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Posted: 03 March 2013 at 10:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by viswai123

Write a short imaginary OS. In your OS Ratna is a boy and Shubba is a girl. Ratna is college going boy who fell in love with Shubba from his same Chemistry class. Write a scene on Ratna proposing to Shubba.

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Ikathei il varum anaithum karapanaiya...ithu yaraum pun paduthavo, chuttikatavo ezhutha padavillai...mothathila ena solla varen na...intha kelviya keta azhukuthan pathi seruppu adi poganumTongue!

Early morning, before class, Shubba, wearing a beautiful pink anarkali chudithar, is working on a reaction in the lab. Ratna peeps into the room and sees that no one is there, except Shubba. Gathering his courage, he enters the room and slowly without making a sound, walks towards her. She is busy observing a reaction change and doesn't notice him coming from behind her. 
Ratna, "Boo!"
Shubba screams and drops the beaker in the sink and it explodes and the liquid splashes on Ratna.
Shubba, "Aah! Sorry!" Wiping off the liquid from his shirt as he admires her.
Shubba looks at him and becomes angry, "Are you nuts?! What would have happened if it was an acid or some dangerous chemical?"
Ratna, "What are you doing here this early?"
Shubba, "Athu...illa...chumma...I was getting ready for class."
Ratna, "hmm...Lab attendant, Jeya ku therinja ena agumnu theriyumla?"
Shubba, "Aiyoo...venam. Don't tell anyone! Veetula ponnu paka varanga, athan seikrama a project a panita; mathiyanathukula veetuku poirulamnu...",
Ratna, "Hm...seri, mappila ethir maniku vararu?"
Shubba, "Evening 6o'clock."
Ratna, "Appo oru deal. Ein kuda va", holding her hands and dragging her out of the lab to the parking stand. Guys and girls around the college look at them. Shubba feels uneasy, while Ratna takes his bike and orders her to sit. Shubba, "Aiyada! Azha paru. Enala mudiyathu." and she starts walking. Ratna holds her hand and pulls her towards him firmly that she falls on him; her head hitting his shoulders. "Ow!"
He whispers to her, "Ippo eira poriya? illa? antha Jeya a pathi theriyumla? semester exam ezhutha mudiyathu, parents a kuttitu varanum...Eiru."
A little scared, looking around and finding that everyone was doing their job and not noticing them, she agrees to go on the bike with him. They go out of the college. They drive away along the highway in the outskirts of the city. Sun's rays, over the landscape light every blade of grass and leaf. Shubba looks around and finds that they are going in a direction that she didn't know.
"Ratna! Enga poram? Stop!"
"Una kadathitu pogala. So don't worry."
Shubba is confused and even more confused when Ratna takes a right turn on a narrow pathway. It is a short journey and they come to a lake. Shubba gets down and looks around. Thick trees on one side and a clear sky with a mountainous backdrop on the other. There is a small, narrow wooden bridge leading to a small wooden cottage in the center of the lake.
Shubba, "Is this? Is this Kakka Kakka shooting spot?"
Ratna, "Correct a kandupidichitiya! Va!"
Pulling her and walking forward towards the bridge. Shubba just releases from his grip. annoyed and shy at the same time. Ratna looks at her with a sly smile. Shubba continues walking on the bridge, not wanting to hold on to Ratna. The old bridge creeks and shakes at her step, that she looses her grip and Ratna holds her. Both of them share a moment in each other's eyes.
Shubba, "Ena vidu!"
Ratna, "Nee than ena pidichitu iruka."
On a moment of realisation, Shubba lets go and there is an awkward silence. Ratna just walks ahead and enters the house followed by Shubba, curiously. 
Shubba, "Why did you bring me here?"
Ratna, "Huh?", giving back a sly smile that fear strikes Shubba and bizarre thoughts come to her. Facing Jeya's wrath sounded better now. She entered the house carefully, knowing very well she was going to regret it. Maybe she should have listened to her mother and not come to college at all today.
She looked at the sparkling clean, beautiful house in awe. Ratna looked at her and smiled, "Come in. This is my favourite place. From today let's be friends. This is just my way of celebrating the beginning of our friendship. Sit down", offering her a chair. Shubba sat down silently, not knowing how to react. Ratna continued, "Coke or coffee?"
Shubba, "No, thanks."
Ratna, "StarBucks Frappucino?"
Well that was something she souldn't resist and she nodded yes. Both of them shared casual friendly talks about their interests and time passed. After a while, Shubba, "I'm feeling sleepy. I don't know why...I think we should go back to college. I can go home." shaking her head and not realising why she was feeling dizzy. Ratna, "Ok!", and he got up. Shubba tried to get up but couldn't. She was feeling very dizzy and couldn't stand up and he had to help her up. The last thing she remembered was she was in his arms before she blacked out.


