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Posted: 13 February 2013 at 8:35am | IP Logged
Hi All,
 
 
Welcome to the 'WRITE-A-SCENE' contest.
 
 
Those who are familiar with it already know the rules. Those who are new, here they are...
 
 
1. Post a scene/short story connecting these 3 pics.
 
 
2. Your entries will be posted as replies to this thread.  Please write 'ENTRY NO ' on top and then post your entry with the caps and the dialogues along with it. The order of the pics can be changed.
 
 
3. No discussions on this thread. Please discuss on the Gen Discussions thread.
 
 
4. Last date is 23/2/2013 1PM IST or 7 entries whichever comes later.
 
 
 
Please don't make this contest a boring failure. This is my request to old members.
 
 
 
Here are the caps.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 18 February 2013 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
Entry 1


Abhijeet: Kya lagta hai sir? Daya kar payega.

ACP: Mujhe pura yakeen hai ke woh yeh kar payega.

Abhijeet: Sir agar usne nahi kiya toh yeh bomb phat na jaaye.

ACP and Abhijeet look up at this. The bomb was ticking over their heads and the only way to save everyone was to disarm it. But the remote to disarm it was on the roof.

Abhijeet: Aur agar yeh bomb phat gaya toh bahut logon ki jaan chali jayegi.

ACP (repeated): Mujhe pura yakeen hai ke woh yeh kar payega.



Up on the roof, the man with the remote to the bomb was holding some hostages. Daya saw this from the other building and decided to risk it. He hooked himself to an electrical wire connecting the 2 buildings and jumped. He made it across and banged into the man with his feet. Picking up the man...

Daya: Remote kahan hai?!!

Man: Nahi doonga.

Daya: Nahi dega?!!

*bang...Daya delivered a hard punch into the man's stomach*

Man (laughing): Sirf do minute bache hain. Jitna marna hai maar le. Tere ko remote main nahi doonga!

Daya: Acha nahi dega?!!

Daya pulled out his gun and pointed it at the man's head. That just made the man laugh more.

Man (laughing): Maar do. Acha hai. Phir toh bomb kabhi nahi disarm hoga.

Daya: Yeh tumse kisne kaha ke main tumhe maaronga? Main toh sirf tumhare anje panje dheele karonga.

Daya fired one shot into the man's arm. He yelled out in pain.

Man: Maar lo goli. Main nahi doonga remote control.

At this moment, something glinted, which Daya saw out of the corner of his eye. He pushed the man aside and stepped over to the glint and found that it was the remote. From behind, the man banged into Daya, but Daya simply shot the man in his foot and then disarmed the bomb.

Daya (on phone): Abhijeet, maine bomb disarm kar diya hai.

Abhijeet (on phone): Haan Daya. Ho gaya hai. Ab bureau main milte hain.


Abhijeet, ACP, Daya, and Sachin are having a conversation when DCP Chitrole comes in.

Chitrole: Uss aadmi ko goli kisne maari thi?

Daya: Maine.

Chitrole: Tumhe pata hai ke usne hum par case kar diya hai.

Daya: Toh?

Chitrole: Toh maine tumhe suspend karne aaya hoon.

Everyone is shocked. Daya simply nods and starts to leave. ACP calls out from behind.

ACP: Ruko Daya. Chitrole sir agar aap ko kisi ko suspend karna hai toh khud ko ki jiye.

Chitrole: Kya matlab hai tumhara?!!

ACP: Aur nahi toh kya. Humne itne logon ki jaan bachi hai. Daya pe usne case toh kar diya hai lekin yeh case hum hi jeetenge kyun ki sab bata sakte hain ke Daya ne jo kiya woh zaroori tha.

A few moments of silence and finally DCP Chitrole breaks it.

Chitrole: Pradyuman tumne ek baar phir aapne iss officer ko bacha toh liya hai lekin main bhi dekhta hoon ke kab tak bachte rehte ho.

ACP: Jab tak main hoon inhe aap ki taraf se koi taklef nahi mil sakti hai.

DCP Chitrole leaves in the same huff in which he came. Abhijeet and Daya turn to ACP Pradyuman.

