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ABBY92

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 1:55pm | IP Logged
Alright, I never expected such a twist on the Kria leaving track but I like it !! Swayam leaving Sharon was a shock but I'm sure there's more to the story !!

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 4:25pm | IP Logged
Amazing
Beautifully portrayed the journey of Swaron
Rey protective towards Sharon  

dancersqueen

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 7:54pm | IP Logged
awesome...waiting 4 2nd part...

Joshua_TANHA

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
I liked how you took from last years Valentine part and written your own story...
Initially i thought it was Swayam who was hurt , then when it was Rey i was like sighh thank godEmbarrassed
 
whats wrong with these weaklingAngry and what s with swayam ??Dead he is again on with his baba giri mission  Angry cliffhanger D'oh 

Suni1986

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 10:44pm | IP Logged
it was amazing update
why u put kr breakup bt right now i know kr help swaron came together i hope so
due to rey break up, he hate swayam nd whole weakling team
swaron confession was amazing yar
swaron love each other to d core bt rey try to seprate them
sharon pregnant with swayam baby bt why he left her whn he love to d core n unable to live without her
what wil rey do to him?
why he left her? Is it bcz kriya
what wil sharon do?
I m waiting for this update

shan16

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Posted: 15 February 2013 at 12:00am | IP Logged
ohho ...ye OS kyun hai ..plz plz ise FF bane do...what an interesting start dear...i was confused with the start ...first felt it swayam pov cos it on ss then found that it on kriyaansh...but gradually the way story was flowing ...amazing...hmmm lovely...i really love it ...i can feel the pain .intense love...but suddenly wth is wrong with our lover boy ?  Suspense huh..m waiting ..please i need more /...update sooon the next...n plz yeh dil mannge more so make it FF

reet_26

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Posted: 15 February 2013 at 1:01am | IP Logged
superb update
plz update soon


Edited by reet_26 - 15 February 2013 at 12:56am

Lassi_TanHa

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Posted: 15 February 2013 at 1:08am | IP Logged
liked d way u balanced all d characters..
rey break down n decides to protect sharon from swayam,
swaron confesses to each other after shivam slap scenario.. i liked part were u added d exta part in scene wen she says to shivam y she was close to him in d party to get her swayam backSmile
sharon says she trusts swayam even after reys warng.. she in deep love with him..Embarrassed on d other hand dont know wat swayam baba is upto..Confused

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