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Res- again...
Sorry, I know I've reserved twice...
But my internet wasn't working for a few weeks :/
Will edit both soon :)

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brilliant update

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wonderfull as alwaysClap

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U r an absoloutely amazing writer
im really loving this story of urs
its very different n her name manal its jus really really nice n unique
im actually surprised he listened to her n sed that he is ready to wait until she is ready with it
i hope manal does be successful in changing her 'rakshas' husband then
thanx for the pm n i'll be waitin every weekend for ur updates Smile

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Posted: 02 March 2013 at 9:34am | IP Logged
Awee tis is so cute elena!
First u hav written ff om my fav show humsafar nd nw u rwriting on zindapi gulzar hai! I love it
i thnk u r also fawwad kha fan like me!
Bt what an amalgamation of my fav shows with virman

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Posted: 02 March 2013 at 9:46am | IP Logged
AWESOME

Edited by JESMY - 02 March 2013 at 9:48am

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Posted: 02 March 2013 at 10:07am | IP Logged
ohkay...so Mahnoor is so different...yes let me start from that...different...
 wat is peshvas??? i am from india and a hindu...i know abt shararas bt not peshvas...

secondly i am finding it "different" seeing virat this controlling...it just goes against everything i hav known abt virat...i get he is possessive and domineering bt he almost forced himself on his wife...
i guess i will wait to form any judgement considering this is an adaptation...

i am liking how maanvi or manal here has this fire in her...she loves her husband yet is fearless enough to hold her ground...which is commendable considering the setting seems to be of a typical patriarchal society... 

again the update was beautiful...you hav a beautiful and wonderful way with words...

so will wait till the next weekend...Smile

take care...Smile

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Posted: 02 March 2013 at 10:19am | IP Logged
Awesome Update...~! awesome description on the kind of person Virat is...he is possessive n like controlling or say things he wants his way...He loves her...but Manal wants to take things slow, (like the way u have pened her nervousness n  hesitance)...like that little family description perfectly shows the difference between her Maika and sasural...the over night change in the lifestyle n her mom's words...she is confused n taking in the present...towards the end got the glimpse of Impatient Virat...but like Manal even if he takes things in his own hands she wouldn't let that happen i guess...
 
Lovely Update...Thnks for the PM Elena...~!


Edited by Syed695 - 04 March 2013 at 1:36am

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