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Posted: 21 April 2013 at 11:34am | IP Logged
Ossumm updates..

Loved it...

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wow.!!

ekdum mast !

rey taani hot topic ErmmDisapprove
update soon!!
waiting :D





Edited by sweety-reylover - 22 April 2013 at 1:40am

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Posted: 22 April 2013 at 5:12am | IP Logged
awesome update

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 8:50am | IP Logged

sorry iss baar sabko individual thank u nahi bol paya but jisne bhi like n comment kiya hai unn sabko baddda vala tahank u...Big smile

hello guys

me phir aa gaya

bear me...LOL


Recape: rey ka dil n mind alag alag track par chal rahe hai'.. usey dil kria k saath hai n mind taani k saath''. Total confusion''.  Bechara pareshan hoke mind fresh karne k liye n apne sagaai k outfit lene k liye bahar nikla toh gaadi se kisi girl ko takkar maar di''''

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Rey(in mind): oh crap'. Ye mene kya kar diya'..

Wo car se bahar aaya n he get shock''..

Rey: taani''.

Taani: rey aap?? Aapne muje takkar mar di'' (she cried out because of pain)

Rey: m sorry sweet heart''. Mene jaan bujke nahi kiya'.

N rey ne taani ko khade hone me help ki'' but uske leg me chot lagi thi toh who thik se khadi nahi ho paa rahi thi n usk left hand bhi ghayal ho gaya tha'..'..

Priya n kria are going on shopping priya saw rey n taani are struggling''

Priya: kria tum ruko me do min. me unki help karke aati hu'..

Kria saw them tears rolled on her cheeks''. Wo dusri car k piche chup gayi n dekhne lagi'.

Priya ne taani ka stuff collect kiya n usko car tak le jaane me rey ki help ki''..

Rey: m really sorry sweetheart'.

Taani: it's ok'. Aap jaanbujke thodi aisa karoge'

rey(to priya): thanks for help'..

priya: u'r welcum'. bye n tc'.

taani: bye' thanks'..

priya give them a smile n kria ko dhundhne lagi'. Rey taani ko hospital leke gaya''

priya ne kria ko car k piche dekha n usey bahar aane k liye kaha'..

kria priya k paas aayi n tabhi rey ne mirror me se kria ko priya se baat karte hue dekha'..

rey(in mind): kria?? Nahi nahi phir se muje illusion ho raha hai''.. oh god plz save me''

priya(shocked): tum waha kya kar rahi thi?? N tum ro kyu rahi ho??Shocked

Kria: kuch nahi' wo meri aankh me kachra chala gaya tha'..Cry

Priya: sachi batao kya hua?? Me tumhe acche se jaanti hu. Kuch toh zarur hua hai'..

Kria: me sach keh rahi hu'

Priya: ham ghar chalke baat karenge' philhal shopping pe chalet hai'

Kria: meraa man nahi hai'.. ham sidha ghar chalet hai' ( tabhi kisika cell baja)

Priya: tumhara cell baja kya??

Kria: nahi mera toh nahi tumhara??

Priya: nahi' ( usne aaspaas dekha toh car k neeche ek cell tha usne bahar nikal k dekha but tab tak call end ho chukka tha, usne wall paper dekha)

Priya: arey ye toh usika hai jiska abhi accident hua tha''

Phir se kisika call aaya'..

Priya: prince charming''..

Kria can't react'..

Priya attend d call'..

Rey: hello'.

Priya: hey, wo abhi tumhari sweetheart ka accident hua tha na usi jagah pe uska mob. Gir gaya hai. (priya's words hurting kria a lot)

Rey: oh who r u??

Priya: wahi jisne tumhari help ki thi'.

Rey: thanks again..

Priya: tum log kaha tak pohche ho??

Rey: ham yahi paas me hospital hai vahi pe hai doc uska check up kar rahe hai'.

Priya: ohk toh muje address de do me mobail vahi de jaati hu.

Rey: arey nahi tum vahi ruko me aake le jaata hu.

Priya: it's ok. Abhi usko tumhari zaroorat hogi, tum vahi ruko ham aa rahe hai. Agar tumhe koi problem na ho to'.

Rey: aisi baat nahi hai bas me tumhe pareshan nahi karna chahta tha' (rey ne usey address de diya)

Priya: ohk, ham abhi vaha aate hai''..(cut the call)

Kria itna hurt ho chuki thi ki ab uski sehne ki takat khatam ho chuki thi'''.. she can't bear more'.

Priya: let's go''

Kria: mera man nahi hai me yaha se ghar jaati hu. Tum mob de ke ghar aa jana'

Priya: achanak kya hua??ShockedShocked

Kria: kuch bhi toh nahi bas mera man nahi hai''(she try to hide her tears)

Priya: nahi tum mere saath chal rahi ho bas'.

Kria(angry): ek baar kaha na muje kahi nahi aana' (n vaha se chali gayi)AngryCry

Priya can't understand''. Why she is behaving like this'. Usne pehli baar kria ko gussa hote hue dekha tha.. wo itna tensed ho gayi thi ki aakhir  kria ko kya hua??Ouch

After few minutes'. priya in hospital'.

Priya: wo jaane ki koshish karti hai but uski heels tut jaati hai n uske peir me mocha a jaati hai'..)

