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My TD Fast Forwarded.. enjoy! (Page 8)

kavita_b Senior Member

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Keep up the good work! waiting for next part

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Part 13

Disha and Dk are in a very comfortable position and neither of them want to get up... Disha looks at the time and it's 9:00a.m.

Disha: Dk....!!!!!! It's 9.. now i have to get up you get up to!!

Dk: Disha! when are we gonna get a chance like this again?

Disha: We will but now i have to check on the kids and you have to get up...

Dk: Do you hear the kids? No rite? then come on!

Disha: Dk!!

Dk start kissing her on the neck

Disha: Dk! Stop it!! Let me go!Embarrassed

Dk: No! Now today nothing is going to work! i am not going to let go of you so easily!!!

Disha: Okay then....

She tickles the crap out of him and he is so busy laughing then she finally gets up..  takes a shower and comes out!

Sia has taken care of Dhruv and Khush, she has bathed them and fed them!

Disha: Why did you take the trouble? I am sorry.. i was uhh so tiredConfused when i woke up it was already 9!

Sia: I heard them so both of them were awake so i gave them a bath and fed them.. mummyji helped me!

Dk comes out and is ready and so does Ved... Dk mentions that both of them (him and ved) have to go to Goa to finalize some deal and they will be meeting some people... Ved agrees to it! They will be going for three days!

Sia packs Ved's stuff...

Sia: Here everything is packed!

Ved: I will miss you!!!!!

Sia: I wont! Angry

Ved: Why?

Sia: Just because!

Ved: Why?

Sia: Your leaving me for three days thats peace and quiet for me!!! LOL

Ved: What?

Sia: (laughing) i am just joking i will miss you lots!!!!!!!

(Both Hug)

Meanwhile, Disha is packing Dk's stuff.. she takes out some clothes and a picture falls out from the clothes.... She picks it up and it is a picture of Dk and Dhruv (His dad) She is smiling at it and thinking aww.. how cute!  she just leaves it there on the table!

Dk comes up Behind Disha:

Dk: Disha!!!! (She jumps)

Disha: Dk... how many times did i tell you not to come from behind like that!

Dk: i am sorry.. is everything ready?

Disha: Yes!! Be careful when you go over there.. take care of yourself and dont eat thing that will make you sick!!

Dk: Disha.. you worry to much we are only going for three days!

Disha: I know but when the both of you are together i cant really trust you guys! you might eat something bad and fall sick!

Dk: Listen.. when i am about to eat i will call you ok?

Both laugh!!!!

Dk and Ved leave and now they wont be back for three days!!!

Sia is wiping the kitchen floor

Sum: Are Sia, what are you doing? why are you taking the trouble to clean that.. the servants will do that!

Sia: it's okay how much will they do?

Sum: Why dont you go out w/ Disha? You are always working take time off and go do some shopping!!

Disha: Yes, mummyji is right.. how much work will you do we have to go shopping

Sia: We will.. just let me finish!!

Disha: No you wont.. (She calls the servant and he finishes it up)

Disha and Sia are out shopping! They are looking at things and buying clothes....

Meanwhile,  there is a guy.. whose back is turned  and we cant see his face... and is just walking around!

Disha: Sia.. isnt this sari nice for mummyji...

Sia: Yes, so is that one...

They buy like three or four sari's for Sum...... the mystery guy is still just walking around people are looking at him.. Disha and Sia dont notice him..... Disha takes some money and a little picture falls out of her wallet it is a picture of Her and Dk on their wedding day! Disha doesnt notice.. she pays the man for the sari's and both of them leave...  the man picks up the picture and looks at it ( we still dont see the face)

The man is following them.. Disha feels like someone is spying on them or something she turns around but doesnt see anybody...

Sia: Bhabhi what's wrong?

Disha: I dont know... i feel like we are being followed by someone!

Sia: There are so many people here its probably just your imagination...

Disha: Your probably right!

The man is still following them... Disha notices something this time....

Disha: (to sia) I think there is a man following us!

Sia: Where?

Disha: Behind me...

Sia: (She looks with the corner of her eye) I think your right...

Disha: Okay.. lets turn on three 1..........2.............3.................

They both turn around and there is man w/ a beard........

Disha: Yes how can i help you!!!!! why are you following us???

Man: You dropped this picture over there...

Disha: Thank you!!!!!!!!! now please......................................

Disha stops what he was saying because she thinks she saw this man before.......

Disha: I have you seen you somewhere before?

Man: Umm.. no you havent!!! 

He walks off and Disha follows him and Sia follows Disha....

Disha: wait... hold on...

She stops him and he turns around and faces her ............. Disha is so shocked that she cant believe who she is seeing because the man who is in front of her eyes is no stranger it is none other than Dhruv!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I will cont. tonight!!!!!!!!!!!

Angadzgirl IF-Rockerz

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getting more interesting. plz continue.


