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DeewaniRimi

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 2:40am | IP Logged
Hey guys I was thinking about the feelings behind a Psych Mind. And thinking about it I finally found a really scary and absard idea.
I don't know whatever I am going to write is right or wrong. And I don't want to justify and judge anyone...So without wasting time I share my idea here...
Idea
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This is a story about a boy...Neel who eventuall
y fell in love with his childhood best friend. But while she refused him...he did something really scary and brutal( I am not judging him here. I am telling what he had done.) to her to kill her respect and honor in her view. Later he moved on and so was she. But after 12 years on this Valentine's they have again come across ...and now again he is thinking something.
Please Let me know if you like this idea and want me to continue this story...
INDEX
Valentine... 76135401
In the office... 76135520
Romantic movie...76150816
Beginning...76150920
Steps...  76198341
Strange...76217554
Feeling of Love...76269405 
A warm and hearty welcome...76293761
The Morning-a day before of Valentines...
  76329600
In the afternoon...
76426920 
AT the Valentine's Eve...
76619260
 The night before the Valentine's Day...76669804
Some shady and grey thoughts...
76669889 .
  She changed...77342313
Security Reasons-can't deny...
77378671
That Night... 
77489390
After That...
  77489478
Valentine's Morning-The Marriage...
77746300
And Then...
78072777 
Confrontation...between Past and Present...
84398422


Edited by DeewaniRimi - 31 May 2013 at 2:46pm

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Do continue rimi.

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 4:19am | IP Logged
Originally posted by foram.

Do continue rimi.

Okay di and thanks for your encouragement...Smile and here comes my first updates.

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 4:21am | IP Logged

VALENTINE

In this Valentine'.I am thinking'

About my feeling.

What makes me so mad'

That I did so bad.

With her'..

In another Valentine'

When people make promises'.

To keep their Love happy and safe.

I did that just to hurt her and felt her unsafe??

I hope you will forgive me, though '..

That is excessive for me.



Edited by mrmrfrevr - 14 February 2013 at 4:16am

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In the office.

In the office'..Neel was sitting in his cabin pondering about something. Suddenly his secretary asked his permission to come in. He lifted his face and nodded to come. She stood in front of him and forwarded some important files to him. His secretary's name is Misha''and she is very beautiful and attractive and young. Neel took a look at her from her top to bottom and again started thinking'.." I can't get it'..what makes me so mad and bad?? My secretary is so beautiful and attractive. And she is young too. But I never feel tempted or have lust for her. And  I is not only her'. I met so many girls and woman in my life but never felt attracted and tempted towards them. And I am a father of a 11 years old girl who will soon reach at her 12 in coming March. The she will reach to her puberty. But I always have affection and fondness for her. I wish to protect her with all my care and love and if someone dare to do harm her I will kill that son of bitch. But what is happened to me?? I have this kind of mind set and what I have done to her '.what is that?? If Sree ever comes to know this will she forgive me, her Papa for this??" While he was thinking this Misha adjusted his stuffs on his table and made it neat and clean. Then she left from there.

His mobile started ringing. He picked the call'.." Hello'Hey Sree'.no you and Sujoy just wait. I will be there within 20mins. We obviously will go to catch this movie."

He picked up the receiver of his intercom and asked her secretary to come in'.

"Well Misha..I am leaving now and I am on leave for next 2 days. But if any urgency will be occurred '.let me inform." And he left patting on her head. She  didn't like this as she has a great crush on her handsome boss and C.E.O of this MNC Mr. Neelabjo Mitra. But he never paid any attention or a glance to her and her beauty. Whenever he called her in he had discussed about their works only. Some time they had to spend some nights in working in office but she never felt any wrong sign or intention from him.



Edited by mrmrfrevr - 14 February 2013 at 4:59am

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Hey rimiHug Very happy to see another ff by u :D
char sketch toh post kar na!!! nd nxt upds ke liye mujhe PM karna... the first upd aws awesome!!! waiting to noe wht'll happen next...btw...whom is neel married to?

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 8:14am | IP Logged
wow suspense
what has neel donw exactly???
he loves his daughter so much
who is his wife???
m already loving this dear
keep it up

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 8:36am | IP Logged
Hey Foramdi and Ria thanks  a lot for commenting. ANd as I have mentioned earlier this is a story of feelings behind a pshych mind. So may be sometime it will hurt or shock you guys. But I will try my best to keep it simple.
And guys please this time you guys give the CS na...
and here comes your update.

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