Priya:  mumma my leg.. (she cried out)Cry

Rey saw her.. n ussey doctor ke paas le jaata hai'.

Doctor priya ko check kiya n uske per pe bandage laga di''

rey: is she all right??

Doctor: kuch zyada nahi zara si moch aayi hai'. Ek do din me thik ho jayegi'

rey: thank u doctor'

Priya: thanks dude'''

Rey: no needed even m sorry meri vajah se ye hua'. Agar me carefully drive karta toh na taani ka accident hota na uska mob girta na tum yaha aati na tumhare leg me moch aati..

priya(shocked): taani??Shocked

Rey: oh sorry, vo jiska accident hua tha vo taani n me

Priya: rey''

Rey(shocked): ya but tumhe kaise pata??Shocked

Priya can't say anything'..now she can understand kria's state of mind''. Ouch Wo waha se jaldi se nikal gayi'' usey rey par n khud par bohot gussa aa raha tha...Angry.

Rey: excuse me, hello, tum kaha ja rahi ho'.

Priya: tumhe kyu batau.. meri marzi jaha jaana hogi vaha jaungi... Aur haan ye lo tumhara mob'..Angry

Rey(in mind): ye issey kya ho gaya?? Ouch

Priya called aarsha'..

Arsha: kaha ho tum..

Priya: hospital'

Arsha: what??Shocked

Priya tell her everything'''.

Arsha: oh crap'' kria kaha gayi hogi??

Priya: I've no idea''(she cried out)Cry

Arsha: priya'. Plz don't cry'. Me usey call karne ki try karti hu''. N tum vahi ruko ham abhi vaha aate hai'

Priya still crying n cut d call'..

Arsha try to call kria but kria ka call baar baar unrichabale aa raha tha''.. usne jaake prem n baaki sab ko bataya sivay smriti k''. as smriti hotel me thehri thi'..

Prem: kria kaha gayi hogi'.. (tears rolled on his cheeks) ye sab meri vajah se hua hai''

Arsha: nahi meri vajah se'' (she cried out)

Karan: plz tum dono chup ho jao'.. ab jo ho gaya so ho gaya'' hame jaldi se kria ko dhundhna hoga'. Chalo jaldi plz''

Kisha: haan chalo jaldi'

Arpit: kish tum yahi ruko' agar wo yaha aaye toh hame batana'

Kisha(sobbing): ohk''. Tum logo ko bhi uski koi khabar mile toh muje batana''.

Sab jaldi se hospital jaane k liye nikle''. Prem car itni fast chala raha tha ki baaki sab ko darr lag raha tha'.

Arpit: prem thoda dhire chala yaar''

Karan: haan yaar darr lag raha hai''. Mana ki tu ussey pyaar karta hai n tuje uski fikar hai, hame bhi uski fikar hai par tu car ki speed kam kar yaar''

Now it's shocking time for arsha'''.

Arsha(in mind): kya?? Prem kria se pyaar karta hai'' par wo to''.

Usey samaj nahi aa raha tha kya ho raha hai'' she bursted out''.

Karan n arpit thought ki kria k liye''' wo hospital pohche n waha se priya ko pick kiya'. Tabhi rey taani ko leke bahar nikla'.. he saw arsha in car'..

Rey(loudly): arsha'

He run after car But tab tak wo waha se jaa chuke the'' unhone kria ko har possible jagah pe dhunda but wo kahi nahi mili'''

Rey(in mind): ye arsha kaha jaa rahi hai'.

Rey tried to call arsha but arsha cut his call'..

Prem: kaha gayi hogi''. Kahi usey kuch ho to nahi gaya hoga??

Arsha: plz aisa mat bolo'.. usey kuch nahi hoga'.

Prem's cell rang'..

Prem(sobbing n scared): smriti aunty ka call hai'.. unhe kya jawab du'

Arsha: uthao toh sahi baadme dekhenge.

Prem attend d call'.

Prem: hello aunty me thoda busy hu aapko baad me call karta hu''. (he cut d call)

Smriti: par meri baat toh'.(tab tak call end ho chukka tha)

Prem cried out'..

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phew... pata nahi kaisa hai... par haan iss baar jo bhi hai saacchi sacchi bolna... sirf muje bura lagega ye sochke nice ya awesome mat likhna plz jaisa bhi hai sach batana n jaha bhi mistakes ho batana n agar bura ho toh bura hi likhna taki muje pata chale ki it's good enough or not... plz...


yahi soch rahe hona ki kria gayi kaha... socho socho me bhi sochta hu...LOL



Edited by .....pujan..... - 24 April 2013 at 8:28am

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Resty...unres...bhai itni choti update Cry kuch toh rehm karo n ye kya kar diya..update toh jhakas tha bt itna chote n apne kha tha kriyansh ko milaunga..aab jb tak nhi milaoge tak tak katti

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Posted: 23 April 2013 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
sry pehle nahi kar saki

superb updates 
really i just loved it
thnks 4 pm


Edited by angel_luvkreya - 24 April 2013 at 9:25am

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Posted: 24 April 2013 at 12:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Riyaluvka2s

Resty..bhai update jldi n jb krdoge scrap kar dena


u'll get it soon...

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