Originally posted by pari_15
veds...finally ur back...n how!! Not exactly back but yes :D
Amazing OS...beautiful...seriously speechless it left me.. :D
At start..i thought it was a sad OS..with arjun all sad n thinking he cant have aro back in his life...cuz she's already someone else's...
I really felt sad for arjun...n then he entered the penthouse...
The setting u described was beautifully worded Thanks :)
...a table for two...food n all...i had an idea ki ur talking abt arjuhi..:p Lolz
so jai made up a fake party..?? Cool...thanks to jai, they both met.. Yeah thanks to Jai!!!
Loved the slight nok-jhok between arjuhi
...gave them an arjuhi wali feel...Thats i put that.. uske bagair mazza kahan ;)
n then arjun got the biggest news of his life..arohi isnt married,...seriously why couldnt he have heard this earlier when jai was telling him?? Would've saved all the pain that arjuhi went through..
N saved their time too Phir meri story kaise banti :P ;)
saying that...why was arohi so scared to confess earlier.. she was scared with the idea of love
bt glad she did realise it...n didnt marry the jerk with whom her dad was fixing her alliance with...hehehehe
n the way he kissed her..like he aint gonna leave her...pouring his love for her...beautifully described...thanks :)
When arjun said 'marry me'...i could just feel what arohi was feeling..the way u described... thanks again :)
Lol..arjun wanted to get married then n there?? So karva deti na...:p n family n friends ke saamne re-run ho jaata..what say??Mann nahi kiya yaar :P socha toh tha but bohut lamba ho jata and i didnt had that much time..
But atleast they got engaged...n that scene reminded me soo much of kmh1..where arjun proposes arohi..by twirling the flower into loop...u could've used the rose that was kept on the table...although the size of the rose would've been wider than arohi's fingers :p...even the foil paper idea was gud...<3 Rose surely would have been big...
btw...i loved the way u wrote the song...with lyrics that connected arjuhi to the memories of the past ..of each other...lyrics were so perfect...fitting perfectly...<3 thanks... that scene just clicked in my mind when i was listening to that song..
n the way u described it made it truely stupendous... thanks :)
For a Thousand years it is... Yup!!!
ps- i dont usually write big comments...cuz thats a lot of hardwork...n m way too lazy for it...n mainly..m wordless...lol..bt wrote it esp for u..(to convince u to continue TMP asap :P)...so ignore the parts i dun make sense...:P