Daya: Sir...

ACP (cutting him off): Daya, tum aur Abhijeet sirf CID ke officers nahi ho, lekin mere parivaar bhi ho. Tum dono ko kuch nahi hoga. Kabhi nahi!

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Entry No. 2


Abhijeet : Sir yeh Daya ko kya hua ? Chatth pe jaake kya kar raha hai ? Kahiin yeh sammohit toh nahi hua hai ?
ACP : Abhijeet abhi humne recently Sammohan waala episode kiya hai, toh itni jaldi ek aur aisa episode nahi banega.
Abhijeet: Haan sir woh baat bhi sahi hai.. phir ise kya ho gaya ? Kahiin suicide ka toh plan nahi ?
ACP : Nahi Abhijeet, hum 24x7 shooting kar rahe hai. suicide karne ka time kahaan ?
Abhijeet : Kuch toh gadbad hai sir .. Kuch toh gadbad hai ..
ACP : Hain !! Abhijeet yeh mera line hai .. maana ki shanivaar ka team tumhaara hai par abhi bhi main hi ACP hoon.
Abhijeet : Sorry sir, woh bas nikal gaya moonh se .. khair (shouting out) Daya !!! Tum wahaan upar kya kar rahe ho ? Kya iraada hai ?

 
Daya : Abhijeet main itni der se yahaan khada hoon, par tum dono ho ki mujhe chodke apne baatob mein lag gaye.
Abhijeet : Sorry yaar woh tum se aaj kal kam mulakat hoti hai na, toh mujhe laga tum shayad Friday episode ki shooting kar rahe ho.
Daya : Aaj ke baad main koi episode shoot nahi karunga.
Abhijeet : Shocked Kya ? Kyun ? Matlab aisa kya ho gaya ?
Daya : Main thak gaya hoon BP saab se..
ACP : Kyun Daya aisa kya ho gaya ?
Daya : Unhone mujhe kya samajh rakkha hai ? Robot ? Bacchon ke episode mein mujhe daal dethe hai, Friday ke episode mein mujhe daal dethe hai, Gutur Gu mein bhi mujhe nahi choda aur toh ...
Abhijeet : Aur kya ?
Daya : Aur uss Nikhil ko bhi mere saath rakh diya. Yeh bahut naa insaafi hai ... Main yahaan se kood jaaunga ..
(And Daya jumps, forgetting that he's connected to an aerial rope)


 
Sachin : Sir aapne aisa kyun kiya ? 
ACP : Sach mein Daya, accha hua ki tum bach gaye, agar woh rope tum se attached na hotha toh na jaae kya hoga ...
Abhijeet : Daya main Abhi Cry ... mere yaar .. tujhe kuch hotha toh mera kya hotha ? Pagle, tune apne iss dost ke baare mein bhi nahi socha ? (and sheds a tear)
ACP : Sahi kaha Abhijeet .. main toh soch bhi nahi saktha ki iske bina CID ka kya hotha (and starts crying)
(Daya starts walking away)
Abhijeet : Ruko Daya .. kahaan jaa rahe ho ?
Daya : Abhijeet tum log itni over acting kyun kar rahe ho ? Mujhe ajeeb lag raha hai isliye jaa raha hoon.
Abhijeet: Woh baat yeh hai ki humaari trp's bahut kam ho gayi hai, toh ab ek tragedy episode chahiye hoga na TRPs badhaane ke liye .. toh hum Singh Saab ko dikha rahe hai ki hum rone mein kitne acche hai taaki humein death bed pe na letna padhe aur rone ka kaam humein de Tongue
(Sachin receives a call from BP Singh, after which)
ACP : Kya kaha usne Sachin ?
Sachin : Sir woh .. woh ..
Daya : Yeh woh woh lkya laga rakkha hai ? Aage bolo ..
Sachin : Woh sir BP saab ne kaha hai aapne jo chatth se jump karne ki koshish ki, unhone use episode banaake release kar diya, aur bacchon ko aapka stunt bahut pasand aa gaya hai .. Isliye ...
Abhijeet : Isliye kya ? 
Sachin : Isliye aaj se aap har Chote heroes episode mein ek stunt karenge aur aapka saath dega Nikhil ..
Daya : D'oh
Sachin : Aur Abhijeet sir, kyunki Daya sir Chote heroes mein busy rahenge isliye har Saturday aur Sunday episode mein aapko hona hoga woh Pankaj aur Suraj ke saath !!
Abhijeet and Daya : ACP sir lift kaam kar raha hai kya ? Chatth pe jaana hai ... Tongue Tongue
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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Posted: 19 February 2013 at 8:16am | IP Logged

