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hey this is getting more interesting day by day

u r doing an excellent job

waitin 4 ur next part

love KP

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i really like ur story. keep it up girlClapClapClap

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Part 12:

Sia is crying and crying because she found out that it was her uncle that killed her parents... Ved is trying really hard to control her Just then Sum and Disha walk in and are wondering what the heck happened?

Sum: Are, Sia Beta, what happened?

Sia: (runs towards Sum and hugs and cries) Mummyji!! CryCry

Sum: Please tell me what is the matter?

Disha: Please dont cry tell us what happened?

Ved tells them what happened!!

Sum: Okay.. enough... what ever happened has happened we must forget about our past and try to move forward... You still have one mother and she cares for you and loves you very much!!!!!!!!!

Disha: We are all with you!!

Dk walks in....

Dk: I have taken care of everything and it looks like that your Uncle will be in jail for a long time!!!!!!!!!!

Sia: Thank you so much!!!

Dk: There is no such things as thanks!!!! After all i did it for my sister-in-law!! (awwwEmbarrassed)

It's the middle of the night and Sia is tossing and turning and having bad dream about something happening to Ved cuz she is scared that something might happen to him and she gets up and she yells.....

Sia: VEDANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ved: What happened??? Are you okay???

Sia: I had a really bad dream!

Ved: Dont take anymore tension everything is over now!!!

She is all paranoid!

Ved: Come on go to sleep!! nothing is going to happen anymore.... You need rest....

Ved is about to lay down when Sia grabs his arm or something

Sia: Please sleep closer to me!!!!!!

Ved: Yeah sure!!!

He puts his arm around her and she finally goes to sleep!!!!!!!! After that she was fine and  Sum let her put a picture of her mom and dad on the wall and she put garland around them!!!

2 weeks later: Disha's Birthday

Today is Disha's Birthday.. She is very excite

Disha: Good Morning Dk....

Dk: Disha, 5 more mins...

Disha: No,  not today!!

Dk: Why wat's so special about today? Ouch

Disha is sad!

Disha: You dont remember what today is?

Dk: Oh yeah... we have a really important buisness party that we have to go to

Disha: We do?? Confused

Dk: Yeah i am meeting important people today!!

Disha: Oh!

Dk: What happened Disha are you okay?

Disha: Um... yeah i am fine...

Dk: Okay... Let me sleep for another couple of mins and i will wake up!!! I love you Disha!!!

Disha just smiles and gets up

Disha: (Talking to herself): I cant believe Dk forgot my birthday!!!!

She comes out and see's Ved having breakfast...

Disha: Good Morning Ved.. wow you are up early?

Ved: Yes i am where is Brother? He is usually the one here before me!!! Dish, did brother tell you anything about today??

Disha: Today??

Ved: Yes the business party!

Disha: Oh yea he did!

Ved: Well me and Sia are going to go out today since no one is going to be here today and Mom will probably just stay home!

Disha: (herself) Ved is suppose to be my bestest friend, @ least how could he forget my bday!! Cry

Phone rings and Sia picks it up

Sia: Hello!!

Aai: Hello?

Sia: Namaste Aunty, how are you?

Aai: I am fine Sia how are you?

Sia: I am good.. hold on i will give it to Bhabhi!

Sia: Bhabhi it's for you it's your Aai

DIsha to herself: Now i know Aai will not forget my bday!

Disha: Hello?

Aai: Hi disha how are you???

Disha: I am fine how are you?

Aai: Good... Hey listen what are you and Dk doing 2nite?

Disha: Dk has an important Buisness party we have to go so we are going there.. why?

Aai: I thought i invite guys for dinner??

Disha: Why? anything special?

Aai: No just because i havent seen you guys in a while!!

Disha is really sad she cant believe every1 forgot her birthday!!!!

Aai: Anyways i have to go.. i will talk to you later take care!


Its the evening time and Dk takes a quick shower before the party he comes out  w/ a towel wrapped around him and comes out She quickly wipes her tears and looks at the shirt she got out...

Dk: (Puts his arms around her): I love you Disha!!!

Disha makes him take his arms off of her...

Dk: What's wrong Disha?

Disha: Nothing!!

Dk: Then why did u make me let go?

Disha: Just because!

Dk: (Puts his arms again): Are you playing hard to get? You know i will never leave you alone!!!!!

