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A Swaron OS ( Valentine series ) (Page 3)

Joshua_TANHA IF-Addictz
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Joined: 23 February 2012
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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
I liked how you took from last years Valentine part and written your own story...
Initially i thought it was Swayam who was hurt , then when it was Rey i was like sighh thank godEmbarrassed
 
whats wrong with these weaklingAngry and what s with swayam ??Dead he is again on with his baba giri mission  Angry cliffhanger D'oh 

Suni1986 IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 10:44pm | IP Logged
it was amazing update
why u put kr breakup bt right now i know kr help swaron came together i hope so
due to rey break up, he hate swayam nd whole weakling team
swaron confession was amazing yar
swaron love each other to d core bt rey try to seprate them
sharon pregnant with swayam baby bt why he left her whn he love to d core n unable to live without her
what wil rey do to him?
why he left her? Is it bcz kriya
what wil sharon do?
I m waiting for this update
shan16 Senior Member
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Posted: 15 February 2013 at 12:00am | IP Logged
ohho ...ye OS kyun hai ..plz plz ise FF bane do...what an interesting start dear...i was confused with the start ...first felt it swayam pov cos it on ss then found that it on kriyaansh...but gradually the way story was flowing ...amazing...hmmm lovely...i really love it ...i can feel the pain .intense love...but suddenly wth is wrong with our lover boy ?  Suspense huh..m waiting ..please i need more /...update sooon the next...n plz yeh dil mannge more so make it FF
reet_26 Senior Member
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Posted: 15 February 2013 at 1:01am | IP Logged
superb update
plz update soon


Edited by reet_26 - 15 February 2013 at 12:56am
Lassi_TanHa IF-Sizzlerz
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Posted: 15 February 2013 at 1:08am | IP Logged
liked d way u balanced all d characters..
rey break down n decides to protect sharon from swayam,
swaron confesses to each other after shivam slap scenario.. i liked part were u added d exta part in scene wen she says to shivam y she was close to him in d party to get her swayam backSmile
sharon says she trusts swayam even after reys warng.. she in deep love with him..Embarrassed on d other hand dont know wat swayam baba is upto..Confused

GayatriJethani Goldie
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Posted: 15 February 2013 at 4:52am | IP Logged
awesome start... loved it
the way u describe the situation... perfectClap
very well written.. i guess rey will marry sharon bcoz of the situation.. may be
eagerly waiting for next part... hope all the MU will be cleared...
update soon
thnx for pm
Anu_TanHa IF-Stunnerz
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Posted: 15 February 2013 at 7:42am | IP Logged
Awesome startClap
You started this os from the very fantastic scene of last valentine episode of d3
Rey was going through so much pain & feel like betrayed.
Rey hates all weakling now as for him they just used person for their personnel benefit
But on the other side poor Kriya is in so much pain for breaking the heart of that person who is reason of her heart beat.
And that historical Swaron scene in which that beep got a tight slapDancing(mind blowing scene & brilliantly done by TanHa)
The way swayam picked sharon from waist like a barbie doll loved itDay Dreaming
But line which you added their i so wished that they were there in the original scene too
that Sharon only wants 'Her' Swayam back that's why she was with that beep 
i loved those lineSmile
So Sharon finally confessed her feeling and said i love u to swayamDay Dreaming
Everything was going fine & rey also accepted their relationship for the sake of Sharon but still he was worried
Finally Swayam & sharon become one by breaking all the barrier
But what now why Swayam walked out from their relationship leaving Sharon all broken And don't tell me that you planned to kill Swayam by diagnosing him with incurable diseaseLOL you murderer Wink
Sharon is pregnant with swayam's child & told everything to Rey. rey to maar hi dalega swayam ko agar tumne nahi maraLOL
Update soon

harshana1 Senior Member
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Posted: 16 February 2013 at 1:37am | IP Logged
Wow when are u updating!? it was so awesome pm me when u update :)

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