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Posted: 11 February 2013 at 10:35pm | IP Logged


yeh meri pehli os hain.this is a small gift  valentine gifts for all my readers...this would be my last update until my exams get over.i would be inactive till march last week,that is when my exams get over.i wil miss everyone.this specially dedicated to aditi[my judwa],senorita[sweets aka shailaja]twinkle[meri beti aka maneet]kamini[kuhu] devil ji[konpal]and my dedu[kriti].


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dehradun mein kuch time spent kar te hi smriti kria se sari wade wapas lete hain.aur kria Mumbai jaa ta hain,aur usko ye paata chalta hain ki taani aur rey ek couple,woh wapas dehradun aata hain.aur purani kria ban jaata hain.uski best friend karan[imagine karan tacker] use propose kartha hain,kria karan ki dil thodna nahi chati toh who uss proposal accept kar thi hain.aur un dono ki shadi fix Kar thi hain

13th februray 2015

karan ki family shaadi delhi mein karna chati hain toh who sab deli jati hain.Aaj pura 3 saal ho gaya hain kriyansh ko kria aur reyansh ban ne mein.[I mean their breakup].aaj kria ki mehendi cermony thi,aur function ke baad  kria room mein rest kar rahi thi tabhi room mein koi knock kar tha hain , door kholti hain.aur kria waha rohan[karan's bro,imagine karan wahi]ko dekh thi hain aur unke saath kuch log ko dekh thi hain.aur who log hain louians.

Rohan kria ko baatha tha hain ki reyansh unki[karan and rohan] cousin.louians kria ko dekhke shock ho jatha hain.aur who sab unki  room se jaathi hain.

14th february 2015

kria's lehnga-[chitaranga's dress]



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Accidently rey ko kria ki diary mil thi hain,aur usko sab patha chalta hain.woh kria ki room mein jaa thi hain hain,aur use kehta hain usko maf karo,aur kehti hain who kria se abhi bhi pyaar kart tha hain.kria kehta hain ki usko pata hain rey taani se pyaar kar tha hu.rey  kehti hain taani ko uski childhood friend rahul se pyaar  hain,aur unn done shaadi kar li,un dono ko mila ke liye rey aur tani natuk kar raha tha.viren tabhi kria ke room mein  aate hain,aur use patha chal tha hain ki,rey hi kria ki ex lover hain.woh kria ko kehti hain ko kehta hain ki shaadi ki time ho raha hain aurniche ane ke liye boltha hain aur who chale jaata hain,rey sari hopes chod kar niche chale jaa tha hain.kria ek dam shattered  ho jathi hain,use kuch nahi samjah aa rahi hain.woh ye decision le thi hain ki who apni bestie ki khush ke liye apni pyar ko sacrifice karana padegi.kria baki ladkiyo mandap ke taraf le jaati hain.par rey ko dekhe  woh  stairs pe ruk jaati hain.Tabhi  karan aake uski haath pakd ke kehte hain ki,"kaha tha haath pakd ke mandip tak leke jaounga"[haan ji kkhh mein salman ki dialog chura ya hu].aur jab karan mandip ke taraf  jaa rahi toh woh kria ko rey ki taraf jaa ta hain.kria ki haath rey ko dekh kar keh tha hain ki"kismat kria aur rey ko milna zimadari mujhe di hain ,warna rey kria ab teri bhabhi hoti".kria thankfully"karan,thank you".karan"ooyye,kritz dosti mein no  sorry no thank u. agar tum mujhe aisee hi dekhti rahogi ... to tumhe mujhse pyar ho jayeega kyunki mein hu hi ithna handsome"kria"tu kabhi nahi sudarogi".

Kriyansh get married according to riti riwas.they take elders blessings.now it's the bidaayi time,they come to karan,karan kehta hain" Agle saat janmo tak tum rey ki ho,lekin 8 ve janam me tum meri hogi and that time please no rey ,no linecutter only tumhari  veeru[kria used to call karan veeru]yanki mein karan vadera,aur kittu tum mujhe is tarah mat dekho kyunki tumhe mujhse phir se pyaar ho jaega...".kria tearfully,but happily"tumhe aaj salman khan ki bhoot chad gaya hain,jab se bol rahi ho salman khan ki dialog mar rahi ho'".

Kria starts to cry during her bidaayi,tabhi rey use haatho mein uta tha hain aur kehta hai ''pushpa I  hate tears re".kria"rey ab tum rajesh khanna ki aur dialog mat marn apni bhai ki tarah".rey with naughty smile"agar tumhe rajesh khanna pasand nahi hain toh mein abhi imran hashmi ban jo kya".kria's mouth becomes in the shape of "o'.she starts to blush and hides her face in rey's chest.rey''senorita aise bade bade shero mein aise choti choti bath hoti rah thi hain senorita''.he carries her in his hands to the car and thus they started their journey of their new life.


so kaise tha os.ab mujhe apni comments aur likes dedo warnaAngryAngryAngry

with lov

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Edited by unnipgc - 11 February 2013 at 11:30pm

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Posted: 11 February 2013 at 11:23pm | IP Logged
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yayy mein first *dhinka chika*

Bahut chotu OS tha...

lekin it was awesome

loved it

lagta kuch zyada hi movies ka asar hogaya hai aap par

kabhi salman toh kabhi sharukh...bechare rajesh khanna ko bhi nahi choda

aur yeh kya...thoda sa toh KR romance deti...

and inactive firse...Hmmm I understand mere bhi exams aa rahe hai

and aap gussa kam karo

it was a beautiful OS

Thaks for dedicating it to me...love uHug

P.S mere OS par toh unres karoAngry


Edited by lovely7010 - 11 February 2013 at 11:47pm

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Posted: 12 February 2013 at 12:16am | IP Logged
beautiful OS 
kriyansh forever 

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Posted: 12 February 2013 at 1:05am | IP Logged
hero's bhara os...LOL

pehle sallu
phir rajesh khanna

fir imraan hashmi

good job chutki

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Posted: 12 February 2013 at 1:14am | IP Logged
wow awesome os...
tooo gud...
loved it...

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Posted: 12 February 2013 at 1:29am | IP Logged
Lagata hai padai ki vajah se filmi bhukhar chad gaya hai kya jo itne filmi dialog likh diya
Waise os was amazing
Do din me itne coincident realy tum hi kara sakti ho

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Posted: 12 February 2013 at 1:37am | IP Logged
Sweet os :-) you should write more of them

Nikki <3

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