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Hello lovely readers,

Firstly, thank you for stopping by to check out this FF/SS.  If it's to your liking, please do stay and contribute (we are a talkative bunch), but if not to your liking, well... (you know what to do J).

I have been writing FFs for a bit now, and I have realized that there are some ' shall we call them 'suggestions' ' that are good to put forth and get out of the way so that we can make this experience as enjoyable as possible for all of us.  Admittedly, many of these are to make this easier for me ;), but I do hope you can cooperate.   

Onto the Suggestions:

A)    Please Do Not ask for longer chapters.  At times I write 5 pages, at times I write three paragraphs, but usually they average to about 2-3 pages per update.  I update at least once a week (for some of my stories, more often), so hopefully this will not pose a problem.

B)     Please Do Not ask for specific scenes (i.e., More scenes on couples that you like!).  I have tried to be the sort of writer who accedes to such wishes, but have found out the distressing truth that I am not (alas!).  So, I request you to refrain and let me tell the story as I wish.   

C)    Please Do Not ask for updates if you do not comment other than to say, "Update please!"

D) And lastly, I have to address the growing number of buddy requests.  While I am flattered and thankful, the PM-ing is a bit of a torture for me as I can only do 20 at a time and I have 4 ongoing stories.   Thus, I have decided to do the following. 

- I will only accept buddy requests from readers who have commented (read comment, not like) at least three times on any of my threads. 

- I will delete readers from my list who have stopped commenting for a month or more as I will assume that you have stopped reading my stories and do not wish to be bothered with PMs. 

- There are a few readers who offer their comments via PM to me; while I quite enjoy your feedback, I request you to post it on the thread itself, as my PM box tends to become crowded as is.

 Even though it doesn't seem like it at times, I do read every single one of your comments and cherish them.  I show my gratitude by usually updating more often than to leave a note saying 'Thank you".  I hope you will take that manner of Thanks instead of my "Thank you's" anyways J

Lastly, I do encourage you to comment.  In the past, the best FF threads I have had (i.e. REEL, The Oldest Story, Love and Despair, Eden) have all had healthy and prolific discussions on the characters, situations, and the like with my readers becoming quite friendly with each other; they have become something of a reader group that travel together, I have noticed, even checking in when a key member is missing for a few days.  That sort of camaraderie and engagement is the greatest muse for a writer and the best reward as well. 

Thank you for taking the time to read this long(a$$) intro.

 

And now, a warm welcome aboard,

 

-Devi     

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Hello Everyone,

  This is a short series (Edit: 8/3/12: It turns out that I don't know how to write SHORT stories!!!  It's now 17 chapters and I have not even covered a whole day!!) based on IPKKND.   The setting is a bit different from the show, but the characters of Arnav and Khushi are still somewhat similar to that of the show (Arnav more so than Khushi). 

 

-Devi


Chapter 1  - In An Unknown Land

Chapter 2 - Kalarikkal House

Chapter 3 - The Condition

Chapter 4 - What Do You Know of Us Anyway?

Chapter 5 - Murderous Witch

Chapter 6 - Violence Begets Violence

Chapter 7 - Ruminations

Chapter 8 - Stillness

Chapter 9 - Umikiri

Chapter 10 - The Incident at the Pond

Chapter 11 - Kashi Chechy is a... Puli

Chapter 12 - Nalan's Lie

Chapter 13 - A True Disappointment

Chapter 14: You Owe Me

Chapter 15: What More Could I Want?

Chapter 16: A Memory of Something That Never Was...

Chapter 17: Shivan

Chapter 18: Shavathaalam

Chapter 19: Two and Two


Thread 2


Chapter 20: Sorceress

Chapter 21: Doppelganger

Chapter 22: Man-eaters

Chapter 23: Another Dawn

Chapter 24: About Last Night

Chapter 25: En Manamurukum...

