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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 6:39am | IP Logged
hey everyone...Smile
i am back with a story which suddenly popped in my messy little brain...
its a little piece of crap i have written... i dont know how it is, it will be you people who will judge it...
i ll continue if and only if i get lots and lots of likes and comments...
i welcome rotten tomato, phate hue joote and sandles also... but do let me know how it is...


APARICHIT'

 prologue

All were assembled at aisha's house. She was sick...

Aisha: he cant do this to me... he will definitely come back...

Sameer: Aisha, please sambalo khud ko...uss blast mein uska bachna naa mumkin hai...

Aisha: NO... it cant be... he had promised me that he would be back... unhone mujhse waada kiya tha aur wo kabhi apna waada nahin todte... (mumbles) he will be back... I know he will be back...

Shree: Aisha it has been 3 weeks, still we got no trace of his. We have retrived his gun, his sun glares, his watch, pieces of his sherwani and imp., his blood traces... that was a severe blast...usme wo hum sabko chod ke jaa chuke hai... he left you Aisha.. this is true that he is...

 

*slap*

Aisha: don't you dare shree... Don't you dare say he is dead. He is very much alive... see my heart is beating...that means he is alive' he will come back to me... I know he will be back...(she was going hysterical and difficult to be managed)

 

Sameer signaled the nurse to put her in sedatives.

She slowly drifted into sleep.

Sameer, shree, chotu could not see her in pain. she was in shock, she could not digest that he left her... He was gone... he was dead...


how is it... crap piece right...


index:

cs- pg 8

part 1: pg 3

part 2: pg 4

part 3: pg 6

part 4: pg 8
part 5: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3437411&TPN=10
PART 6:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3437411&TPN=14&#79350237

part 7:  http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3437411&TPN=16&#80809523


Edited by princess_pari - 16 April 2013 at 11:47am

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 6:47am | IP Logged
wow!!!! nice!!!!!!

so it s arisha stry!!!

wat happened to arjun!!!

update soonn!!

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 6:52am | IP Logged
arisha love story

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 7:45am | IP Logged
luvd it continue soon..
Luv arisha..

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 9:32am | IP Logged
Crap? Not at all..u have to continue it pls..where is arjun?toh theek toh hai naCry
pls Update sn darling..me waitingDay Dreaming
its awesome..do pm me..when u update itCry
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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 11:32am | IP Logged
nice start..
continue soon
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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
i have my next part ready... but i will be bit greedy now. i ll update only when i get sufficient  likes and comments. i promise, next part will be in page 3 o 4... 

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 1:31pm | IP Logged
Finally.
Mujhe thora akal aya.
I am in love with Arisha pair,now.
Kise crap keh rahi ho?????
Just love this concept, a lot.
Ekdum unique hai.
Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz continue it.

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