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yay... finally 3rd page... m soo happy... i got good response for the prologue... so as promised, part 1 on page 3...

part 1

…. He was gone… he was dead…


Sameer: ab mujhse nahin dekha jaata shree…… she is so broken……kyun hua aisa???? (he breaks down)Cry


Shree who had never seen this side of his chief was moved.he went to him and placed a soothing hand on his shoulder.

Shree: sir, jo hona tha wo hochuka. We cant change the past. But atleast we can make her future better. She cant stay in this moment forever.nahin to……

Sameer(wiping his tears): yeah shree… I know. I lost my best friend. But she lost her love. Her fianc. Her pain is lot more than mine…. I understand… i will stay strong for her. We need to stay strong...

Chotu: sir, uss area ke aaspaas sabhi ilakhon mein humare logon ne khoj kardi hai… neither he, nor his body found. Uss din se nadi ka paani tez bhi nahin tha ki body beh jaaye… in sab se to yahin lagta hai ki………ConfusedDisapprove

Sameer: ki wo mar chukka hai(he closes his eyes). We need to speak to doctor. Otherwise we wont be able to control her...

Shree: yeah sir...



It was that dreadful day 3 weeks ago, when ETF had a case to be solved undercover. Arjun being Arjun, urged to go alone in disguise... no one agreed… esp aisha. She knew this was very difficult job. The case involved terrorists, sikander being at their back, case was highly complicated. those ruthless vile creatures mercilessly killed thousands…. After lots of arguments and discussions, Arjun convinced them. Yes of course his love too urged to go with him, but he refused…


He went all alone, clad in a sherwani,Tongue fitted with microphones and minute cameras... he had his gun well hidden from view.


It was a huge house beside the river, all set for the poly of the terrorists...they had arranged a lavish marriage party, calling many eminent people…large number of people…


Arjun was succeeded in sending as much data as he could to his team... during his work Aisha had called him.

Aisha: Arjun, app theek to hai na...mujhe bohot ghabrahat ho rahi hai... app please jaldi aajayiye...

Arjun: jaan, don't worry... main bilkul theek hun... yahan kaam khatam hone hi wala hai... but I want something when I come back... Big smile


Arjun(in a husky, complete romantic, flirty voice): you so very well know it dear... I want my sugar syrup..Wink.

Aisha: ARRRJUNN...(blushing heavily)BlushingBlushingBlushing... acha theek hai... aap aise keh raheho maano If I say no you never have it... bus aap jaldi aa jao...

Arjun: muuuaaahh... mera intezaar karna Aisha... I love you... aaj, kal, aur hamesha...SmileBig smileEmbarrassed


Then she heard *BOOM* a blast followed by loud crash and scream of Arjun himself…




ankita, her friend and sameer's gf, immediately rushed to her and hugged her tightly... she started consoling her...Cry

aisha: pata hai ankita, kitna bura sapna tha... o God... i dont believe it... i felt it soo real... pata hai arjun uss blast mein mujhe hamesha ke liye chod ke chale gaye... thank God it was just a bad dream... bdw sir, arjun waapas kab aa rahe hai... itne din hogaye na... ab tak to unhe aa jaana chahiye tha right... aap kuch bolte kyun nahin???

ankita: aisha ye sapna nahin haqeeqat hai.. wo jaa chuke hai...

aisha: i dont believe you anks... i ll call him now. he will pick it up see. he will be back to me.

she gets down from her bed and moves towards the table where her mobile was kept.

ankita: aisha ruko...

when she does not listen, ankita grabs her wrist, spins her round and slaps her hard against her cheeks.

ankita: KITNI BAAR KAHE KI WO MAR CHUKA HAI... TUM SAMAJHTI KYUN NAHIN HO??? HE IS DEAD AND GONE. YOUR ARJUN IS DEAD AISHA HE WILL NOT TAKE YOUR CALLS OR COME BACK...(shaking stunned aisha) UNDERSTAND IT AISHA... you cant be like this... it will hurt him as welll... do you want to hurt him? his soul??your love???Cry

tears were streaming down everybody's eyes...CryCry

aisha fell on ground and cried her heart out that night... CryCryCryCryCryCryCryCryCry

to be continued...

please read, like and do COMMENT... jo bhi story like karta hai agar wo chahe ek word bhi comment karde to mujhe accha lagega...

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Posted: 17 February 2013 at 3:32am | IP Logged
Pari dear
i loved it
awazing concept
pls jaldi update krna..
u r a fab writer..!




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Posted: 17 February 2013 at 3:33am | IP Logged
Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry!!!!! poor ayesha!!!!!

waise kaha hai hamari hero!!! Wink Wink Wink Wink Wink!!!

update soonn!!

and pls send PM nxt time u update!!!! Smile Smile Smile




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Posted: 17 February 2013 at 3:33am | IP Logged
aww poor ayesha.. 
quite emotional. 
awesome update.
continue soon .


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awesome amazing felt bad for aisha hope arjun jaldi aye..




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Arjunnn CryCry

come back for Aisha...Hug.Hug

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