Chapter 26: The Lion Cub

Chapter 27: Air

Chapter 28: Straight Talk

Chapter 29: Chamber of Secrets

Chapter 30: Navarasas

Chapter 31: Brothers and Sisters

Chapter 32: Acid

Chapter 33: Public Enemy


THREAD 3

Chapter 34: Land of the Dead

Chapter 35: Tempting the Fates

Chapter 36: The Certainty Principle

Chapter 37: Abomination

Chapter 38: A River Runs Through It

Chapter 39: Heart's Blood

Chapter 40: Der Schrei

Chapter 41: Damsel in Distress...

Chapter 42: The Dreams - Part 1

Chapter 43: The Dreams - Part 2

Chapter 44: The Dreams - Part 3

Chapter 45: The Awakening


THREAD 4

Chapter 46: Indigenous 

Chapter 47: Uncharted Waters

Chapter 48: Eviction

Chapter 49: Omniscient

Chapter 50: The Fog

Chapter 51: You Against the World

Chapter 52:  Ente Sooryaputhrikku

Chapter 53:  Novel

Chapter 54: Fifth Day

Chapter 55 and Note:  Of Sadistic Pricks and Barbarians


THREAD 5

Chapter 56: The Great Melt

Chapter 57: Once Upon A Time...

Chapter 58:  Kabhi Dil Ke Kareeb...

Chapter 59: Truths and Lies

Chapter 60: Fire and Water

Chapter 61: An Eternity

Chapter 62: Serendipity

NOTE

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I had a sense of deja vu (like Arnav and Kashi) while reading this update...Smile
And I was smiling, and was having this strange anticipation that something major's gonna happen as I was reading this...
And then... DANG! He proposed!
No flowery speeches, no romantic surroundings, no pretense... Just those simple two words, spoken in earnest...
But still, I'd list this as one of the memorable proposals that I've read about, so far.
The build-up of that scene, the turn their conversation was taking itself was so unique...

Arnav being cautious while entering the guest-house, him knowing that Kashi won't be conceding easily, acting on instinct when Kashi tried to take him by surprise and flee - all shows how attuned he is to her, without even trying hard...

All in all, it was a wonderful update...
And I had to read it twice, just to make sure that I didn't miss out on anything, in my happiness...LOL

P.S.-Congratulations on this brand new 5th thread...Big smile

P.P.S. - I can't tell you how happy I am to get this position. Wish I was this prompt when it comes to my exams...
Anyways, I hope my comment was worthy of this 1st position...
 
P.P.P.S. - The title's so apt! Smile


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That was simply...wow! The whole recollection of their first proper conversation definitely was a great build up for what came next. 
Then it had led to the beginning of their feelings for each other and now it led to Arnav's proposal.

And coming to the proposal, it was one of the best I've read till now. 
Staying true to his character he simply put forth what he wanted without all the romantic declarations and sugarcoating. 

A beautiful chapter. I'm eager to read Kashi's reaction although I have a feeling she won't make this easy for him ;) 
Continue soon! 


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Big smile  Congratulations on the new thread ... 

The Great Meltdown ... Gosh it happened ... Party Dancing  Day Dreaming
what a relief ... all the dormant feelings out again ... 

"I feel as if I have been banished from the Garden of Eden " ... Embarrassed LOL
"So you admit that you seduced me into eating the apple " ... LOL

Loved the passionate proposal ... 



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Reswa..


Ok I read this 4 times already and have decided to re-read all the chapters again from the beginning:)

Thank you Devi for a very beautiful update.

One of your Stalker :)


And just because ... Deepam...Deepam...Deepam...Deepam...

Sigh


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Congrats for the new thread. I am very happy to finally see u update again. Just read the last two chapters. Loved it. Finally kashi is coming around. Waiting for the kalarikkal house's mystery to unfold. Please cont soon.

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wow...i'm glad to see you back in action... Smile loved kashi's response... and congrads on the new thread...

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