Ariya os: Mera naam hai Mohabat

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Posted: 11 years ago
I try my best to write this Os, I think I do not justofy with this but anyway I post this Os,
I am ready for your harsh comments, please Don't throw tamatar's, jootay after reading this Os. Simply put this on rubbish bin.


Everyone become shocked when He drag her from their infront of everyone, He eyes buring with anger, she twisted her wrist to free herself from his grib, but his hand tightly hold her wrist, She says again and again to leave her but He doesn't want to listen a single word from her mouth, she become helpless, this is not the firsttime when He hurt her, But this time he cross all his limits. He drags her in the terrace and locked the door and leaves her hand and pushes her away.

Arjun: aakhir chahti kya ho tum.

Riya: kuch bhi toh nahi.

Arjun: kab tak khud ko takleef deti raho gi, ( He says softly)

Riya: takleef kis nay kaha mei khud ko takleef day rhi hun.

Arjun: toh ye takleef nahi hai, kyun tum har baar aaisay shaks k liay apni jaan ki bazi laga deti ho jot um say sahi tarha say baat bhi nahi karta, har pal tumhain dard deta hai, kis mitti say tum bani ho Riya,  uski nafrat ka asar tumharay dil par kyun nahi hota. Kyun ussay itna pyar karti ho kay khud ka bhi hosh nahi hai, kyun '

"TERE BAZAM MEI, MEI KHUD KO BHULA K AAI HUN,"

Riya: ha mei nay us k pyar mei khud ko bhula diya hai, mujhay sirf apni mohabat yaad hai is k ilawa mujhay kuch nahi dekhta, kuch nazar nahi aata mujhay.

" SARAY WADAY WAFA MOHABAT K NIBHA K AAI HUN"

Arjun: kyun Riya, kyun ek aaisay shaks par khud ko mitanay ko tyar hi jo tum say nafrat  karta hai pyar nahi.

Riya: pyaar denay ka naam hai, pyar kiya jata hai bina kisi expectation k ,k badaly mei aap ko bhi wohi pyar milay, mei isliay apnay aap ko is pyar par mitta dena chahti hun"

"MUJHAY KASAM HAI MOHABAT KI MEI KHUD KO MITA K AAI HUN"

Arjun: Riya tum kyun nahi samjhti mei tumharay liay nahi bana hun, humara sath kabhi mumkin nahi.

Riya: kiya mei nay kabhi aap say ye kaha hai k mujhay badal mei pyar chaheay , aap ka sath chaheay, nahi na phir kyun..

" JO NA HUN HATHON KI LAKEERON MEI WO MILA NAHI KARTAY"

     " YE BAAT MEI KHUD KO SAMJHA K AAI HUN"

Arjun: kya tumhain meri baton say zara bhi dard nahi hota, agar tumhari jagha koi aur hoti toh wo mujh say meray is behavior ki wajah say nafrat karti, par tum kyun nafrat nahi karti mujh say, kyun aansoo baha k chup ho jati ho, Riya hate me Riya Hate me.

Riya: aab ye aansoo nahi bahen gay, kyun k mei nay aaisay jeena sekh liya hai aur jahan tak aap ka sawal hai aap mujhay jitna hurt karo gay mera pyaar aap k liay utna hi barhay ga.

" MERAY AASHAK JO BEHTAY HAI JAB TERI BATEIN DARD  DETI HAIN,

  "JITNAY THAY SARAY AANSOO WO MEI BAHA K AAI HUN."

Arjun: kyun Riya kab tak jalao gi khud ko kab tak is mohabat ka gham liay jio gi tum kyun nahi samjhti ek tarfa mohabat dard deti hai, apni halat dekhi hai tum nay bilkul toot chuki ho..

Riya: par mei mohabat k safar mei bohat aagay nikal aai hun itna aagay k mohabat mei mushkilan nahi samnay sirf aap dekhtay ho, mujhay ishq ki un rahon par hun jahan say lotnay ka koi rasta nahi hai, chahay kitnay hi tukroon mei bat jaun par mohabat karna nahi chorun gi.

 "TERAY ISHQ MEI PAGAL HUN HAR TARHA SAY GHAYAL HUN,

 TERAY DAR PAR  MERAY JANA MEI KHUD KO SATTA K AAI HUN"

Arjun; Riya is mohabat mei sirf dard hain, tarap hain aansoo hai, aur kuch nahi hi riya, tum kyun nahi samajhti.

Riya: aap kyun nahi samjhay, aap bhi toh kisi say pyar kartay hain, khud ko kyun dard detay hain aap, kya dard takleef ki wajah say aap nay unhen chahna chor diya hai kya nahi na mei kasiay aap say pyar karna chor dun, jin din sans lena chor dungi us din aap say pyar karna bhi chor dungi.

" TUJH SAY MILAY GA NA KUCH BUS ASHK_E_RAWA K ILAWA.
         "YAHI BAAT BARAHAN DIL KO BATA K AAI HUN"

Arjun: meri baat aur hai Riya

Riya: kyun aapki mohabat kuch aur, aur meri mohabat kuch aur  hai, aap un say pyar kar saktay hain, unki yaddon mei khud ko rula saktay hai aur mei aap ki yaad mei tarpun toh aap ko takleef hoti hai, aap nahi jantay  mujhay kitni takleef hoti hai jab aap ko is tarha rotay dekhto hun, mera dil tarapta hai.

