jaj os : a lovely love story

I am inspired by silpasivan to post this jaj os and I am extremely sorry if anyone is hurt by this post                        

Part 1 : once upon a time there was a girl named gia who lived in a posh colony . She was very beautiful and she had a heart of gold . She was happy with her life . One day a boy named vikram aka vicky shifted to their colony . Everyone was curious to know about him and his family

Colony members : Gia ! where r u ? Pls come here.
gia came there .

Gia : wat happened ? Why everyone is calling me ?

C m : gia we want ur help pls don't refuse us . Can u see that mansion like house ? Go there and find out who the newcomers are ?

Gia ( nervously) : OK .
She went there and she knocked on the door ...

part 2

Edited by .nightqueen - 10 years ago

Awesome story dear plz plz continue and ur not hurting anyone love ur os 

nice start..continue it 😊

nice story. Pls continue it.

but one small help as iam new to this forum i dont know how to create page 2 

i forgot to mention that there is no jeannie in this jaj os .

part 2 :
 as gia knocked on the door vicky opened the door and he was not really happy or excited on seeing gia .

vicky : who r u ? and what do u want ?

gia : umm... iam gia ur new neighbour . i came here as we all want 2 know about u and ur family .

vicky (in a sarcastic tone) : i dont have time to waste on all that and if u dont want anything else u can go from here .

gia (in her mind) : how arrogant he is ! i better say everyone about his arrogance .

gia went away from there . then all colony members came near her and began asking her

c m : how is our new neighbor ? is he polite or not ? how is his family ?

gia (disappointed) : he is not at all polite , he is so arrogant . never try to talk with him .

c m : is he that arrogant ? we dont think so if u say so we believe u .

gia : why shud i say lie about him ?

saying this gia went to her house and her mother asked her

gia 's mother : what happened dear ? 2day ur not looking happy at all ?

gia : nothing ma just 4get it .

she had her lunch and went to a park .

and then a girl who was looking quite modern and pretty by mistake bump in to gia.

girl : oh hello ! cant u see ? u spoiled my most expensive dress .

gia : iam sorry please excuse me .

girl : ok ok u go i can buy dozens of that kind of dresses.

gia does not give any reply and she went from there and sat on a bench .

gia (in her mind) : even she is so arrogant and dominating like him !

then at night  she went to her own house and fell asleep.

few days passed away like this and there was a function going to be held in celebration of the birthday of their secretory and it was compulsory 4 everyone to attend the function . gia was confused what to wear .

gia : oh god ! iam so confused wat shud i wear for the party .

then her mother gives her a packet

g m : dear open this packet and see there is a gift 4 u .

gia opened the packet and there was a v beautiful glittering pink ball gown .

gia : wow ! thank u so much ma how much u care 4 me .

g m : ur my only child dear .

wearing that dress she went to the party and there she was surprised to see vicky and the girl (whom she met in the park) .

gia : she is the same girl ! whom i met in the park !

vicky : now iam going to introduce  my girl friend to everyone she is priya .

gia : oh she is vicky 's girl friend priya ? 😲

part 3
Edited by .nightqueen - 10 years ago

hai dear,
its really a nice story. i like it very much.
continue soon ,want to read more

then dear if i update any post i will pm u.Edited by silpasivan - 11 years ago

but what u will edit ? anyways ur jaj all 3 os (the rain , a cinderela story and a vampire love story) are the best and when ur going to post cinderela story last part and vampire love story other parts iam super excited
Edited by jeanniejuju1111 - 11 years ago

Hey, its really nice story. Read both part together.
Intresting concept. Continue soon

thank u frnds for ur lovely comments