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Posted: 18 years ago

hey this is getting more interesting day by day

u r doing an excellent job

waitin 4 ur next part

love KP

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Posted: 18 years ago
i really like ur story. keep it up girlπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 12:

Sia is crying and crying because she found out that it was her uncle that killed her parents... Ved is trying really hard to control her Just then Sum and Disha walk in and are wondering what the heck happened?

Sum: Are, Sia Beta, what happened?

Sia: (runs towards Sum and hugs and cries) Mummyji!! 😭😭

Sum: Please tell me what is the matter?

Disha: Please dont cry tell us what happened?

Ved tells them what happened!!

Sum: Okay.. enough... what ever happened has happened we must forget about our past and try to move forward... You still have one mother and she cares for you and loves you very much!!!!!!!!!

Disha: We are all with you!!

Dk walks in....

Dk: I have taken care of everything and it looks like that your Uncle will be in jail for a long time!!!!!!!!!!

Sia: Thank you so much!!!

Dk: There is no such things as thanks!!!! After all i did it for my sister-in-law!! (awww😳)

It's the middle of the night and Sia is tossing and turning and having bad dream about something happening to Ved cuz she is scared that something might happen to him and she gets up and she yells.....

Sia: VEDANT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ved: What happened??? Are you okay???

Sia: I had a really bad dream!

Ved: Dont take anymore tension everything is over now!!!

She is all paranoid!

Ved: Come on go to sleep!! nothing is going to happen anymore.... You need rest....

Ved is about to lay down when Sia grabs his arm or something

Sia: Please sleep closer to me!!!!!!

Ved: Yeah sure!!!

He puts his arm around her and she finally goes to sleep!!!!!!!! After that she was fine and  Sum let her put a picture of her mom and dad on the wall and she put garland around them!!!

2 weeks later: Disha's Birthday

Today is Disha's Birthday.. She is very excite

Disha: Good Morning Dk....

Dk: Disha, 5 more mins...

Disha: No,  not today!!

Dk: Why wat's so special about today?

Disha is sad!

Disha: You dont remember what today is?

Dk: Oh yeah... we have a really important buisness party that we have to go to

Disha: We do?? πŸ˜•

Dk: Yeah i am meeting important people today!!

Disha: Oh!

Dk: What happened Disha are you okay?

Disha: Um... yeah i am fine...

Dk: Okay... Let me sleep for another couple of mins and i will wake up!!! I love you Disha!!!

Disha just smiles and gets up

Disha: (Talking to herself): I cant believe Dk forgot my birthday!!!!

She comes out and see's Ved having breakfast...

Disha: Good Morning Ved.. wow you are up early?

Ved: Yes i am where is Brother? He is usually the one here before me!!! Dish, did brother tell you anything about today??

Disha: Today??

Ved: Yes the business party!

Disha: Oh yea he did!

Ved: Well me and Sia are going to go out today since no one is going to be here today and Mom will probably just stay home!

Disha: (herself) Ved is suppose to be my bestest friend, @ least how could he forget my bday!! 😭

Phone rings and Sia picks it up

Sia: Hello!!

Aai: Hello?

Sia: Namaste Aunty, how are you?

Aai: I am fine Sia how are you?

Sia: I am good.. hold on i will give it to Bhabhi!

Sia: Bhabhi it's for you it's your Aai

DIsha to herself: Now i know Aai will not forget my bday!

Disha: Hello?

Aai: Hi disha how are you???

Disha: I am fine how are you?

Aai: Good... Hey listen what are you and Dk doing 2nite?

Disha: Dk has an important Buisness party we have to go so we are going there.. why?

Aai: I thought i invite guys for dinner??

Disha: Why? anything special?

Aai: No just because i havent seen you guys in a while!!

Disha is really sad she cant believe every1 forgot her birthday!!!!

Aai: Anyways i have to go.. i will talk to you later take care!


Its the evening time and Dk takes a quick shower before the party he comes out  w/ a towel wrapped around him and comes out She quickly wipes her tears and looks at the shirt she got out...

Dk: (Puts his arms around her): I love you Disha!!!

Disha makes him take his arms off of her...

Dk: What's wrong Disha?

Disha: Nothing!!

Dk: Then why did u make me let go?

Disha: Just because!

Dk: (Puts his arms again): Are you playing hard to get? You know i will never leave you alone!!!!!

Disha: Dk please.. hurry up and get ready!!

