Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee



Torn In Between Completed Responses PG62 24TH JULY

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 2:42am | IP Logged

Formerly known as Tum sirf aur sirf mere ho! 
Has been renamed.  Smile


"Leave me" she whimpered as he wrapped his arm around her stomach tightly from behind, squeezing her abdomen, digging his fingers into her skin.

His other hand laced into her hair pulling it back. "Why did you do it Geet?" He bit out as he pressed his face against her neck, inhaling her familiar fragrance.

"Let me go" she cried trying to free herself from his grip, she clawed at his fingers and arm.

He turned her in a swift, wrapping one arm around her then pulling her tight towards his body whilst the other cupped her nape hard.

"Why?" he grit out.

"I hate you!" she screamed into his face. 

His hand loosened for a split second then tightened as if iron bars around her waist whilst his fingers pressed into her nape. 

"You can't hate me!" he grit out. "Understood! You can't hate me!"

She pushed and shoved at his shoulders, "I do! I hate you like anything!" she cried shouting at him.
"I hate you Maan!"

His eyes softened seeing her tears but then all the softness died when he remembered what she'd done. He laced his fingers into her hair, curling his fingers into a fist then pulled her head back. 

"Is that why you did it huh? Is that why you married him?" 

She didn't respond but her eyes were spitting fire just as he was simultaneously.

He pulled her head back further causing her to wince in pain then suddenly let go of her causing her to stumble back. She stabled herself before she could fall and all he did was look away angrily, closing his eyes he took a sharp breath, then turned to meet her face.
His eyes roamed giving her one glance, his hand reached her neck and held the little manglsutr in his fingers, she gripped it at the same time.

"Bohut naaz hai na tumhare shadi par?" he whispered out sharply.

"mere mangl sutr chodho" she bit out angrily.

An evil smirk tugged his lips. "Ek Manhina! Apne Suhaag ko bachane ke liye, apne iss shadi ko bachane ke liye" he challenged.

"k..Kya matlab?"

He didn't answer but with a strong pull he ripped her manglsutr off her neck, the black beads scattered over the whole floor. She gasped, her eyes looking at the beads that scattered, that was a sign, a sign of her destruction.

"Aaj mangl sutr toot gaya, kal tumhare maate pe yeh sindoor hai na? woh bhi mitt jayega" He told her.

She knew the depth of his words, she knew very well what he meant, but she was too shocked to respond.

He walked away without another word or look, stopping at the door he turned his head over his shoulder yet didn't look at her. "Sirf aur Sirf Ek Mahina!"

Just A Prologue dearies.. not updating this yet.. 


Do Leave Me Your Thoughts On This!!!
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Also Please Follow Update Thread as I don't Pm

Jannat Update Thread

New readers do not read as it has an abrupt end to it so I suggest you avoid it.


Part 1
Part 2
Part 3
Part 4
Part 5
Part 6
Part 7
Last Part

Edited by ...Tanya-K... - 24 July 2013 at 4:39am

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 2:59am | IP Logged
Tany partner :o what was that?
Angry msk. :o
Geet married to someone else :s
Cant wait for more of this dark story :D

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sdlife19 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 3:07am | IP Logged
something intense and hatred type dear

congo on the new story

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vishruta Senior Member

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 3:19am | IP Logged

just loved the concept...

love dark stories...

waiting for the update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

please PM me!!!!!!!!!!!!!

love ya,

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ammu5 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 3:21am | IP Logged
congo for the new story. superb

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preethia IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 4:00am | IP Logged
congrats on new ff
loved the prologue
wow maan in darker shade i love it
waiting for the story to unfold...

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doll9 Senior Member

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 4:06am | IP Logged
awesome start dear lookng forward4 it

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pingu.tingu Goldie

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Seem interesting . Continue soon. :) nice concept

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