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Kalarikkal House [5]: new thread link posted p.152 (Page 10)

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Posted: 11 February 2013 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
Omg!
I never noticed that you put a link for thread five and now I'm an entire day late, an entire day of living my ordinary life, not knowing that chapter 56 is up! Ha okay...I'm dramatic, I know!

But better late than never Smile

And how I loved this chapter! It took me back again...to Kalarikkal house yet again, more deeply than the last chapter did. This chapter was perfect in so many ways! Loved it...like love all your chapters. But this...think one takes the cake for now!

It had everything! Feisty Kashi, slap, passion, the ever-so-hot-and-passionate kiss, and finally... the proposal! Perfection!

And I can't believe he proposed! And what a proposal it was! So simple, yet so passionate and sweet! 

Now...I wonder how she'd respond. Knowing her...I think she'd refuse at first Big smile

Cheers!


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Posted: 11 February 2013 at 12:32pm | IP Logged
goodness gracious! Your brilliance, devi, is beyond comprehension.

However odd this nay sound, I had a feeling since the second he kissed her against he door, that the talk of marriage was going to make an entry in this chapter. And it DID.

I know I can never guess khushi's answer so I won't even try, I'll go with the flow.

But I hold utmost respect for this story and of course for you, i just want you to know how honoured I feel to be able to read this beauty, to know a piece like this exists.

love
sonia

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Posted: 11 February 2013 at 3:34pm | IP Logged
Congrats on the new thread.
 
Great update pleased that Kashi has given in a little. The whole deja vu was brilliant and the proposal was beautiful hope she says yes

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Posted: 11 February 2013 at 3:37pm | IP Logged
Saving the best for last ;) [Just kidding...]

Genesis seems to be a re-occurring theme for me this week. The reference seems so apt, for Kashi, it was Eden. 

Forget the proposal, this update brought back memories. The whole slamming against the door scene was so Shiv and Gauri. The when I read drew blood, I could only think of Meera and Pawan [If my memory is right]. 

Kashi and Arnav had never left, but I did miss this anger between the two. It made me happy to see them back in form. 

Congrats on Thread 5, D. May we have many more! :)



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Posted: 11 February 2013 at 3:45pm | IP Logged
Congrats in new thread. n great update :)

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Posted: 11 February 2013 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
Congrats dear. Loved it. He proposed! :)

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Posted: 11 February 2013 at 4:23pm | IP Logged
Wow... He Proposed to her , and what a proposal it was , no cheesy romantic lines... just a simple " Marry me "  ,  his proposal  was so true to his character Clap ... I had this  huge  goofy grin on my face while reading this chapterBig smile ...  It was a meltdown  indeed ...  But only thing I am concerned about now is her response to his proposal ...    Can't wait to read the next chapter ...

BTW  CONGRATS Party Devi ... For the 5th  thread of the story ...


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Posted: 11 February 2013 at 5:54pm | IP Logged
Haaawww!!!!! I had been hoping for a proposal since sooo sooo long ago but never actually EXPECTED it!!!! Maan gaye, publicenemy, you made my day... sorry, night! LOL it's night time as I read this! Now i'm sure i'll have good arshi dreams but please don't make Khushi's ego refuse, okay??? Make her give in, even if takes... what? 5 updates???? but i wudn't mind of it happens next update it self!!!! LOL!!! Keep it up!!!!

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