Dk: No, not before you tell me whats wrong?

Disha: (Yells 😑) I told you nothing is wrong!!!!!!!!!!

Dk is shocked...

Dk: Disha what has come over you? i have never seen you mad like this!

Disha: why are you asking me all these questions all of a sudden?

Dk is sad😭

Dk: Okay Fine SOrry i asked!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha: Now hurry up so we can leave to your so called buisness party! (She goes out the door and sits on the couch)

Dk: Come on lets go! (Takes his arm forward but Disha ignores him and Dk lost his mood)

Man she just left him hangin'

They both go in the car and start heading to the party and both of them are silent no one says anything to the other one... Disha is really sad and is about to cry and Dk is looking like his whole world has just fell apart......


They both arrive to the Party!

Dk: Please at least smile!

Disha: I will try

Dk: Look i dont know what has happened to you but we will discuss it when we get home but for now please dont do anything to embarass me 2nite!

Disha: Oh you dont have to worry about that ( in a nasty tone)

There are two doors which Dk is about to open but:

Dk: (Puts his arms out) Shall we???

Disha: (not in the mood but forces herself to put her arms around him)

Dk grabs the left handle and Disha grabs the right handle they both open the door @ the same time... her eyes are looking on the ground and when she looks up:


SURPRISE HAPPY BIRTHDAY DISHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha is surprised and starts cryingπŸ˜­πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜†

Dk: Happy birthday Disha!!!!!!!!

Everyone is there including Aai, Sum, Ved, Sia, etc....

Dk: What did you think? That i forgot about your bday! It was hard keeping a straight in front of you all day!

Disha: (Gives him a really tight hug) I am sorry for what i said!

Dk: Yes, i was a little sad but it's okay!!

Everyone is enjoying the party and they cut the cake Disha feeds Aai and Sum first then Dk.... Dk feeds her but he "Accidentally" puts it on her nose...

Disha: Dk!!!!!!!

All laugh!! Well everyone starts leaving and Disha, Ved, Sum, Dk, Sia, all arrive home.... Sia and Disha put the kids to sleep!

Sia: Goodnight Bhabhi!

Disha: Goodnight!

Dk is standing by the window... it's starts raining.. and is just thinking.. disha comes up behind him and hugs him

Disha: I am very sorry what everything i said and did!!

Dk: Disha you really hurt me today!!! How could you even think that the person whom i care about the most that i would forget her bday!

Disha is sad!

Disha: Dk, i said i am sorry! Do you wan tme to fall at your feet!

Dk: Well what ever happened happened!

Disha: Dk.. please dont be mad!! Okay if you dont forgive i will stay out in the rain all night!

Dk: Stop being so childish!!

Disha goes out and is fully drenched Disha looks up and Dk is staring at her and suddenly Disha Faints!

Dk: Disha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HE hurries down (remember he dont got that walking stick) gets all wet.. (wow sexyπŸ‘πŸ˜³)  and picks her up and takes her to the room
Dk: Disha!!! Disha!!! Get up!!! Disha!!!!!!!!!!

Dk is worried!

Dk: I was just joking you take things so seriously.... disha get up....

Disha opens her eyes and start laughing.

Disha: Got you!!!! (still laughing)

Dk: (Start laughing too) Okay so now we are even!!!

Disha: Yes!!

Dk is about to her kiss her but Disha gets off from the bed when Dk grabs her sari.. he starts unwrapping it slowly and pulls her towards her.. they are still wet... he kisses her both in the romantic mood the light dim... and you know the rest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Hope you enjoyed it!! I will continue tomorrow!

Asian Princess thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago

woowww guliiiii love how uu ended off rain sence excllent πŸ‘

dooo continuee............😊

Love Asian Princess

lucky-moon thumbnail
Posted: 18 years ago
wow this is just spectacular plz keep on writing ur are a good writer πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago
πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ŠUR STORY IS EXCELLENT PLZ CONTINUE WRITING!!!! CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT BIT GOD UR SO CREATIVE!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›
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Posted: 18 years ago
PLEZZZZZZZ WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 18 years ago
Keep up the good work! waiting for next part
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 13

Disha and Dk are in a very comfortable position and neither of them want to get up... Disha looks at the time and it's 9:00a.m.

Disha: Dk....!!!!!! It's 9.. now i have to get up you get up to!!

Dk: Disha! when are we gonna get a chance like this again?

