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My TD Fast Forwarded.. enjoy! (Page 9)

lucky-moon Goldie

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Posted: 23 May 2005 at 3:16am | IP Logged

wow this is amazingTongue

*Guli* IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 23 May 2005 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
Part 15

Dk is totally shocked and Ved and Dk look at each other like what??

Dhruv: Dk, why arent you saying?

Dk doesnt say anything and leaves

Disha: Dk?

(They both go inside)

Disha: Dk., what happened to you how come you didnt say anything??

Dk: Who is that man??

Disha: Dk?? That's your dad!

Dk: No he cant be!!!

Disha: What are you saying?

Dk: If he was my dad then where was he all these years if Gargi didnt kill him? Where was he when i needed him all these years? and Ma's condition.. didnt he care what she had gone through all these years!

Dhruv is listening and heard what everything Dk said....... and he comes in.....

Dhruv: Dk???

Dk: (his eyes pop out)  Please dont say anything

Dhruv: I know you are very mad at me!!!

Dk is having his back turned to him...

Disha: Please say something Dk....

Dhruv: Disha.. i know my son very well... he cant be mad at his dad for a long time! You want to know what happened all these years..... (He tells the whole story... Ved also comes in and hears it too....) And i tried coming back but when i came back to our old house no one was there.. i looked and looked but it was no hope.. until yesterday when Disha brought me here!!

Disha: If mummyji can except him why cant you?

Dk: Because i cant!!!!!!1

disha: why??

Dk: (Tears start rolling down his eyes)

Disha:  Dk....

Dhruv: It's okay Disha, I told you it wasnt a good idea to come here... i guess the only way to solve this problem is leaving it again!

Dk: (Shocked) Dad???????

Turns around and gives him a hug... Father Son moment Clap

Dhruv: Ved?? What do you say?

Ved also gives him a hug.. and everyone is happy!!!!!!!

Dk & Disha stay in their rooms and every1 else leaves

Disha: What happened?

Dk: I cant believe it dad is alive......

Disha: I Couldnt believe it either when i saw him

Dk: Thank you Disha!!

Disha: Thanks for what?

Dk: For bringing dad back!!!

Disha: It was my duty!!!!! Embarrassed You know i will do anything for you!!!11

Dk: Anything? LOLEmbarrassed

Disha: Dk.. what are you doing?

Dk: Disha come here...

Disha: No!!!

(Disha Runs and Dk grabs her arm and he hugs her........ )

Ahhh... i have to go bye!
keshp15 Senior Member

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Posted: 23 May 2005 at 1:51pm | IP Logged

hey gulli444

u r doing an awesome job here

giving me something to look forward to everyday


wow i can imagine dk's axpression

thanks a lot for making me laugh

keep up the good work

love KP

*Guli* IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 23 May 2005 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
Part 16

Dk is outside and is sitting on a bench and thinking about his past w/ his parents and how he used to play with his dad, etc....

Dhruv: what happened son? what are you thinking of?

Dk: Nothing Dad! I am just thinking of us from back in the day!

Dhruv: Look, Son..

Dk: Dad, Why didnt you ever come back? Did you ever think about what was happening to us?

Dhruv: Son, that was on my mind  every single day!

Dk: Yea, but you do you know what happened to Ma?

Dhruv: Yes i did!

Dk: But why dad? why did you escape?

Dhruv: I had no choice!!

Dk: You kno the biggest mistake of your life was Gargi! And poor Ved has to pay the price for it!

Dhruv: Dont mention that woman's name again....

Ved walks in....

Ved: Dad?

Dhruv: Ved, (Shocked) look i am sorry... but

Ved: It's okay!! i agree with you 100% i never like my mom either... that is why I was never on her side...

(They talk and talk and finally everyone goes to sleep)

Sia: Arent you happy your dad is back?

Ved: very much!  The only person that was behind it all was my mother I hate her sia i hate her so much that i never want to see her face again!!!!

Sia: Hey now, calm down! its okay i know you are upset..

Ved: No sia i am not upset... i am angry and frustrated!! The things that my mother did to this family i will never forget it!!

Sia: We all will live as one big happy family!! Dont worry!!

Ved rests on her shoulder and she comforts him!

Disha: (to dk): Whats wrong?

Dk: Nothing, i have a really bad headache!

