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i would  say kushi thats a nice name and u are right Druv was his dad name but u know what ur story is just mindblowingTongue 

Edited by lucky-moon - 19 May 2005 at 4:23am

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Posted: 19 May 2005 at 11:17am | IP Logged

I will update 2 nite my usa time and the Girls name will be Khushi!! thanx lucky-moon

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Clapman i like ur story, every time i read it i can picture on what is going on. Embarrassed. just image disha with a pregnant stomach so cute.Embarrassed

 

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Part 7 (Girl's name is Khushi.. thanx to Lucky-Moon)

One week later:

Everyone is sound asleep but it is only Dk who cant sleep because he cant stop thinking about Khushi so he sneaks out of the house  and goes to the hospital Meanwhile in the hospital khushi is crying non stop

Nurse: Please dont cry!!! Calm down (Dk's walks in)

Dk: Whats wrong nurse?

Nurse: I dont know but she she wont stop crying!

Dk: Can i hold her?

Nurse: She is very serious, i cant allow to hold her!

Dk: Please just once!

Nurse: You can go by her but you cant hold her

Dk: Thats fine! thanks nurse
(Comes towards the incubator  and touches her hands. khushi holds Dk's finger and in a instant she stops crying calms down and falls asleep)

Nurse: Wow! i am impressed... we couldnt get her to quiet down but you did it one sec!

Dk: After all she is my daughter

(Disha meanwhile turns and doesnt find dk there)

Disha: Dk?? Dk? Now where could he go? (Puts pillows around Dhruv so he wont fall and she goes to Sum's room maybe he is there but isnt... )

Sum hears the door close and comes out

Sum: Disha, whats wrong?

Disha: Mummyji, have you seen Dk? i cant find him anywhere!

Sum: where could he have gone?

Disha: I think i have an idea, can you please watch Dhruv i will be back!

Sum: (Confused) ok, i will watch him!

Disha goes to the hospital and finds Dk..

Disha: DK?

Dk: Disha, what are you doing here?

Disha: Thats what i am asking you? When i didnt see you i was worried!!

Dk: I couldnt stop thinking about Khushi so i came here! She was crying so much but now she's fine!!

Disha: But you should've told me i would've came too!

Dk: No Disha, you just got out of the hospital and you need to take rest!

Disha: I am fine! but sometimes i get worried about you!!

Dk: Nothings going to happen to me wen you are with me!Embarrassed

Nurse: Hello Disha, how are you?

Disha: I am fine!

Nurse: You know you a very lucky to have such a great husband and he is a good father too!

Disha: I know! Wink  (Doctor comes in)

Doctor: Oh you guys? What brings you here in the middle of the night? Look nothing is going to happen to your daughter, she is getting better but she will have to stay in the hospital for another couple of days! not until she can start breathing on her own and hopefully she will be just give her time!

Dk: Thank you so much for taking such good care of her!

Doctor: It's our duty!

Disha: Come Dk, lets go home!!

Dk: Yes, lets go home!

(Next morning Dk is standing by the window crying)

Disha: DK, your crying? Cry

Dk: I cant stop thinking about our khushi! I cant see her in that condition, all i want is for her to come home so we can be one happy family!

Disha: Dont worry she will come home very soon! you dont worry

Dk: how can i not worry when she is very critical she cant even breathe on her own!

Disha: She is getting better! the docors said that she will get better in a couple of days.

Dk: Couple of days for me seems like forever
 
(Disha puts her hand on his shoulder and he suddenly turns around and hugs her and cries even more.. which makes Disha cry)

Ved is taking care of Dhruv......

Ved: Isnt he the cutest thing?

Sum: Yes, he is!

Ved:  I know when i have kids i will be the greatest Dad in the world!

Sum: First we will find you the most prettiest girl!!

Disha: Yes mummyji, we will find him a girl!!!!

Ved: Ok, then you can get me married, you will choose my future wife!!

Disha: Ok now promise me that who ever i choose you will marry her?

Ved: I promise!!

Dk: What promises are being made here?

Disha: We are going to get Ved married to a nice girl!

Dk: What?? My little brother is getting married!

Ved: Yes!

1 month later:

After searching and searching for ved's wife to be.. Disha has examined  many girls and finds 1 girl who she likes....

Disha: Ved, what do you think of her?

Ved: Do you like her?

Disha: Yes! i like her a lot

Ved: I do too

Disha: Then good, we will talk to her family members!!

1 week later:

Disha, Dk, Sum, and Ved goes to the girl's house! she is a middle class girl, very sweet, innocent,  loveable. She is those girls whom anyone wants as a daughter-in-law

They talk and talk and the family agrees to marry their daughter  to Ved. Everyone is happy!

(Next the wedding.. but who do you guys want as the girl and what name should she have?)




Edited by guli444 - 19 May 2005 at 11:14pm

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exellecent job. plz continue. i can't hold my breath.


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Posted: 19 May 2005 at 9:54pm | IP Logged

maybe Dishas Lost Sister???

 

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Posted: 19 May 2005 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
my mistake.. in one line its suppose to be : We will find HIM a girl not her oops!Embarrassed

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Posted: 19 May 2005 at 11:33pm | IP Logged
Yeah she could be disha's long lost sis as disha's baba said disha had a sister who got lost in  the mela for her name it could be kiran Ur story is really good plz continue writing as there is no TD on the weekend everyone can read ur intresting stories!!!

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