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awesome start... loved it

the way u describe the situation... perfect Clap

very well written.. i guess rey will marry sharon bcoz of the situation.. may be

eagerly waiting for next part... hope all the MU will be cleared...

update soon

thnx for pm

arch2012

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Posted: 15 February 2013 at 7:42am | IP Logged

Awesome start Clap

You started this os from the very fantastic scene of last valentine episode of d3

Rey was going through so much pain & feel like betrayed.

Rey hates all weakling now as for him they just used person for their personnel benefit

But on the other side poor Kriya is in so much pain for breaking the heart of that person who is reason of her heart beat.

And that historical Swaron scene in which that beep got a tight slap Dancing

(mind blowing scene & brilliantly done by TanHa)

The way swayam picked sharon from waist like a barbie doll loved it Day Dreaming

But line which you added their i so wished that they were there in the original scene too

that Sharon only wants 'Her' Swayam back that's why she was with that beep

i loved those line Smile

So Sharon finally confessed her feeling and said i love u to swayam Day Dreaming

Everything was going fine & rey also accepted their relationship for the sake of Sharon but still he was worried

Finally Swayam & sharon become one by breaking all the barrier

But what now why Swayam walked out from their relationship leaving Sharon all broken And don't tell me that you planned to kill Swayam by diagnosing him with incurable disease LOL

you murderer Wink

Sharon is pregnant with swayam's child & told everything to Rey. rey to maar hi dalega swayam ko agar tumne nahi mara LOL

Update soon

harshana1

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Wow when are u updating!? it was so awesome pm me when u update :)

MeeraSwaron

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Posted: 16 February 2013 at 9:26am | IP Logged

Very intriguing the first part...kuch toh hidden hai - ek twist aur pls jaldi se update karna

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Posted: 17 February 2013 at 2:15am | IP Logged

awesome part

conti soon

swaronland

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so sorry for late i was very busy so couldn't comment earlier. this one is awesome piece of work loved that u started with last years valentine & included kriyaansh also. poor rey & feeling bad for both of them & so typical of rey protecting sharon missing old sharey bonding in episodes

swaron together but what's with swayam leaving sharon eagerly waiting for next part hope it will not end on sad note never the less thanks for such wonderful gift for valentine day

p.s. i'm very busy so can't comment on your work (ff & ss)

but trust me i will read them & also comment asap pls keep sending pms thanks

arch2012

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Update please

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