance for atleast to die without guilt.

feeling realy realy watery eyes & heavy heart. looking for the next chapter.
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by Sinner.gurl


Hi tani partner!
Amazing start.! πŸ‘
So, Riya has unintentionally offended Arjun and it has something to do with his dead wife,Rosh!! ...That is definitely the last thing any Husband could take...some one mocking his deceased wife!!! 

And Riya is suffering from some incurable heart disease...and the guilt of hurting him is still lingering around! 😭..Poor soul!!

Arjun is going back to shimla to fulfill her "Aakhri Guzarish"...uff the  very thought of it is makes me cringe!!



Update soon... 😊

Great Job! πŸ‘πŸΌ


Thank u dishu  for d amazing comment πŸ˜Š

yup Arjun is going to meet her 1 last tym

even i m emotional while writing dis part
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by funkylicious



res againπŸ˜›

Edited

Woahhh what a start and what an end to part 1...
You kept me hooked all along with my eyes staring at each and every word...

Loved it its soon expressive, emotional and the flashbacks were fantastic..

You left it hanging but still it was too good dear... Loved it jaldi se update karo itni sirf hai meri Guzaarish...
πŸ€— πŸ‘ πŸ‘ Honestly you nailed it Purvu 😳

Thank u Shru for d amazing comment
πŸ€— back

wll try to post next part soon 

Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by zebbie


Tani,
i have no words to express my feelings.
It was more than Fab.
It was really emotional.
Loved the title.
By far,the best OS i have read.
Hats off to u,girl.
Keep it up.
Beautifully portrayed emotions.
Loved Rathod's concern for Riya.
Beautiful...

Thank u so much Annika ...

Rathore n Ria knew each other before she met Arjun

annd  dere relationship grew even stronger after wat all happened between Arjun n Ria 

Sameer really cares a lot about her 
Posted: 11 years ago
great OS yaar!! bohot hi touching hai!!
When you said it would be tragic, ithna expct nahi kiya tha.. but ab tho rulane ke hi plan hai!!
great update and continue soon!!!
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by prava55663


Awesome Tani Partner...
Just loved the One Shot...
This was a serious cliffhanger...πŸ˜›

The person has only 4days left...Oh God,,,

it was emotional...

Finally Arjun Agreed to meet her...😊

i want some miracle to happen for the person...😳

i know you said it as tragic...So *Sobs*😭😭

cont soon...will be waiting to read more 

person is Ria sweetu 

n she has sum tym left ...

isliye to i m tensed in writing next part 

i m scared regarding dat particular part ...
will post next part tomorrow or proabably raat ko
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by naughtykittyyy


ooo a touchyyy 1 dr
padke lagta nahike tum emtionl stry paheli baar likh rahi hoo

riya hs only 3 to 4 dayss🀒🀒😭

arjun wana meet hr any how😊

lv sam's cncrn 4 her n der intrction too

bt riya unknowinglyy roshni ke baremein aysa kya bol dia tha ke arjun uski sakal vi dekhana nahi chatha hay...

plzz dnt kill hr
watng 4 da nxt part...

dis is my first tym in writing emotional story 

isliye i m hell scared ...

Sam n ria had a nice bond ...

i hope u will like d final part
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by vidya.anand


Awesome OS tani darling..
a different and unique story line...
itni si guzarish...the title by itself was so different and poetic...

Loved it...So Arjun is going to meet Riya for fulfilling her last wish...
And i was wondering why Riya insulted Roshni...

Cont soon! 
bas itni si ghuzarish hai humaari ke tum jaldi se aage likh dho aur post bhi karo! πŸ˜†

thank u vidya di for liking d part 

i m glad u liked  d title 

Hope u will like d next part😊

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