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ABBY92

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Alright, I never expected such a twist on the Kria leaving track but I like it !! Swayam leaving Sharon was a shock but I'm sure there's more to the story !!

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sanstina

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Amazing

Beautifully portrayed the journey of Swaron

Rey protective towards Sharon

rhu90

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 7:54pm | IP Logged

awesome...waiting 4 2nd part...

Joshua_TANHA

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 10:02pm | IP Logged

I liked how you took from last years Valentine part and written your own story...

Initially i thought it was Swayam who was hurt , then when it was Rey i was like sighh thank god

whats wrong with these weakling

and what s with swayam ??

he is again on with his baba giri mission

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 10:44pm | IP Logged

it was amazing update
why u put kr breakup bt right now i know kr help swaron came together i hope so
due to rey break up, he hate swayam nd whole weakling team
swaron confession was amazing yar
swaron love each other to d core bt rey try to seprate them
sharon pregnant with swayam baby bt why he left her whn he love to d core n unable to live without her
what wil rey do to him?
why he left her? Is it bcz kriya
what wil sharon do?
I m waiting for this update

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ohho ...ye OS kyun hai ..plz plz ise FF bane do...what an interesting start dear...i was confused with the start ...first felt it swayam pov cos it on ss then found that it on kriyaansh...but gradually the way story was flowing ...amazing...hmmm lovely...i really love it ...i can feel the pain .intense love...but suddenly wth is wrong with our lover boy ? Suspense huh..m waiting ..please i need more /...update sooon the next...n plz yeh dil mannge more so make it FF

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Posted: 15 February 2013 at 1:01am | IP Logged

superb update

plz update soon

Edited by reet_26 - 15 February 2013 at 12:56am

lassipriya

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liked d way u balanced all d characters..
rey break down n decides to protect sharon from swayam,
swaron confesses to each other after shivam slap scenario.. i liked part were u added d exta part in scene wen she says to shivam y she was close to him in d party to get her swayam back
sharon says she trusts swayam even after reys warng.. she in deep love with him.. on d other hand dont know wat swayam baba is upto..

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