Entry No: 3


ABHIJEET: Sir aap ko kya lagta hay, ye jagah Safe hay na...?Wink
ACP: hmmm... lug tou rahi hay ABHIJEETThumbs Up, wesay bhi itnay Lockers hain, Pata nahi chaly ga kay wo cheez aakhir hay kahan...Evil Smile
ABHIJEET (happyBig smile): haan Sir is liyey Main nay Kamray ki Chat pr bhi Lockers banwa diyey...WinkEmbarrassed
ACP: haan ye acha kiya Tum nay ABHIJEETClap, wesay ye Idea aaya kahan say Tumharay Dimagh mein?Confused
ABHIJEET: Sir kal ki baat hay...Ermm


FLASH BACK...
ABHIJEET: Main nay bari Mushkilun say DAYA ki MUNNI Shirts ka Stock jama kiyaLOL, uff Mut pochyey usy kitna idhr Udhar kar kay baatun mein laga kayD'oh, phir main nay Un sub ko Store Room kay ek Purany Cupboard mein Band kr raha thaBig smile... achanak wo Blue Bhangaar Shirt neechy gir gayii...ShockedShockedShocked
ab Sir Mujhy kya malum tha kay DAYA Dusri Chat pr Stunt ki Prepration kr raha hayWinkWink... Bus jesy he wo Blue Bhangaar Shirt usy Khirki say dikhi Winkaur wo SAMMOHIT ho gayaROFL...aur Us nay Chat say Chalang laga diOuch... Main nay 
Foran wo Shirt Cupboard mein band ki magar tab tak DAYA SAMMOHIT ho chuka thaDay DreamingROFL...(after a minute) wo tou Shuker hay kay Stunt ki Preprations ho gayii thiEmbarrassed... warna aaj DAYA Yaqeenun Hospital Bed pr hota...Wink


DAYA: Main ja raha hun...CryCry
ABHIJEET: ye kya keh rahy ho DAYA... Tum...OuchOuch
ACP: haan DAYA... Tum sirf ek Shirt...WinkWink
(DAYA turn and interrupts in tearsCry): Ek Blue Bhangaar Shirt ki Qeemut tum kya jano RAMESH babu...LOLLOLLOL
ABHIJEET: Sir aap nay RAMESH naam kub rakhha...WinkWink
ACP: Hey Bhagwaan...D'oh
ABHIJEET (murmur): shayed Meri Yaaddasht jaany say pehlay...WinkWink
ACP (chewing tone): nahi Is Ooni Topi ko pehanny kay baad...AngryAngryAngry
DAYA (engage): ek Actor ki Jaan hota hay Ek Blue Bhangaar ShirtWinkLOL... Us ka Maan hota hay...WinkLOL
ABHIJEET (cuts): DAYA Tu Pagal ho gaya hay...AngryAngry
DAYA (teary tone): Pagal Nahi hun tou kya karunCry, itni Bari Shirt lay kr pehna di hay Mujhy...Angry
Kub tak main apnay Man ko Maarta rahunCry... ab is Shirt ko Peechay say Khench Khench kr Main kesay Bara Karun gaROFL... itni Bari bari Sleeves hain, malum hay Kitna Fold karna parta hayD'oh...  Do Aadmi rakhnay parein hain Mujhy Sleeves fold karnay kay liyey...WinkLOLaur Color dekho, itna PheekaPinch, aur is mein tou wo Do Bari bari Pockets bhi nahiCry, acha khasa ek mein Daal aur ek mein Chawal bhar kay lay aata thaROFL... jub Bhook lagi Nikala aur Kha liya, koi Jhanjhat he nahi aur ab...ROFL nahi nahi main CID chor raha hun... main aisay Dukhi Mahul mein Kaam nahi kr sakta...WinkLOLLOL
All stand in Shock and Stunned ModeShockedShockedShocked... DAYA moved out in Tears...CryCryCry