Disha: We will but now i have to check on the kids and you have to get up...

Dk: Do you hear the kids? No rite? then come on!

Disha: Dk!!

Dk start kissing her on the neck

Disha: Dk! Stop it!! Let me go!😳

Dk: No! Now today nothing is going to work! i am not going to let go of you so easily!!!

Disha: Okay then....

She tickles the crap out of him and he is so busy laughing then she finally gets up..  takes a shower and comes out!

Sia has taken care of Dhruv and Khush, she has bathed them and fed them!

Disha: Why did you take the trouble? I am sorry.. i was uhh so tiredπŸ˜• when i woke up it was already 9!

Sia: I heard them so both of them were awake so i gave them a bath and fed them.. mummyji helped me!

Dk comes out and is ready and so does Ved... Dk mentions that both of them (him and ved) have to go to Goa to finalize some deal and they will be meeting some people... Ved agrees to it! They will be going for three days!

Sia packs Ved's stuff...

Sia: Here everything is packed!

Ved: I will miss you!!!!!

Sia: I wont! 😑

Ved: Why?

Sia: Just because!

Ved: Why?

Sia: Your leaving me for three days thats peace and quiet for me!!! πŸ˜†

Ved: What?

Sia: (laughing) i am just joking i will miss you lots!!!!!!!

(Both Hug)

Meanwhile, Disha is packing Dk's stuff.. she takes out some clothes and a picture falls out from the clothes.... She picks it up and it is a picture of Dk and Dhruv (His dad) She is smiling at it and thinking aww.. how cute!  she just leaves it there on the table!

Dk comes up Behind Disha:

Dk: Disha!!!! (She jumps)

Disha: Dk... how many times did i tell you not to come from behind like that!

Dk: i am sorry.. is everything ready?

Disha: Yes!! Be careful when you go over there.. take care of yourself and dont eat thing that will make you sick!!

Dk: Disha.. you worry to much we are only going for three days!

Disha: I know but when the both of you are together i cant really trust you guys! you might eat something bad and fall sick!

Dk: Listen.. when i am about to eat i will call you ok?

Both laugh!!!!

Dk and Ved leave and now they wont be back for three days!!!

Sia is wiping the kitchen floor

Sum: Are Sia, what are you doing? why are you taking the trouble to clean that.. the servants will do that!

Sia: it's okay how much will they do?

Sum: Why dont you go out w/ Disha? You are always working take time off and go do some shopping!!

Disha: Yes, mummyji is right.. how much work will you do we have to go shopping

Sia: We will.. just let me finish!!

Disha: No you wont.. (She calls the servant and he finishes it up)

Disha and Sia are out shopping! They are looking at things and buying clothes....

Meanwhile,  there is a guy.. whose back is turned  and we cant see his face... and is just walking around!

Disha: Sia.. isnt this sari nice for mummyji...

Sia: Yes, so is that one...

They buy like three or four sari's for Sum...... the mystery guy is still just walking around people are looking at him.. Disha and Sia dont notice him..... Disha takes some money and a little picture falls out of her wallet it is a picture of Her and Dk on their wedding day! Disha doesnt notice.. she pays the man for the sari's and both of them leave...  the man picks up the picture and looks at it ( we still dont see the face)

The man is following them.. Disha feels like someone is spying on them or something she turns around but doesnt see anybody...

Sia: Bhabhi what's wrong?

Disha: I dont know... i feel like we are being followed by someone!

Sia: There are so many people here its probably just your imagination...

Disha: Your probably right!

The man is still following them... Disha notices something this time....

Disha: (to sia) I think there is a man following us!

Sia: Where?

Disha: Behind me...

Sia: (She looks with the corner of her eye) I think your right...

Disha: Okay.. lets turn on three 1..........2.............3.................

They both turn around and there is man w/ a beard........

Disha: Yes how can i help you!!!!! why are you following us???

Man: You dropped this picture over there...

Disha: Thank you!!!!!!!!! now please......................................


Disha stops what he was saying because she thinks she saw this man before.......

Disha: I have you seen you somewhere before?

Man: Umm.. no you havent!!! 

He walks off and Disha follows him and Sia follows Disha....

Disha: wait... hold on...

She stops him and he turns around and faces her ............. Disha is so shocked that she cant believe who she is seeing because the man who is in front of her eyes is no stranger it is none other than Dhruv!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


I will cont. tonight!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago

getting more interesting. plz continue.

~sweta~