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wow this is just amazing plz do continue nice creative imaginations
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Posted: 22 May 2005 at 7:45pm | IP Logged
its very very good . very creative writting and imagination
*Guli* IF-Stunnerz

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Part 14

Disha is like in a total shock of her life......

Disha: Daddyji???

Dhruv: I dont know what you are talking about!

Disha: are dk's...........

Dhruv: dont say anything please

Sia: Bhabhi you know this man?

Disha: Sia, He is Ved and Dk's father

They both take his blessing

Sia is shocked too because Remember Ved told her that Gargi killed him...

Disha: I thought you.......

Dhruv: Died right??

Disha: Yes

Dhruv: Thats why Sumitra thought too but the one that Gargi killed was not me it was someone else!!!!

Disha: Come on.. we are going to take you home!!!!!!

Dhruv: No you guys must be living in peace and i dont want to disturb that!

Disha: I called you daddyji right.... i am not going to leave you until you come with us!

Sia: Daddy, she is right you have to come home with us... where are you going to stay? you cant be in this condition

Dhruv: I can see that my sons are very lucky to have to good wives like you!

Both of them smile but before they take him home they get him ready like cleaning him up etc.....

Finally they open the door.... and dhruv comes in he is behind Disha and Sia Sum cant see him

Sum: You guys are back so soon!! How was your shopping? (Holding a plate in her hand)

Disha: It was good... We bumped into someone while shopping!

Sum: Who????

Disha and Sia both move and Sum sees Dhruv and is shocked and she drops the plate on the ground.. and walks very very very slowly towards him......... and finally she reaches to him... she made it!!!

Dhruv: Sumitra????

Sum (crying) Cry Dhurv??????????

Disha and Sia are crying!

Dhruv: How have you been? (She is like speechless) I am sorry that i never came back to you!!!!!!!!

Sum: Bbbbbuuuuttttttt thaaaaaat  Dddddaaaaaaaayyy (stuttering But that day) Gargi....

Dhruv: That wasnt me who she shot... that was another man who was standing behind me.... When you turned around the other way you heard four gunshots... I moved before the bullet hit me and i ran off but when you saw the dead body you thought it was me and thought i was......

Sum puts her hand over his mouth....

Sum: Now i dont want anything else except you! You have finally come back to me after so many years..... i dont want to lose you again..........

Disha goes by the mandir and takes the sindoor

Disha: daddyji take it.....

Dhruv fills her maang and Sum is crying like hardcore and they both hug!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So everyone is crying....

Disha: Daddyji, your grandchildren.......... Dhruv and Khushi..... (Dhruv is touched)

Dhurv: Now i know who they are going to look like when they grow up!!!

Dhruv: By the way where is Dk and Ved??

Disha: They have gone to Goa to finalize a deal for their buisness.... they will be back tomorrow in the afternoon

Dhruv: what will they think after seeing me again???

Disha: They will be happy! Trust me!

Sia brings food out and everyone eats....

Dhruv: Disha... if you talk to Dk please dont tell him i am here let him find out tomorrow!

Disha: OKay! I wont!

Dhruv: I always told Dk that one day he will fall in love with a girl... and marry her one day.... But i didnt know he would marry such a beautiful girl like you! and Ved...

Disha: daddyji, Ved is such a little boy!!!! That is why Sia is going to set him straight!

Dhruv: That's my girl!!!

All laugh and stay up talking..... Disha and Sia go put the kids to sleep and they both go to sleep.... Dhruv and Sum are in the room and are just talking because neither of them can sleep!!!!!!!!!

Sum: W/o you my life is nothing!!!!!!!

Dhruv: what you mean? You have two good daughter in law's to take very good care of you!!!

Sum: Yes.. but when my husband isnt here our family is not complete!!!!

Dhruv: I am back now... now there is nothing to worry about

Both hug and go to sleep!!

Disha and Sia are singing aarti when Dhruv and Sum come out ready... and are joining them!!

Dhruv: How did my sons find these two cultured girls?

Disha: Why??

Dhruv: Because my son is very lucky to have you as his wife!!

The day passes by and Suddenly Dk and Ved come Dhruv is nervous like crazy and he goes into his room...

Dk: Disha!!!!

Disha: I am coming!! Why are you yelling?

Dk: Cuz i missed you!!!!!!! (he says it softly.)

Ved: Sia!!!!!!!

Sia: Are baba!! why are you yelling also??

Ved: Just because!!!

Sum: Oh so no body misses their mom everyone only cares about their wives not their moms! i see!!!!

Dk: No Ma i missed you more than Ved.. Ved didnt even think of you once....

Ved: Mom, he's lying!!!!!

All are laughing!!!

Dk: Ma, why do you have.... (He sees the Sindoor)

Disha: Uhh.. Dk..

Dk: Just a minute Disha... Ma......

Dhruv comes out of his

Dhruv: Dk???????????

Dk feels as if this some illusion..........

Okay i will cont.. later!!!

Angadzgirl IF-Rockerz

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wow. execllcent story. i can'y hold my breath. plz continue.


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