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princess_pari Goldie

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Posted: 03 March 2013 at 5:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ankita2804

Oye... Aise dhamki q deti h... Pg 11 se pashle nai

Loved it... Poor aisha...
Omg... Wats d story wid raichands... Damn excited...

I was very very sad today... But after reading this am not at all sad nw... Thnx fr making me happy ... :-) :-)

lol :D LOL
phir kya karoon di... views to dekho story ke...
itne saare hai but zyada log comment hi nahin karte :P
socha ki dhamki bhi ek baar deke dekhte hai... ;)

aur raichands ka to bohut jald pata chalega ;)jatni jaldi hoga i ll update... clg ki wajah se i am nat able to write more often a day...Cry

yas23 Goldie

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Posted: 05 March 2013 at 3:34am | IP Logged
continue soon
kanishika Senior Member

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Posted: 05 March 2013 at 2:54pm | IP Logged
Nice...waiting for Arjun...
princess_pari Goldie

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Posted: 07 March 2013 at 8:03am | IP Logged
back with part 5...before that thanks all who have liked and commented for this story...
i may not be able to reply to all, but if time permits i ll definitely do...

here i go...



"mamma... m going to  office... I ll be late don't stay up for me..."

"beta atleast have something and go... you are not well..."

He held his mom's shoulder and kissed her cheeks.

"mamma...i am perfectly fine.. what ever had happened, it was because I am not yet ready for marriage. But see I am perfectly fine now... and pakka I ll have something in office..."

Suddenly a boy who was about 22 came down the stairs...

"bhai... bhai wait... please drop me to college... m late..."

"not again jai..."

"and mr. paarth me too..."came a sweet voice...

"o no... riya not you too..."

"papa... main kaisi looking???"

She came running to him with her arms stretched.

Paarth lifted her in his arms, threw her in the air and caught her back. Whole house was filled with pari's sweet tinkling laughter.

"mera baby always beautiful...muahhh"

"paarth, you are already late... come and have your breakfast..."

"I know mamma ki ye sab mujhe bina khaye ghar se jaane na dene ke liye... fine.. aap jite main haara... khush...?"



They all went towards the dining table.



It was almost a week sameer was married. He was in shimla with ankita enjoying his honeymoon. Aisha was in charge of ETF till he was back.


Shree: chotu, ye dekh... this is the 3rd year mysterious man has been awarded as best businessman...

Chotu: mysterious man??? Ye kaun hai...?

Shree: Mr. Paarth raichand. Raichand group of industries ka CEO. London mein rehte hai...

Inhe mysterious man kaha jaata hai cos no one has seen his face till today. Not a single photo, not seen in any parties no interviews... even his awards are collected by his brother Abhay o Jai.. pata nahin aisa kya hai uss insaan ka... media ke saamne aata hi nahin hai banda... na internet mein uske baare main hai nahi koi aur source. No pics at all...

Aisha: shree, tum aaj sab kuch chod kar unke peeche kyun pade ho?? Anyways aaj koi case nahin hai to mil ke paperwork khatam karte hai...

Shree: oki Aisha...

He smiled at her.


After some time Aisha went to arjun's cabin.

No one had even dared to occupy that cabin. Even seniors had hesitated to use this very cabin. it was afterall his cabin... the cabin of supercop ACP Arjun Suryakant Raute... It had his memories... their memories... memories of love, memories of friendship, memories of brotherly love, sisterly hugs...


Those were so memorable days in her life after she joined ETF.

He was the most sadu, akdu and khadoos person she had ever come across. She hated him for failing her mission for which she worked hard for 8 long months... but she failed her resolve of staying away from him... she had fallen head over heels for him. she stood as his strength all the way for sikender's hunt. They were about to grab him ki...

Arjun left her all his memories...just in a shadow of his love... his warmth...

All her dreams had shattered that day...

Her dreams of having her love with her...having her own family...her own kids... she knew the value of a family... only an orphan can know that... just like him... just like her...

She touched each and every thing in his cabin... everyday she went to the cabin, dusted it, kept the room impeccable...

The chaiwala who would bring his cutting chai had kept his glass on the table where he regularly kept hot cutting chai...

Now the glass gloriously sat on the table, in front of his photograph with her...

She gently caressed his photograph removing the imaginary dust... a tear escaped from her eye which she hastily wiped.

No she would not cry. He never wanted to see a tear in her eyes... he could not tolerate that, no matter what...

She then slowly moved to his chair, the same same chair where he would sit and check files.the same chair where he sat and screamed roshni's name...

She there saw his black marker which he would swirl in his hands... that was a sign to all that he was in his thinking zone...

She chuckled at the memories... yes it was her who dared to say these things in front of him and yet survived his wrath... how could not she???! After all she ruled his heart...


She knew... he was still not in peace. How could he??? Sikander was still alive... how could his soul rest in peace when that devil's incarnation was alive???

How could she rest in peace until she punished that devil??? The very devil who destroyed soo many lives?soo many worlds??? Her arjun's world... her world...

She had a huge task ahead...most crucial one...

to be continued...

please do like and comment

more comments, more faster the updateSmileSmileSmile

i wont give page limitations... but hope you all ll fill the pages ahead...

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kunchu IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 March 2013 at 8:11am | IP Logged
hai dear!!
Parth is becoming more mysterious now!!!
pls show his face.
nice update, esp Aisha's thought...
continue soon

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princess_pari Goldie

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Posted: 07 March 2013 at 8:13am | IP Logged
Originally posted by kunchu

hai dear!!
Parth is becoming more mysterious now!!!
pls show his face.
nice update, esp Aisha's thought...
continue soon

bohut jald di...

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alee001 Goldie

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Posted: 07 March 2013 at 8:27am | IP Logged
feeling bad for aishaaa Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry Cry!!!

areyyy reveal d mystry man's face!!!! LOL LOL LOL LOL!!

update soon!!!
wildire IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 March 2013 at 8:45am | IP Logged
U my girl, have made my vision blurry with the tears streaming down my face.

I read the entire story in one go...!!!!

OMG!!! So painful and yet so beautiful...!!

U are greedy for the pages and I m greedy for the next update.

And mind u... My greediness is way more higher than urs...!!1

Please update soon...!!!

I cant comment properly now.. I m being swayed b emotions now..!!

Seriously my heart is aching...!!!

So dont mind my not commenting much on ur writing... Understand my silence!!!

And let me show U my greediness!!!Wink

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