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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 2:53am | IP Logged
loved this epi ..
 taani is soo funny here, love that , n shaani LOLLOL... poor swayam is gonna be trapped in between these two girlsLOLLOL...
 precap seems more interesting...rey begins to realize his loveWink

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thank u so much all of u for loving this ff...

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 12:55pm | IP Logged
Dips.. loved it...
The way Taani talked with Sharon.. it was hillarious... Then.. lol... Swayam bhi... Taani can dance.. wow.. gr8.. uske baad wala.. Taani Rey ke room me Kidhki se.. height hai man.. weirdnesss ki.. Loved it.. falshback sequence r awesome.. update soon!! p m me!! Wink

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god!!di...story is damn intrsting!!!plzz plzz plzz cobtinue...n update soon di..

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sry 4 d late comment di...bt its more den awesome
n shani fight...plz plz plz update soon n thanx 4 d pmSmile

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chapter 5:

Taani leaves...

rey(talking to himself):ajeeb larhki h...(smiles)larhkiyon vala to kuchh h hie nahi...bs larhkiyon jaisei cute sei smile h...pr...vo mujhe kehne kya aayi thi...maine to suna hie nahi...ab kya...

And he goes to bed...

Next morning:

taani was waiting for sharon to come and she was hiding behind a pillar...

Sharon comes...and taani starts moving towards her...

rey n swaya were waiting for sharon so they were there too...

taani knowingly clashes with sharon

taa:auchh!!

Sh:excuse me!!

taa: achha!!excuse me kie bachchi...lagta h uss din ka mera bhashan bahut chhota tha iss liye aaj phir mujhse panga lene aa gayi...

sh:what r u talking about...and listen u ...

taa:achha...ab to tu dekh bachhu...and she called out for swayam...bhai...dekho...aap jodhpur me jaise gandi girls ko datte the isse bhi daato ye mujhse larhai kr rahi h ...

sw:taani...mujhe kyun beech me laa ri ho ...tu dono ka maamla h tum hie nipatlo...

Taani gave rey a look indicating kie uske plan ke hisaab se ab vo sharon kie side le...but rey ne to last night taani ki baatein suni hie nahi thi to usne socha kie rey ko taani kie side leni h ...

Rey: ya sharon it was ur fault...u should apologise...(yr ye taani mujhse kya kya krvayegi)

sh:rey tum bhi!

Sharon was all quite n she was about to apologise when swayam steped in the conversation...

sw:nahi taani...maine tumhein dekha tha tum dekh kr nahi chal ri thi...

taa:bhai!!!aap...

Rey:swayam kya keh raha h yr tu...

N taarey n swaron fight chalti rahi...
and then finally taani said

taa:okay sab meri galti thi...ye ek plan tha...main kal iss Mr.famous guy ko bhi to bataya tha...according to the plan bhai ko meri side leni thi aur ye Mr.famous guy ...inhein sharon kie...aur mujhe laga agar sharon bhai ko like krti h to vo yahaan se roti hui jaati aur phirr bhai unhein manane jaate...but yahaan to ulta ho gaya...bhai ne to apni behen ko chhorhkr apne love ka hie sath diya...

And taani leaves and swaron llhh...

rey stood smiling ...

Taani full to mood me kie vo rey ko sunayegi...aur vo rey ko FE me bulati h ...

Fire exit:

rey:haan bolo...tumne bulaya?

taa:u...mera plan kharaab kr diya...

rey:kya!! Balki aur bhi achha gaya tumhara plan...sharon aur swayam ek doosre ko itni der tk bs dekhe hie jaa rahe the maano aankho hie aankho me baate kr rahe ho...

taa:sachchi...

rey:muchchi...

taa:to theek h ab baari h plan two execute krne kie...

rey:ek aur...abhi aur kya bacha h ?

taa:m plans pr plans execute karungi jab tk bhai aur sharon ek couple nahi ban jaate...maine apne do frndz ko bulaya h ...Aashi aur shubh...

Rey:ye shubh kaun h ...

taa: mere boyfriend ka barha bhai...

rey:tumhara bf h ?...ye swayam ko pata h (feeling jealous)

taa: nahi ...aur unhein batana bhi mat...

rey:(in his mind) ab to zaroor bataunga...aakhir koi meri taani ko...wait meri?...air mujhe aisa kyun laga kie kisi ne mere heart pr ek sharp object se vaar kiya jab usne mujhe apne bf ke baare me bataya...

taa:kahaan kho gaye?

rey:nahi kuchh bhi to nahi...vaise tumhaare bf ka kya naam h ?...

taa:sanjay...mai usse pyaar se sanju bulati hu

And then suddenly taani ka ph. Baja...and it showed sanju calling...rey read it and was feeling like to snach her phone and throw it so hard kie vo tut jaye aur taani sanju se baat na kr paaye...

ta:hello

Sanju:hey...

taa:hie shona...how r u baby...

Rey couldn't hear the voice from the other side of the phone...

rey:usse baby,shona,...aur mujhe...Mr.famous guy...huh...usse itne pyaar se baat kr rahi h ...humaari taraf bhi dekhti na to do din me brk up ho jata...

after that rey leave the FE...and taani keeps talking to sanju...

