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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vmpy
dona u r an amazing and a v well talented writer and i mean it.each and every piece of writing has its own uniqueness.this two shot is a real example of this.well when r u updating da fault in our stars.thanx a lot for pm.

Thank you vmpy.🤗 Comments like this are a true encouragement. Inhibitions have long kept me from sharing ideas & yes, I am evolving every day & hopefully I the work that I choose t share will diversify as well. Fault in Our Stars will be updated after I catch up on sleep & packing. I don't know how long that will take looking at the condition of my room right now

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Anoki

@Nian4life

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Posted: 11 years ago

It was simply fascinating! i swear to god ur like my idol to write FF's nd OS's man! i try to write them, but obviously they are nowhere compared to yours! hand down!

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..Ghazz..

@..Ghazz..

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Posted: 11 years ago

Yeah as all said i too was little confused dear.. 😕 but it was so nc... 😡

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fraser

@fraser

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awsome
part 2 is superb
contaginus nd their soup talk mostly convo is fab

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Nian4life
It was simply fascinating! i swear to god ur like my idol to write FF's nd OS's man! i try to write them, but obviously they are nowhere compared to yours! hand down!

😳 That is a big title to lug. Well, thank you. I am happy & perhaps even grateful for the appreciation. I try & will continue to do so as long as readers such as yourself are around. Good luck!

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Arias
Yeah as all said i too was little confused dear.. 😕 but it was so nc... 😡

Why are you upset and confused? You've got me in a fix. The comments from earlier were referring to the incomplete version which has now been altered. What is it that you would like for me to clarify? Let me know.

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: precious-pie
Awsome
part 2 is superb
contaginus nd their soup talk mostly convo is fab

thank you. who said cheesy pick lines don't work😆 I always throw one in here and there hoping someone would catch it.

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AroraN

@AroraN

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Posted: 11 years ago

He stopped in front of the lucky woman who received the compliment. It wasn't me. He was addressing "Donna ". Or IIDona 😉

Loved reading both parts 😃

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ITS_m
He stopped in front of the lucky woman who received the compliment. It wasn't me. He was addressing "Donna ". Or IIDona 😉

Loved reading both parts 😃

The best way to get over a person is to turn them into literature. That is all I have to say. iiDona, why not? My story, my call. I can flatter myself😉

Thank you. I am happy you like the story. See you soon with another one😊

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DonnaHarvey

@DonnaHarvey

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: zoshad3119
awesome dear...

thank you

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