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Valentine's(FEELINGS BEHIND A PSHYCH MIND) (Page 2)

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Romantic Movie

" It was so romantic'Papu I love it." Sree aka Sreeparna chirped'.

"Yes'and the way Hero saved the Heroine from those goons was awesome'.Papu I love it too."Sujoy joined his voice with Sree.

Neel was staring at them without saying a single word'.and grinned. He has two tween's children Sujoy and Sreeparna'His 11 years old son and daughter . Some time he felt happy and sometime felt very proud of his children. But at a time he wanted to kill himself out of guilt and weight of sin.

" Papu what is Valentine's and why everyone celebrate Valentine's Day.??"Sree asked in  her innocence voice.

" Yes Papu'.tell na'..what is Valentine's? And what is promise day and other consecutive days which are come first before the Valentine's?" Joy asked too in excitement.

" Ah'.Ya'Valentine's is when people express their love to their beloved'.and the other consecutive days are just to make people and their beloved one special'But listen buddies you two are now too young to realize what is love. So it will be better for you that you will go to  bed 'now." He made his voice little loud.

"Yes Papa." They both obeyed and nodded their head and bid him" Good night and sweet dreams." They  kissed on his cheeks. And in return they got kisses too.

He again started pondering'..before 12 years on one Valentine day he just torn her into many pieces and let her drowning in the ocean of sorrow and self- hatred. That was too happened after a movie'a romantic movie''where Hero's unbound love keeps his beloved alive in his thoughts and imaginations. He too had and has the same feelings '.But how everything began??



Edited by mrmrfrevr - 14 February 2013 at 8:32am

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oh superb yaar
and about cs sochna padega
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Loved the upd!! 

Edited by chand1234 - 15 February 2013 at 7:19am
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Wow yaar. Great opening. But who is neel wife.
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Beginning

In beginning she and Neel was just opposite to each other. If one was fire another was water. If one is earth another was air. She was very talented and creative. She was the Diva'of their street, their school and college. When she danced everyone had just looked at her and thought how could someone dance so well without missing any beat and rhythm and how could someone express herself in every words? When she sang everyone had just listened to her sided their work away and thought how could someone sing so sweet and expressive that a stone heart would melt with that singing? And when she wrote or sketched something everyone had not stopped to praise her writing and painting skills and her imaginations. She was near and dear to everyone'she was Aparna Sinhania.

At the other side Neel was very fond of sports specially competitive ones. He liked that kind of sports where people got hurt and wounded ''he was an mixed martial arts fighter'.he learned Karate and Kung Fu well as other kind of Martial Arts. And he was the captain of their Rugby and football team in school and college and university.

She had her mother, father, brother and sister in her family. She was the youngest and was always center of everyone's attraction in her family. Everyone always wanted to protect her and keep her safe. Her father was the biggest business magnet from there and had so much power and influence in the society.

In the other hand Neelabjo Mitra had nothing except his aunt who was working in a college their '.rest of his family was destroyed in a car accident which was being headed towards the Amarnath pilgrimage. In that accident everyone was died''Child Nilabjo and his aunt were spared because he was fallen ill and was stayed with her aunt at the base. May be this was God's wish.

Aparna and Neelabjo were living in the Cape Town, South Africa'.where one was the Princess and one was just a raged and moody lad. The only common thing in between them was they both were very brilliant in their studies and every time they had come first jointly in the class. She was little proud about herself and he was very ignorant but at a time they became best friend as they completely had understood each other.

While having only happiness she somehow connected herself with him and had very compassionate place in her heart for him''having nothing happiness he completely connected himself with her and always took care of her and guard her from every kind of troubles. They were very happy since  he got a job in an MNC and she thought to do different rather to take the charge of her father's business.

By nature they were totally different and so different their hobbies were. But they always supported each other and stayed with each other whenever it needed. So he decided to support her this time too.



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wow, wow, wow, beautiful and excellent beginningBig smileBig smileBig smile
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rimi ab zyaada intezaar nahin hoga, you have started writng new FF, and each and every ff of your is just superb, every story ha a different angle to it, you are just superb, pls do continue with the above story, we are ready and waiting to get a shock of our lifetimeLOL

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Originally posted by divyadaya13

rimi ab zyaada intezaar nahin hoga, you have started writng new FF, and each and every ff of your is just superb, every story ha a different angle to it, you are just superb, pls do continue with the above story, we are ready and waiting to get a shock of our lifetimeLOL

Oh Didi toh thik hai...pehle main yehi khatam karoongi...and Didi I was not kidding...actually this story I don't know why I have written...but has some really unacceptable and shocking facts. ANd Hopefully you all will get the shock from tonight or tomorrow morning.

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