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sandhyasn

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Posted: 15 February 2013 at 8:26am | IP Logged

Hello friends today Im going to start an FF: Anjana. I don't know how long it go. According to likes and comments I will continue this FF. your support is needed. As Im not a writer so its difficult to explain the moments . Im going to write in Hindi and English both. You will find mistakes in my writing but, at least u understands the scene.

INDEX

PART 1
 
PART 2
 
PART 3
 
PART 4
 
PART 5
 
PART 6
 
PART 7
 
PART 8
 
PART 9
 
 
PART 11
 
PART 12
 
PART 13
 
PART 14
 
PART 15
 
PART 16
 
PART 17
 
PART 18
 
PART 19
 
PART 20
 
PART 21
 
PART 22
 
PART 23
 
PART 24
 
 
 
 
Character sketch

Ram Kapoor:- Arrogant, short tempered and very strict. He don't believe in love. His first love is his work.

Priya Sharma:-cute, simple and very well educated. Believes in love. She give utmost importance to his family. Father sudhir, mother shipra and little sister Ayesha.

Rajat:- Priya's childhood friend living in same colony.

Vikram,neha character is same as in BALH.

Part-1

Scene1

Sham ke 6 baje, ram vikram ka intezaar coffee day mein kar raha tha. Vikram traffic mein fasa hua hai. Tabhi uski nazar side wale table mein jata hai. Wahan bhi ek ladki kisi ka intezaar kar rahi thi, Ram man hi man sochtha hai shayad uske dosth bhi traffic mein fasa hua honge. Kuch der baad Ram ,vikram ko phone karta hai.

Ram: Vikram kahan hai tu,kabse intezaar kar raha hoon

Vikram: bas 5 min mein pahuchta hoon

After 5 min, Vikram coffee day par pahuchta hai, at the same time uss ladki ke dosth bhi aa jate hai.

.Kuch der baad ladki apne dosth ke saat chali jati hai. Ram ye sab notice kar raha tha.Vikram bhi Ram ko notice karta hai.

Vikram: kya hua Ram,jabse aaya hoon tabse mein dekh raha hoon tu kisi aur duniya mein hai

Ram: kya matlab?

Vikram: baar baar uss ladki ko dekhe ja raha hai, kuch kuch ho raha hai kya

Ram: tu pagal ho gaya hai kya, mere tarah woh bhi intezaar kar rahi thi,isliye mera dhyan gaya

Vikram: Chalo job hi ho, tu kisi ki taraf dekha toh sahi

Ram is not interested to tell anything.

Kuch der baad Ram aur Vikram bhi chale jate hai.

Scene 2

It was 6 o'clock in the morning. Waise toh Ram itne jaldi uttha nahi hai, par aaj morning walk par park mein aaya hai. Kuch log waha yoga kar rahe the, Ram ki nazar uss yoga karne walo pe jata hai, tabhi uski nazar uss ladki par jati hai jise usne kal coffee shop par dekha tha. Iss baar woh apne papa ke saat aayi thi.Ram thodi der tak usse dekthe rehta hai aur wahan se chala jata hai.

Ram office mein Vikram ka intezaar karta hai aur jaise hi woh aata hai usse subha ki sari baat batata hai.

Vikram ,Ram ka excitement dekhta hai, aur sochta hai jarur koi baat hai, lekin who chup rehta hai.

Scene 3

It was raining in this evening. Ram office se kaam karke wapas lout raha tha, thabhi apni gadi woh park ke pass kadi karta hai, woh kidki se bahar dekta hai, barish ki wajah se usse thik se dikayi nahi deta hai, phir bhi who dekhne ki koshish karta hai, ek ladki barish mein jhum rahi thi aur saat mein bachhe bhi the unke saat woh khel rahi thi, woh bahut sundar lag rahi thi,uske bhege bhege hott uske gile baal, sabi uski sundartha ke char chand laga rahe the.Ram usse dekhte rehta hai with mouth wide open. Ye wahi ladki thi jise usne pehle coffee shop mein aur baad mein subah park mein dekha tha. Ram thodi der baad wahan se chala jata hai

Ram apne room mein baith ye sochta hai, mein ess ladki ko baar baar kyon dekhta hoon, kyon woh baar baar mere samne aati hai.Ram jyada sochta nahi aur sone chale jata hai.

Scene 4

Ram roz ki tarah apne office mein jar aha tha. Uski gadi signal par kadi ti, tabhi side mein ek bike wala aata hai,Ram usse dektha hai, tab uss bike mein woh ladki ko dekhta hai,woh bike wale ke piche baiti hui thi. Ram uss ladke ko nahi dekh pata becoz he is wearing helmet. Signal green hota hai aur dono apne raste chale jate hai.

Well, kya lagta hai kya Ram uss ladki se milenga. Who ladki kyon hai. Will be updated in next part.

Please let me know wheather u want me to continue. Ur comments and suggestion help me to write.

 

 



Edited by sandhyasn - 08 June 2013 at 10:12am

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Nice update...continue soon...bhai wo ladki priya ji hai to un dono ko to milna hi hai...right Wink

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good start ...

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nyc start..intresting pls cntinue soon

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Nice start. Like it.

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nice begining.. continue soon

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Loved it..good going
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