Rey saw swayam...and he plans to tell him about taani

rey:but taani hurt ho jayegi ...nahi...vo kisi aur date kr rahi h ...to uske bhai ko pata hona chahiye...vaise...m ye apne aap ko convince krne ke liye keh raha hu ...sach to ye h kie m usse kisi aur ke saath nahi dekh sakta...

sw:hey dude...

rey:yrr mujhe tujhse kuchh important baat krni h ...

sw:haan bol na...

rey:yrr teri behen...taani vo kisi...kisi sanjay ke sath relationship me h ...aur vo jodhpur me rehta h ...

sw:u mean sanju ke saath

rey:haan

sw:lol...hahahahaha...vo tujhe pakka budhhu bana ri hogi aisa ho hie nahi sakta...

rey :nahi maine abhi usse ph. Pr baat krte hue suna h

sw:dude tujhe pata bhi h sanju h kon

rey:ek larhka? Jo taanika bf h ?

Sw:vo ek 8 saal ka chhota bachcha h ...jo taani ke best friend shubh ka bhai h ...tu bhi na...

rey(in his mind):thank god...rey i think its high time tujhe ye accept kr lena chahiye ke tu taani ke liye kuchh bhi kr sakta h ...aur ...aur tu...tu usse pyaar krne laga h ...

Meanwhile aashi n shubh arive at the college...

taani saw them ...and hugged them and gave shubh a tight hug...rey was there too...and he was so jealous of shubh...

taa:aashi...apna usual wala kaam kario okay...bs sharon aur bhai ko dur rakh

rey:pr ye kaise kaam karega?

shu:hey dude tum kaun ho?

Rey:m..

Before he could say anything taani introduced him...

taa: ye Mr.famous guy h ...The reyansh singhania...thorhe akrhu h but ye hie mujhe sabse pehle college me mile the...and he is really sweet...

aashi:but m sharon ko swayam se dooor types kyun rakhu?

taa:(oh teri isse poori baat nahi bata sakti) vo kya h na sharon bhai ko like krti h ...

at this rey looked at taani in a surprising way..

taa:aur bhai sharon ko pasand nahi krte ...pr sharon bahut beaugiful h agar tune aisa nahi kiya na to tera rasta clear cut kr degi vo...

subh:(haan aur rey mera...mujhe bhi kuchh krna hoga)okay then rey tum aashi ko plan samjhao...n taani tu mere saath aa tujhse to bahut baatein krni h ...

rey:pr...

but shubh rey ko chup kara deta h ...

taa: pr m kyun aaun tere saath ...aur ashi rey ko nahi janti vo uncomfertable feel karegi and vaise bhi meri aur rey kie claxs h hume jana h ...bye...and vo rey ko kheenchti hui lekr chali jaati h...


In corridors

rey: taani humaari koi class nahi h

taa:haan...vo m ..

rey pulls her into a dark room and pinns her to the wall...

rey:shh!! Tumhe kuchh batane kie zarurat nahi h ma jaanta hu tum mere sath rehna chahti ho...

taa:nahi...nahi to...aisa aapse kisne kahaan...

rey:to tuhaare jitne bhi plans h vo tum heha ko kyun nahi batati ...mujhe hie kyun...raat ko mere ghar ana,mujhe call krna,akele me milne ke liye bulana...

taa: vo sab issliye kyunki aap bhai ke frnd ho aur aap sharon aur swayam ki baat ek gossip ki tarah sabko nahi bataoge...

rey comes more close to him...

rey:sach me yahi baat h ...

taani's heart beats turning to get faster...

taa:haa...yahi baat h ...looking here and there...

rey slides his hand on her waist...taani closes her eyes...and she can feel that rey is bringing his lips closer to her ...and she spoke out...

taa: achha theek h m maanti hu ye baat nahi h ...shayad koi aur baat h ...

rey:shayad...

taa:pata nhi but i like being with u ...and dance...and ...

rey:and my touch makes u experience butterflies in stomach...right?

taani was all blushing and thats when rey bent down on his knees and held her hand and said...

rey:i love u taani...and i will love u till 32 december...kya tum bhi mujhse pyaar krti ho?

taa:nahi...aap sirf mujhe 32 december tk pyaar karenge yaani new year's eve tak bas...aur phir kya?

rey:aree budhu 32 december kab ata h .??

still on his kness

rey:ab jaldi jwaab do pleaseee...mere pair(foot) dukh raha h ...

taa:rey...i love u too...

hearing this rey stood and jumped in happiness..

taa: pr

rey:pr kya?

taa: pr aapko mujhpr hamesha trust krna hoga...

rey:taani...i love u means ...tumhaare saath jab bhi hota hu...tu kuchh bhi uss tareeke se nahi hota jaisa m chahta hu, bilkul maza nahi ata,pr phirr bhi tumhaare saath rehne ka man krta h...and i will always trust u ...taaret hugged each other...


Epi ends
precap:
shubh heard taarey confess their love...
taani's parents come to mumbai,
rose day party...

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wooow finally  taarey are together  and swaron where also cute and  rey ko plan yaad nahi raha LOL poor guy

cant wait for the precape plzzz update soon


Edited by Tahira-2013 - 02 March 2013 at 11:41am

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aww...really cute update...esp the sanju part...culdnt stop laughing...and dey finally confessed...it was so cutee <3

precap sounds so exciting...cant wait for the next update =)

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