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laxmii Senior Member
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Posted: 17 February 2013 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
hey!!! i m neha!!..
i m new in madhubala forum..
i have read many ff..
and finally thought of writing one of my own..
hope u all will like it...


prologue-

in mumbai-
it was around midnight...the weather was very calm...
people were inside their house taking a sound sleep..
no one was around..it was all quite,only rustling of sound of leaves could be
heard...and there was he,rishab kundra,walking in the middle of road absent-mindly..
he was lost in his thoughts..
he couldn't believe that the day which could have been best day of his life
turns out to be worst..
his dreams were turned into nightmares..
he couldn't fathom .what went wrong??where he went wrong??
this was supposed to be his best day of life.
he was supposed to be with his family,enjoying,celebrating..
he was supposed to be with his love..with his supposed to be wife...
he was supposed to be married to his love of life...
he was supposed to be with her now,spending time with her..
his thought went back to the  morning,where his whole family was preparing
for his marriage,everyone was busy with doing one or the other chorus...
he was getting ready .he had wore her favorite colored sherwani-orange!!!
..though he hated this color but for her happiness he could do anything...
his barat was ahead of time by 2 hours but he was ready beforehand
and couldn't  keep his excitement to be finally with her love..how he wished
time would fly !!!..

rishab(to himself,closing his eyes)-"i wish i haven't wished that...i don't want
the time to fly!!..i want to remove these last few hours for my life..
i want to fly back in past..to his family..to his love-pia!!!"
he kept on walking numbly,unaware of his surrounding and didn't realized
when he reached the beach ...
rishab looked around and realized that unknowingly he had reached the place which he cherished the most..this was place where he met pia first...it was love at first sight for both of them...
and as if in Que,tears spilled from his eyes.he didn't try to stop them..
he knee-led down and broke down,screaming,shouting,pouring his heart out..
he felt a sharp  in his chest while remembering the tear-stricken face of
pia!!,her sad,shocked,hurt,questioning eyes piercing through him for her
answers...
rishab(crying)-"i m sorry pia!!.i m sorry what i did!!..but please believe me..i
didn't betrayed u..i love u pia!!i only love u and will always love u!!.."
than he looked at the sky which was dark with no star,no light like his life...
rishab(raged,red-puffy eyes)-"i promise u pia!!..i won't leave her..she is the
reason we are not together..i swore i will destroy her..she took me away from
u!!..i promise i will took her life from her..she has to pay!!she has to...get
ready miss.madhubala chaudary ohh yes(sarcastically,with anger) mrs.madhubala rishab kundra!!..u think u could play with peoples
life...but no more..i won't let u!!..not after what u did with me!..i hate u
,madhubala..i hate u to the core of my heart!!"

precap-
madhu side story
rishab at his home
madhu-rishab encounter

please do tell me to continue or not..
it different from the original track..
but it is rishbala track only..
please do comment..it means a lot.
for pm ,send buddy request...


index-
chapter1 -page 2
chapter2=page 4


my other work-
it is of one of my favorite serial"love ne mila di jodi"...a human love story..
ss-my way of redemption

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2960151#56682799


ff-live again
it is of my favirote serial "pyar ki  ye ekk kahani"...but no supernatural story...
a simple love story.
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3093129#60951201


it is of my favirote serial "pyar ki  ye ekk kahani"...a supernatural ,dark love story...
mini ff-falls apart
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2756185



 


Edited by laxmii - 16 October 2013 at 7:12am

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Posted: 17 February 2013 at 1:46pm | IP Logged
Plsss ccont soon and dont frgt to pm me
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Posted: 17 February 2013 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
sound interesting 
plzz continue
plzz pm me on next update!!!


Edited by nahi12341 - 17 February 2013 at 2:00pm
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wowww another ff by u:);) sound interesting... plz cont...
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Posted: 17 February 2013 at 4:23pm | IP Logged
Nice.
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Posted: 17 February 2013 at 8:33pm | IP Logged
nice start
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nice
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nice start

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