Disha: here let me message it for youEmbarrassed

(She massages his head while his head is on her thigh)

Dk: I am happy that dad's back.. but poor Ved.. he didnt even do anything and look at what he has to go through..

Disha: Yeah, but he will get over it!!

Disha just talks to Dk and doesnt realize he fell  asleep

Disha: Dk... Dk???

She just laughs...

Disha: Goodnight and she kisses him on the forehead!

Dk: Smiles!!!!

I have class now.. so i have to go.. i will cont.. 2nite my time!!!!!!
lucky-moon Goldie

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Posted: 23 May 2005 at 3:20pm | IP Logged
wow last scene was so sweet please add some scene of dk and disha playing with their kids as a happy family Big smile
Jaslove IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 23 May 2005 at 4:32pm | IP Logged
ClapClapClap, i agree with lucky-moon. write some disha dk and their kids, together. or the whole family going on a picnic.LOLBig smile

Edited by Jaslove - 23 May 2005 at 4:33pm
*Guli* IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 23 May 2005 at 7:12pm | IP Logged
Part 16:

6 months later... (The kids are 9 months old and can  almost walk)

Khushi is crying and Dk is with her... dk picks her up and she stopped crying

Khushi has a big smile on her face when she see's dk....Dk puts her down on the bed and sleeps next to her....

Disha comes....

Disha: Dk... what do you want to do today??

Dk: Sleep!

Disha: Dk???

Dk: Sleep!!!

Disha: Dk lets go somewhere with the kids... we havent gone anywhere with them!

Dk: Okay where do you want to go?

Disha: Lets go to the park...

Dk: No there are too many people and they might catch the other children's germs!

Disha: Oh please Dk lets go.. we will take everyone lets go...

Dk: disha. i dont want people to touch or go near my kids..

Disha: Dk you sound like they are only your kids.. they are mine too!!

Dk: well cant we do something else..

Disha: No.. we are going to the park and thats final!!!

Dk: Disha!!!!!!

Disha walks out and tells everyone that they are all going to the park... and they are all going for a picnic... (For people who wanted them to have a picnic Big smile) Sia packs a big lunch and everyone goes...

Everyone is sitting on the floor talking about the old days.. when Ved and DK were little....

Dk is making Khushi stand and she does...

Disha: Be careful.. Dk...

Dk: I know how to handle kids...

Sum: Since When??

Ved: Yeah brother since when...

Dk: I always have...

Sum: Sunny.. do you remember that little girl... her name was Pooja...

Dk: Um... No

Sum: Of course you do she was a little chubby... and you use make fun of her..

Dk: Oh yeah i called her Moti!!! Confused

Sum: Disha... this bad boy used to hide all her dolls and bury them in the ground....and one day she got so mad that she took sunny's favorite toy and threw it in the garbage...

Dk: Yeah i remember that day.. i was crying so much!!! LOL

Ved: Brother, why did you take her dolls for... did you want them for yourself? I didnt know you liked dolls so well....

All laugh!!!!!

Sum: Ved, you were as just bad as Dk...infact you were worst

Ved: really what did i do?

Sum: In school, you use to break all the lights by throwing rocks at it.. i am telling you i have really bad sons!!

Ved: Oh come on you know you love us!!!

Sum: Yeah thats the bad part!

So everyone enjoys themselves and they go home!

The next day @ work

Well well well Pori comes to Ved's office.. his chair is turned around

Pori: My My Ved........ what did you think that you can get rid of me so easily? I am not going to leave so easily!! Just because you  kicked me out that doesnt mean i am going to stay away...

She just keeps blabbing on and on.. when suddenly Ved comes in from the door
and Pori looks at him in total shock..

Pori: wait if thats you.. then who's

DK turns around and he was sitting in that chair

Ved: How dare you come in here?? Get out! Get out now!!!!!!!!!!

Pori: But....

Dk: why are you so surprised? didnt you hear what he said.. get out... and dont ever show your face again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Pori: You can say waht ever you want...

Ved: Oh shut up Porineeta!!!!!!!!!!!

Pori leaves in a huff.....

Pori: Ved you didnt do such a wise thing... i will be back!!!!!

Cont.. 2nite!!! after watching my soaps!!!
keshp15 Senior Member

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Posts: 604

Posted: 23 May 2005 at 7:29pm | IP Logged

hey gulli444

nice job againClap

now lets see what this pori does now

love KP

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