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srija.singh04

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 7:52am | IP Logged
For some reason ur story reminded me of a book I had read long ago, 'Wuthering Heights', well probably cz of the inter-mingling of the real and the unreal. 
You know wat I have read many stories on Arnav-Khushi and for some reason, I still haven't reached my saturation point. But more often than not, I was in a position to atleast make a guess, even if an incorrect one as to where it was headed, but thats not the case with ur story, which makes reading it all the more fascinating.

The complexity in your story is so breath-taking, for instance with the dreams, they were as complex as the real ones are. I could never be sure as to who was dreaming and who the dream was about, and how could two people be so much intune with one-another as to literally share dreams. And yet the answer u gave for probably the only one possible, Love.

Please continue with it soon, would love to read more. And in fact m going to read this whole thing once again, cz one read in definitely not enough for meSmile

PS: While reading your story, I felt such intense emotions that I didn't know how and when I ended up writing a short poem. And believe me when I say that until I had read it once after writing it, I had no idea as to what I was writing. Here is the link, I would love for u to read itEmbarrassed

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 9:25am | IP Logged
wonderful update :)

update soon


Edited by .Dulcet - 14 February 2013 at 9:19am

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 10:28am | IP Logged
did he really ask her to marry him??

wow thats so cool

pure ASR!!! 

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 10:45am | IP Logged
Oh god...I came to read this story few days n I'm really hooked to it...it is beautiful...

Really very beautiful story...I have enjoyed reading the updates very very much...

Pls do try to pm me whenever u update...I'll buddy u

The proposal was so nice...just two clear words..marry me... Sigh

I loved it very much...

Shreya Star

Edited by jshreya16 - 14 February 2013 at 10:44am

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
Congrats on the new thread ...
 Am late in reading last few update... The buildup was happening and it had to burst ... How well both of them each other, totally tuned to the other. Arnav understand what Khusi must be feeling away from her home and her "I feel as if I have been banished from the Garden of Eden."  Left me feeling sad for her...how difficult it is to be away from your home where you have spent all your life...

His teasing is back :) and he just tells her what is in his heart "Marry me." No flowery words or elaborate declarations...reminded me of "true love needs no proof, the eyes told what heart felt"

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Posted: 14 February 2013 at 3:05pm | IP Logged
Omg omg omg he proposed!!!! I was wondering why Kashi came with Arnav but then there is this indifference to them...which was heart breaking!!! But it all makes sense now... N yesss he proposed!!! Wasn't expecting that !! That was a surprise!!!


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Posted: 15 February 2013 at 12:54am | IP Logged
What an update.  I held my breath as Arnav went thru the house,...very much afraid of Kashi's state of mind and when she opened the door and slapped him...I started smiling...she was still herself or should I say, she is back or awakened from the shock...

In his passionate embrace, she was able to let the grief wash over her, the grief that had frozen her heart into icewhich melted once he made her feel...as only he could.

You protected such an intensity in this situation that when they started talking like they used to at KH and also used the same words, both with same memory...it made me hope that she may be able to survive  and will not wither away being far from her sun...KH.





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Posted: 15 February 2013 at 3:21am | IP Logged
aaahhh..what a melt n what a praposalEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

simply adored the chapter devi...finally they r even...hush..their indiffrnce was killing me...m at peace now..LOL

continue soon..care urself...!!!

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