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Mahnoor FF: New note [Page 70] (Page 9)

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Posted: 02 March 2013 at 10:39am | IP Logged
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Posted: 02 March 2013 at 11:10am | IP Logged
waaooo :p... that was one hot update elenor :D

starting from virat and manal's first night, it was hot plus u protrayed manal's feelings beautifully.. her uncomfortable behaviour towards virat and her inner turmoil was explained fuboulously... awsome

the next day was day virman's little banter in the bedroom was veryy intense yet subtle and light... it wass beautiful... loving mahnoor ff elenor keep it up :)

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Posted: 02 March 2013 at 11:11am | IP Logged
Hi Elenor,
I don't know how to describe my feelings in words. It was beyond my expectations, imagining Virat And Manvi playing Virat Akhter (Fawad Khan) and Manal. This is such a beautiful fusion as the original characters are not that bold as is needed in certain situations. Wink
Manal is a strong headed and confident girl. She is a fighter and knows her rights very well. While Virat at the moment is only concerned about his right over her as a husband.But he is trying and learning to share his life with the love of his life. They both don't know the depth of their relationship at the moment but I guess they will in the future.
Virat's family is a sweet one specially Jeevika. This family is different from her family.
Thanx for the PM and a great story.
(When are you planning to update TTOML?)

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Posted: 02 March 2013 at 11:24am | IP Logged
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wow this one is really interesting ya Smile
virat so much into love bt manvi still nt feeling the same 
virat with lots of attitude and manvi no less giving him competition Wink
pls can yu change manal into manvi we wud feel more familiar to it ...
its jst a request Smile
love ur writing its done with maturity and i jst love reading them Heart
thanx alott for the pm Smile



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Posted: 02 March 2013 at 11:25am | IP Logged
Beautiful update! Loved it to the core. The concept was great, as usual. Loved the way you portray their emotions and the way you describe everything, it makes me feel like as if I'm watching the update rather than reading it. Continue soon! :)
Marissa

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Posted: 02 March 2013 at 11:47am | IP Logged
I loved it! The story is amazing so far and will be for sure as your writing it :) 

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Posted: 02 March 2013 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
hello,im new here and i really liked ur story and the way u use there characters and to read something different like this is a treat to read, really loved and liked ur ss . please do continue soon it's really unique...loved virat's character and name manal...Smile

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Posted: 02 March 2013 at 4:02pm | IP Logged
Lovely Update Dear!...
Thanks for the pm..

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