Edited by gadhadada - 19 February 2013 at 8:11am

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ENTRY: 4


ABHIJEET: DAYA Tum kahan ja rahy ho...?Shocked
DAYA: Boss Main CID chor raha hun...Cry
ABHIJEET (shock): kya, Kyun..?ShockedShocked
DAYA: choro boss...WinkWink
ACP: magar DAYA koi wajah bhi ho na...ConfusedConfused
DAYA (tease): Sir wo wajah...OuchOuch
ABHIJEET: kiya NIKHIL...WinkLOL
DAYA (to ACP): Sir Main nay apna Resign direct DCP CHITROLE ko bhej diya hay... aur unhun nay isy Accept bhi kr liya hay...OuchOuch
ACP (shockShocked): kya, NIKHIL bhi apna Resign day chuka hay aur wo bhi Accept ho gaya hay...OuchOuch
DAYA look at all and moved out with More Tears...LOL


DAYA: Main Aatmahatya kr raha hun...AngryAngryAngry
NIKHIL: Sir Main bhi...WinkWinkWink
DAYA in Rash jumped even did not bother either the Ariel Hook was Correct or Not...Evil Smile


ABHIJEET: Sir DAYA nay milnay yehein bulaya tha...Smile
ACP: kahan ho DAYA...?Confused
ABHIJEET: DAYA, bahar aa ja... koi nahi hay...Embarrassed
VOICE: Boss Main Tum ko Dikh nahi raha hun na, main nay SALUNKHY Sir say VANISHING CHEMICAL lay kr use kiya hay...WinkWink
ANOTHER VOICE: aur main nay bhi DAYA Sir...PinchPinch
ACP and ABHIJEET helplessly seeing each one...WinkWinkWink

MORAL of a GOOD SHISHYA...Evil Smile
always follow UR GURU
cz TU Mera Hero, Mera Hero...DancingROFL



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Posted: 21 February 2013 at 9:14am | IP Logged
Entry No - 5

 
ACP: Abhijeet.. yeh Daya paagal toh nahi hogaya..wahaan uppar kya kar raha hai... !!! Shocked

Abhijeet: Shayad wohi ... jo sabhie CID dekhane waale karna chahthe hai... aatmahatya ... !!!!! hafthe mein chaar char cases D'oh... toh..aur kya hoga...Sleepy

ACP: Uff... aur Yeh...Nikhil kahaan hai... Hamesha toh chipka rehta hai Daya se...Angry

Abhijeet: Usi building ki deewaaron par apna sar patak raha hoga Sir... Daya ko rokne ke liye.. !!!LOL

ACP: Toh Dhoondo use...!!!

Abhijeet: haan sir... agar use nahi roka toh building ke saath Daya waise hi neeche gir jaayega !!!LOL

ACP: Oh My God!!! .. humaari baaton mein.. woh dekho Daya khoodh gaya.. !!!

Background music (very loud) Dayaaaman... Dayaaaman... Dayaaaman!!


Abhijeet: ShockedShockedShocked  Sir.. yeh Daya toh ... !!!!!!ShockedShockedShocked

ACP: Angry

 

At the Bureau

ACP: Daya... yeh kya bewakoofana harkat kar rahe the tum... ???Angry yeh koi bacchon ka show nahi hai.. jo tum aasmaan se neech aao.. aur mujrim ko pakdo...!!!! Angry

Abhijeet: waise yaar.. yeh Dayaaaman kya hai.. ??? ROFL

Daya silently turns around and  starts leaving

 
ACP: kahaan jaa rahe ho...???

Abhijeet: Daya Ruko... !!! Please...!!!! 

