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Bhabani90 Senior Member
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Posted: 18 July 2013 at 4:23pm | IP Logged
After Ttoml i came across this story of urs. Just an amazing concept. I thnk its not just for manvi but every other girl passes thrug this phase of insecurity as its to difficuly to cmpltly blv sumone in this century. The best part i liked is manvi's urge to fulfil her dreams. Viren seemed way to a mysterious charat and virat is yet to open. So u rocked it again. Lots still to unfold nd waiting for dat. Update soon and pls pm if posbl.

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Posted: 23 July 2013 at 9:24am | IP Logged
Update pls... Pls update.

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Posted: 23 July 2013 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
Im sorry havent commented on the last two updates. college and Exams .. been busy
But Wow! .. i did not think i would come to like another story of yours as much as as i grew to love TTOML.i knew your works are always well thought-out and are distinctly different from a lot of other stuff we get to read in here.But this is just some really good writing.

coming to our story... It is really difficult to trust a guy who has been in more than one relationship for anyone.If i can speak for myself i wouldn't either.But to Manat who grew up watching her mom cry for her husband who abandoned her for another woman.Its obvious she has her walls up!
I can see how hard it is for her to actually give a chance to this guy that she has unexplainable attraction for.!
and we also have the guy who cant see or know where this resistance is coming from.
and so we have (im assuming that this is the case) the "opposites attract" theory working in their case as well.. 
Both know that they are attracted but they cant explain why.. 
im curious as to what you have planned for them next.
With you i cant really guess.. most of time im wrong anyways :P
im always up for secrets and drama.. 
cant wait.. 
oh and thank you for those pms even when i havent commented
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Posted: 24 July 2013 at 5:09am | IP Logged
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Posted: 30 July 2013 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
Thank you so much for the Q&A...really cleared up a few questions I had about the story! You're doing an amazing job! Can't wait for the next update!!! Also, any chance we will be getting a random OS from you anytime soon? lol Big smile

Edited by ndp102 - 30 July 2013 at 10:13pm

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 8:51am | IP Logged

 

I wanted another post to thank you for the brilliant response to Mahnoor. I am so glad that you're liking the story and your wonderful comments mean a lot! Thanks to you, this story got story of the week a few weeks back so thank you again! Big smile



Edited by ElenaElenor - 04 August 2013 at 9:30am

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Posted: 04 August 2013 at 9:21am | IP Logged
update was amazing elena
i am loving the way story is progressing i mean instead of being mad at her a bit virat is giving her as much space as a man can give...i loved his gesture if trying to make her comfortable so finally manvi revealed her fear to him atleast to some extent and she agreed to give them a chance made me relieved lol the last part was cute ahahaha what has she agreed for lol and ya the banner is cute too i love it..
lots of love Heart


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