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FF:Pehli Nazar..Ariya Reloaded! - Pg61 Discontinued (Page 46)

Diya121 Senior Member

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Posted: 29 March 2013 at 1:23am | IP Logged

This story is full time Paisa wusool one...

Really love all the parts every single thing about it..

Riya's ignorace, Arjun's anger...

What a thought Vidya Diii...Reallly awsome Imagination...

Then about today's update...

lOved Arjun and Riya's nok jhok..then Attitude "Betho" Uff...

Really can't wait to know what more...

Superb job...StarStarStar

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_BlackPearl_ IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 29 March 2013 at 1:51am | IP Logged
last part was he referring to Roshni ?

Nice part
sanakhan.khan16 Senior Member

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Posted: 29 March 2013 at 2:14am | IP Logged
wowww tats coolll sarcastic talk i loved it

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vidya.anand IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 March 2013 at 2:49am | IP Logged

Hello Ariyans...back with a new part...back to back...i am in a crazy state the result is this...Wink

pls read and comment on it..

PS: its a crazy expect all crazy things before you start reading it...yes, thats a disclaimer...dont tell me that i didnt warn you...

Thanks to all who liked it and commented on it...


Part 10:

Arjun snapped her short and replied back casually "ek wahi nahi….aise bohat saare baatein hai jisske wajeh se mujhe ghussa aatha hai…aur itna ghussa ke main saamne waale ko goliyon se udhaa bhi saktha hoom…..[looks up at her]samjhi ya samjhaavum?

Riya was stunned at his reply and immediately sank into the chair….

He looked at her response and commented "that's better!"


She was scared by his threat and sat down before him but she couldn't keep her mouth shut…..aakhir Riya ki  izzat ka sawaal tha…how could she give up and make him win so easily?…She spoke up in a slightly cracked up voice 

"aap mujhe dhamki deh rahe ho?"

He didn't bother to look at her but just replied "tumhe aise lagaa?"

She felt a bit relaxed thinking that he is going to apologize and take back his threat but no, he didn't do that…instead he spoke up again "dhamki nahi sacch tha….main sacch mein aisa kar saktha hoom…aur woh mera sabse badaa problem hai….."

He looked at her to see her expressions and he liked what he saw there….it was worth watching…..And as if answering to her unvoiced question, he replied "I was helping you Riya….tum mere problems ki list jo banaa rahi thi na? isse sabse uphar dhaal dho…"

Riya smirked at his sarcasm and replied with a faking smile "ok sir"

He shook his head in total amusement and continued his work!


Though he would never admit, Arjun was beginning to enjoy her ever bickering self……She was indeed different from the others…..He knew that she already had an idea about his past and about the tragedy which haunts him till date….even then, she doesn't behave sympathetic or try to empathize with him…..Right from the first day, she always behaves casual with him, pulls his leg, argues and fights with him for her stand!

Nobody who knew him and his past did that…..Though he had alienated himself from the rest, he was liking it when she behaved casual with him….like peers, colleagues, like team mates! He had missed all that when she distanced herself and tried to avoid and ignore him…..And today, he had the perfect opportunity to get that back! So he forced her to sit there right in front of him! He was waiting to get his answers!


As he immersed himself into the report, she was busy smacking him mentally for making her sit there and making her hear all his sarcastic snide comments….…..

Moreover, she had nothing much to do there except sit and wait patiently for his next order…..

She took the paper weight in her hand and was rolling it to and fro between her hands…She had this urge to throw it on his face and vent out her anger as she thought to herself "na jaane kya samajhtha hai apne aapko… khudko bhagwan samajhtha hai…jo woh sochtha hai wahi sahi aur baaki sab galath…..sab usski orders lo aur slaves ke tarah kaam karo…..dil toh kartha hai ke throw maar dhoom….akdu kaheeka!!"

Her thought process and Mission-Bash ASR (of course all inside her own little heart) came to an abrupt halt when he voiced out sternly….

"usse mere mooh pe maarne ki nahi soch rahi ho na?"

She stopped juggling the paper weight when he asked that but then replied with a sweet yet false smile "aap khaafi haddh tak saamne waale ke mann padh lethe hai, Impressive!"

Arjun put the file on the table and stood up and leaned closed to her with his hands on the table….his face facing her……She wouldn't agree but yes she was frightened when he did that…..He replied back "sirf mann hi nahi….bohat kuch paddh saktha hoom….aur woh kya kya hai jaan na chahogi?"  he finished it by raising his eyebrows!

She didn't speak up but just looked at him…..he added as he circled his index finger around her boundaries of her face "jaise ke tumaara yeh chehra….isspe saaf saaf likha hai ke tum darr gayi! Am I right? Or Am I right?"

Without a reply, she just gulped thinking what was he intending to do…..the office was empty except for the 2 of them……None to help her if he even tried to kill or rape her!

Her screams for help would not even reach beyond the four walls of this cabin…..even if it did go out, there was nobody out there to help her! Damn!

All sorts of bad thoughts came running into her head!

Arjun's POV: It was good to get her to a state where she was searching for replies once in a while…..else she never shut her bak baks!

He always wondered how she managed to keep talking continuously…..definitely a talent he lacked, he used to smile to himself thinking that!


He really was enjoying this and smirked at her frightened facial expressions when she managed to voice out "dekhiye…aap aisa kuch matth karenge…….ek choti si galthi keliye itna badaa sazaa?? Its not fair, haan? Ghusse mein kuch karke phir patchtaane se koyi fayda nahi…..mujhe jaane dijiye…..plzz…."

He could understand where her thoughts were running to…The girl who had daringly dragged him into her room and taunted him was now pleading before him….

No, he wasn't letting this go so easily…He decided to tease her a little…

He took his revolver and posed to wipe it and check the bullets sending a fright up her whole body……She tried to get up from her chair…..and was getting ready to run out of the room when he gestured with his revolver pointing to her direction……" beito…"

She had no choice but sit back reluctantly…..but she kept looking at the door and thought of all possibilities of an escape from there…..

He placed the revolver back on the table…."tum kahi yeh toh nahi soch rahi ke main tumhe goli maarne waala hoom…[when she didn't reply, he continued]daro matth…tumhe maarke mera kya fayda??……aaj kuch aur hi karne ka iraadha hai!"

Riya instantly thought the other possibility…..and shrieked out "nahi….." and instantly sprinted to the door……

He was quicker…as if anticipating her move, he grabbed her back and pinned her to the wall right near the door……"kahaan bhaag rahi ho Riya…agar maine kuch socha hai phir woh karke hi rehunga….."

[To be continued]

so how was it?? pls do reply!

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prava55663 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 March 2013 at 2:55am | IP Logged
yeehhh i stalked you

wonderful update...
Arjun propose karne wala hai na..
Am I right or Am I right"LOLLOL

revolver se hua kaam aasan...loved it...this is really crazy...
sachhi too cool update...

Edited by prava55663 - 29 March 2013 at 3:07am

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Payal_156 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 29 March 2013 at 2:59am | IP Logged
Omg 2nd
Di Hug
U r right u r right rofl
rofl ROFL
Paper weight bechara ROFL
Riya gye ap to rofl
arjun bro wow ROFL
One more save yay di
love it
love u di
ekdum tightly lol

Edited by Payal_156 - 29 March 2013 at 3:24am

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Posted: 29 March 2013 at 3:01am | IP Logged
LOL.. Awesome... ROFL

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Posted: 29 March 2013 at 3:15am | IP Logged
AAYE HAYE!!!! Kya baat hai Arjun...!!! Bechaari Ri ko kitna pareshaan kar raha hai!

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