Disha: Dk please.. hurry up and get ready!!

Dk: No, not before you tell me whats wrong?

Disha: (Yells Angry) I told you nothing is wrong!!!!!!!!!!

Dk is shocked...

Dk: Disha what has come over you? i have never seen you mad like this!

Disha: why are you asking me all these questions all of a sudden?

Dk is sadCry

Dk: Okay Fine SOrry i asked!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha: Now hurry up so we can leave to your so called buisness party! (She goes out the door and sits on the couch)

Dk: Come on lets go! (Takes his arm forward but Disha ignores him and Dk lost his mood)

Man she just left him hangin'

They both go in the car and start heading to the party and both of them are silent no one says anything to the other one... Disha is really sad and is about to cry and Dk is looking like his whole world has just fell apart......


They both arrive to the Party!

Dk: Please at least smile!

Disha: I will try

Dk: Look i dont know what has happened to you but we will discuss it when we get home but for now please dont do anything to embarass me 2nite!

Disha: Oh you dont have to worry about that ( in a nasty tone)

There are two doors which Dk is about to open but:

Dk: (Puts his arms out) Shall we???

Disha: (not in the mood but forces herself to put her arms around him)

Dk grabs the left handle and Disha grabs the right handle they both open the door @ the same time... her eyes are looking on the ground and when she looks up:


SURPRISE HAPPY BIRTHDAY DISHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha is surprised and starts cryingCryBig smileLOL

Dk: Happy birthday Disha!!!!!!!!

Everyone is there including Aai, Sum, Ved, Sia, etc....

Dk: What did you think? That i forgot about your bday! It was hard keeping a straight in front of you all day!

Disha: (Gives him a really tight hug) I am sorry for what i said!

Dk: Yes, i was a little sad but it's okay!!

Everyone is enjoying the party and they cut the cake Disha feeds Aai and Sum first then Dk.... Dk feeds her but he "Accidentally" puts it on her nose...

Disha: Dk!!!!!!!

All laugh!! Well everyone starts leaving and Disha, Ved, Sum, Dk, Sia, all arrive home.... Sia and Disha put the kids to sleep!

Sia: Goodnight Bhabhi!

Disha: Goodnight!

Dk is standing by the window... it's starts raining.. and is just thinking.. disha comes up behind him and hugs him

Disha: I am very sorry what everything i said and did!!

Dk: Disha you really hurt me today!!! How could you even think that the person whom i care about the most that i would forget her bday!

Disha is sad!

Disha: Dk, i said i am sorry! Do you wan tme to fall at your feet!

Dk: Well what ever happened happened!

Disha: Dk.. please dont be mad!! Okay if you dont forgive i will stay out in the rain all night!

Dk: Stop being so childish!!

Disha goes out and is fully drenched Disha looks up and Dk is staring at her and suddenly Disha Faints!

Dk: Disha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HE hurries down (remember he dont got that walking stick) gets all wet.. (wow sexyClapEmbarrassed)  and picks her up and takes her to the room
Dk: Disha!!! Disha!!! Get up!!! Disha!!!!!!!!!!

Dk is worried!

Dk: I was just joking you take things so seriously.... disha get up....

Disha opens her eyes and start laughing.

Disha: Got you!!!! (still laughing)

Dk: (Start laughing too) Okay so now we are even!!!

Disha: Yes!!

Dk is about to her kiss her but Disha gets off from the bed when Dk grabs her sari.. he starts unwrapping it slowly and pulls her towards her.. they are still wet... he kisses her both in the romantic mood the light dim... and you know the rest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Hope you enjoyed it!! I will continue tomorrow!

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Posted: 21 May 2005 at 10:10pm | IP Logged

awesome again

thanks

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Posted: 22 May 2005 at 1:38am | IP Logged

woowww guliiiii love how uu ended off rain sence excllent Clap

dooo continuee............Smile

Love Asian Princess

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Posted: 22 May 2005 at 4:04am | IP Logged
wow this is just spectacular plz keep on writing ur are a good writer Big smile

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Posted: 22 May 2005 at 5:54am | IP Logged
Big smileSmileUR STORY IS EXCELLENT PLZ CONTINUE WRITING!!!! CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT BIT GOD UR SO CREATIVE!WinkTongue

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PLEZZZZZZZ WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!Big smile

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