~Dilbar Dilpar~Arhi FF* Thread 1* - Page 5

Nice title..i love it!!

Just read the first part n sounds interesting:D Looking 4ward 4 more!!
Both in the same field n status...perfect!! N the way they met n behaved..hilarious lolz

Btw i bet khushi is chamkili;) It has 2 be yaar.
So curious about ure up coming track:D Continue soon

Really Interesting!!...

ooh love this khushi
so chamkili is khushi
wonder what happened between them?

Wow

awesome start

loved the title

cant wait to read more

Eeeks and you are back with a bang  I love the title as usual will read 

I miss u and your stories so much welcome back 🤗
new story wow I'm very excited can't wait to read more
very interesting start khushi is very different in this story
I think Arnav's Chamkili is khushi 😉 and Arnav said he hasn't forget his chamkili loved it continue soon please and thank you so much for pm me 🤗

great beginning loved it awesome   who is this chamkili?  cant wait for more   glad u r back after so long really missed u!  

simply awesome.loved it

welcome back
awesome start
loved it
continue soon