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A Swaron OS ( Valentine series ) (Page 4)

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Posted: 15 February 2013 at 1:58am | IP Logged
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GayatriJethani Goldie
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Posted: 15 February 2013 at 4:52am | IP Logged
awesome start... loved it
the way u describe the situation... perfectClap
very well written.. i guess rey will marry sharon bcoz of the situation.. may be
eagerly waiting for next part... hope all the MU will be cleared...
update soon
thnx for pm
Anu_TanHa IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 15 February 2013 at 7:42am | IP Logged
Awesome startClap
You started this os from the very fantastic scene of last valentine episode of d3
Rey was going through so much pain & feel like betrayed.
Rey hates all weakling now as for him they just used person for their personnel benefit
But on the other side poor Kriya is in so much pain for breaking the heart of that person who is reason of her heart beat.
And that historical Swaron scene in which that beep got a tight slapDancing(mind blowing scene & brilliantly done by TanHa)
The way swayam picked sharon from waist like a barbie doll loved itDay Dreaming
But line which you added their i so wished that they were there in the original scene too
that Sharon only wants 'Her' Swayam back that's why she was with that beep 
i loved those lineSmile
So Sharon finally confessed her feeling and said i love u to swayamDay Dreaming
Everything was going fine & rey also accepted their relationship for the sake of Sharon but still he was worried
Finally Swayam & sharon become one by breaking all the barrier
But what now why Swayam walked out from their relationship leaving Sharon all broken And don't tell me that you planned to kill Swayam by diagnosing him with incurable diseaseLOL you murderer Wink
Sharon is pregnant with swayam's child & told everything to Rey. rey to maar hi dalega swayam ko agar tumne nahi maraLOL
Update soon

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Posted: 16 February 2013 at 1:37am | IP Logged
Wow when are u updating!? it was so awesome pm me when u update :)
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Posted: 16 February 2013 at 9:26am | IP Logged
Very intriguing the first part...kuch toh hidden hai - ek twist aur pls jaldi se update karna

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Posted: 17 February 2013 at 2:15am | IP Logged
awesome  part
conti  soon
swaronland Goldie
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Posted: 17 February 2013 at 5:44am | IP Logged
so sorry for late Embarrassed i was very busy so couldn't comment earlier. this one is awesome piece of workClap loved that u started with last years valentine & included kriyaansh also. poor rey &  Cry feeling bad for both of them  & so typical of rey protecting sharonSmile missing old sharey bonding in episodes
swaron together Day Dreaming but what's with swayam leaving sharonShocked eagerly waiting for next part Smile hope it will not end on sad noteOuch never the less thanks for such wonderful gift for valentine day
p.s. i'm very busy so can't comment on your work (ff & ss)
but trust me i will read them & also comment asap pls keep sending pms thanksSmile
Anu_TanHa IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 18 February 2013 at 9:47pm | IP Logged
Update please 

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