"DIL MERA SULAGTA HAI TERE GHAM DEKHAY NAHI JATAY,

           TERI KHATIR MEI APNAY DIL KO JALA K AAI HUN"

Arjun: please Riya mujhay  bhool jao mei kabhi tumhara nahi ho sakta , tumharay samnay tumhari poori life hai, tum meri wajah say apni zindagi kyun barbad kar rhi ho, please tum kisi aur ko apna lo mujhay bhool jao.

Riya: Aap ko bhool jaun, kaisay mumkin hai ye, kya aap unhen bhool saktay hain kya , nahi na phir mujh say ye umeed kyun kartay hain k mei aap ko bhool k kisi aur ko apna lun, kya aap un k bad kisi aur ko apna saktay hain nahi na .

"NAHI HAI YAAD AB KUCH BUS EK TERE NAAM K ILAWA,

    MEI TERE ISHQ MEI JANAH KHUD KO LUTA K AAI HUN"

Arjun:  phir Riya mujh say pyar karna chor do, mujhay aur takleef mat do riya.

Riya: aap apni mohabat nibhaeay mei apni mohabat nibhaun gi, par ap ko chahna nahi chor sakti, hum dono mohabat k us mukam par hain jahan say  hum sath toh chal saktay hain magar ek nahi ho saktay, mohabat k us mukam say palat k jana jaisay aap k liay mumkin nahi waisay meray liay bhi ye mumkin nahi k mei aap ko bhula dun, aap apni mohabat mei khud ko sataeay mei apnui mojabat nibhati hun, usi k dil ko rahat milay gi jis ki mohabat sachi hogi, jis ki duaon mei asar ho ga , usay hi sakoon milay ga, mei bus aap k liay khud ko fanaa karna chahti hun, aap ka pyar jitna sacha hai utna hi mera pyaar, jaisay aap kisi ko apna nahi bana saktay waisay mei kisi aur ko apna nahi sakti,

" MOHABAT APNI NIBHAOO TUM NA ROKO MUJH KO CHAHNAY SAY
         K HAD THAY JITNAY SARAY WO MEI DHA K AAI HUN,

Riya: janti thi mujhay is pyar mei sirf dard k aur kuch nahi milay ga phir bhi nahi rook pai khud ko aap ko chahnay say.

Arjun: theek hai Riya ab tum abhi chahat nibho mei nahi rokun ga tumhain, dua karta hun tumharay dil ko sakoon milay tumhain wo milay jisay tum chahti ho..

Riya: hun..

In the office.

Shree: kya huwa Riya kya kaha Arjun Sir nay.

Riya: kuch nahi..

Shree: riya teri chahat ka un par koi asar nahi honay wala, wo tere kabhi nahi hun gay

Riya: mei nahi chahti k wo meray hun, kyun k mei kabhi nahi chahti k dunya unki mohabat par ungali utaen, unhen ye kahay k unhon nay usay bhula diya jis say wo bepanah pyar kartay thay, shree mei kabhi nahi chahun gi k woe k pal k liay bhi meray hun, aur jahan tak mera sawal hai mei bhi apni mohabat ko badnaam nahi karun gi jis tarha unki mohabat sachi hai waisay meri mohabat bhi sachi hai

Arjun hears her conversation and smiles.

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Girl: please papa aap aaisay nahi ja saktay bataen na kya huwa.

Her Father: ye tum apni mama say pocho.

Girl: please papa bataein na phir kya huwa.

Her Mother: ye rhay  kya batein ho rhen hain papa aur beti k beech.

Girl: mama dekho na papa bata hi nahi rhay hain k unhon nay aap ko kaisay purpose kya,

Her Mother: kya kaha phir say kehna.

Girl: mama papa mujhay aur ishan  ko bata rhay thay k ..

Her Father: sshhh kya bol rhi ho pitwao ge kya..

Her Mother: toh un say kya pochti mei batati hun na. Kyun Mr. Arjun suryakant Rawate bata dun,

Arjun: nahi  Riya darling izzat ka sawal , bachon k samnay mujhay'

Riya: aap ki izzat jo jo aap kar rhay thay..

Arjun: sorry ..

Neha: no mama aap ko batana hi parey ga.

Arjun: Chalo mei khud tumhain batata hun,

Ishan: sachi.

Arjun: yes jab pyar kyat oh darna kya, kyun jaan.. He winks.

He sits in sofa with his two beautiful childrens Neha 18 years old daughter and 16 years old son Ishan.

She stands quietly in a corner and admiring his husband and children.

" Wo lot k phir aaya hai janay k bad,
  sukon dil nay paya hai, khud ko satanay k bad,
 nahi thi umeed jis k milanay k dobara,
 wohi shaks mil gaya hai aansoo bahanay k bad,
Jitni thi zamanay ki khushiyan sab meray daman mei aa gain.
  buhat dil nay zakam uthaey thay ek muskuranay k bad"

Arjun: wahan khari khari kya soch rhi hun yahan aao.

She sits between his husband and her daughter, He holds her by her shoulder, she keeps her head on his shoulder, He kisses on her forhead , Neha hugs her mother and Father and ishan did the same, This show a complete and happy family pictures


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