Daya: Arey nahi Abhijeet..!!!  Woh toh main Shooting mein zara Jaldi aa gaya.. Tum log apna scene khatam kar lo.. uske baad mai woh bacchon ke case ke liye ... ud ke aaoonga... mujrim ko thappad maarne !!!! TongueWink


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ENTRY 6

  scene below CID beauru:
ACP : abhijeet ye kya ho kya gaya hai daya ko...
           woh is tarah se kya building ke upar chad ke gane ga raha hai... 
           kuch toh dhamaka jarur hone wala hai...

Abhijeet: haan sir mujhe bhi tension aa raha hai... (looking down the building where we can see                  a car standing)
ACP: abhijeet !!! tension tume us car ka aa raha hai??Angry
Abhijeet: : Nahi sir wo jo kal apne naye CAR ke khushi mein sweets leke Tarika ji  aayi thi ...kitne pyaar se tarika ji ne mujhe aapne haathon se wo khilaye...Embarrassed
ACP{IN anger}: ABHIJEET ...ye kya majak ...what TIMEPASS..you toh want that only na...
         (And banging his head ) ye bacchon ke saath shoot kar kar ke unke woh ENGLISH                                   dialogues mere muh pe baith gaye hai yaar...
Abhijeet still  looking at daya and car...Smile

DAYA: ( shouting) : JAB daya ka haath padta hai tab khooni ke daathon ka piano bhajne lagta hai... AUR AGAR PURA KA PURA daya hi padh gaya toh???Wink
wah wah Mein hoon super hero baachonka super star...Big smile


 
When finally daya comes down... 
ACP: DAYA !!!!! ye kya baachon jaisa upar chad ke chilla rahe the tum...Confused
ABHIJEET: daya kuch toh dhyan rakte ki hum pe kya bith rahi hoti... aur wo kya bol rahe the tum... SUPERSTAR ...superhero... 
Daya : sir woh meri kya galti hai aaj kal baachonka episodes mein din raat shoot kar kar ke mein toh bicchara raat ko dreams mein bhi superhero wala gana gata hoon...
(NoW all are speechless)ShockedShocked


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Entry 7


Daya: Main jaonga!

Abhijeet: Kya? Tum kahan jaoge?

Daya: Main jaonga woh bomber ko marne.

ACP: Sambhal kar jaana. Pata nahi uske dimak main kya chal raha hai.

Daya: Mujhe kuch nahi hoga. Hoga toh usse.


Abhijeet and ACP are looking up at the roof of the building where the bomber is waiting for some action.

Abhijeet: Sir Daya usse rok payega na?

ACP: Mujhe pura yakeen hai ke woh rok payega. Mujhe uski fikar ho rahi hai lekin.

Abhijeet: Usse kuch nahi hoga sir! Woh Daya hai. Mujhe pata hai woh uss bomber ki baja kar aayega.

ACP (giving Abhijeet a look): Abhijeet tum kab se aisi bhasha ka istamal karne lag gaye.

Abhijeet: Pata nahi sir. Bas use karne lag gaya hoon.


Up on the roof, Daya gets ready to attack. He then jumps and flies across to the other roof. The bomber seeing this quickly drops his weapons. Daya reaches the roof of the bomber.

Daya: Mujhe dekh kar hatyar kyun daal diya.

Bomber: Sir aap Daya sir ho! Agar aap ka haath para toh meri halat kharab ho jayegi. Isse acha hai ke pehle hi hatyar dal doon.

Daya: Samjhdar ho. Ab chalo!

Back on the ground, the trio stop to talk while the bomber is taken away.

Abhijeet: Upar kya huya?

Daya: Kuch bhi nahi.

ACP: Daya woh bomber ke saath kya kiya jo usne itni shanti se hatyar dal diye.

Daya: Kuch bhi nahi kiya. Usne toh mere aate hi dal diya.

Abhijeet: Yani CID ka itna kauf?!!

Daya: Haan aur nahi toh kya. 16 saalon se logon main khauf peda kar rahe hain. Ab toh criminals sirf naam sun kar hi darr jaate hain.

Abhijeet: Sahi kaha!

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