She woke up to find herself back at home in her bed. She tried remembering the last thing that she could. All she could remember was Ratna. What did he do? Why was she back home? She woke up amd looked out of the window. It was getting dark. She took the clock on her night stand. 6:30pm. The groom was to come at 6. What had happened? What a blunder she had done by deciding to go with him? She walked out of the room slowly; not knowing what was the circumstances outside. Cautiously she opened the door and came out. Her room was in the first floor and she could hear voices on the ground floor. She silently peeped to see what was going on. Her heart stopped to see her whole family and another family, probably the groom's sitting and chatting. Most horrifyingly, Ratna was sitting in the center.
Her mother, Shobi, "Manichirunga mappila. Ithu veraikum ipdi nadanthathei illa."
Mappila? Ratna? What?
Ratna, "Parava illa athe. Enaku unga ponna romba pidichuruku. Shubba a vida oru nalla manaivi enaku kadaika matanga."
Shobi, "Athu unga perunthanma, mappila."
Shubba looked at the happenings confused to the core. Suddenly the twins of the house, Shamz and Tanu notices Shubba, "Chitti! Akka vanthachu!" Everyone turn to look at Shubba who was looking all the more blank. Shubba turns to look at them and gives them her stare, that both of them start giggling and run away. 
Shobi, annoyed, stands up and goes to her and whispers, "Ai. Arivu illa?"
Shubba, "Huh?"
Shobi, "Ipdiya varuva? Poi patu pudava mathitu va?"
Ratna, "Illa athai. Avunga ipdi irunthalum azhaguthan. Epdiyum veetula ipdithena iruka poranga? Athu la ethuku patu pudava?"
Shubba looks speechlessly at Ratna who winks at her back.
Shobi smiles at her mappila and then turns to Shubba and glares at her before going and sitting in her chair. Shubba stares at him not knowing what to do.
Before she could react, the marriage was fixed for the following month when their exams got over.


Night before their marriage, kalyana madapam; motta madi. Shubba dressed up elegantly looking up at the moon. Mehandhi drying on her hands. Ratna comes there. 
Ratna, "Shubba, romba azhaga iruka."
She just smiles. 
He continues, "Kaila maruthoni enum azhaga iruku."
Shubba, "Apdiya? Ena vida maruthoni azhaga iruka?"
Ratna, "Aiyoo! Apdi nan sollala..aha..romba careful a irukanum pola." 
Both of them laugh. 
Suddenly Shubba asks, "Anaiku...anaiku...anga...ena achu?"
Ratna, "Enaiku?...aha? oh...anaika? hm..atha nalaiku ithei neram solluren. Bye for now!", he winks at her and laughs at her astonished face and walks out. Shubba stares blankly after him. 

Anga ena nadathathunu sollunga Mr. Ratna and Mrs. Shubba RatnaTongue!


Edited by Gisel - 03 March 2013 at 12:25pm

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Posted: 03 March 2013 at 11:02am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Gisel

[QUOTE=viswai123]Write a short imaginary OS. In your OS Ratna is a boy and Shubba is a girl. Ratna is college going boy who fell in love with Shubba from his same Chemistry class. Write a scene on Ratna proposing to Shubba.

 
 
Anga ena nadathathunu sollunga Mr. Ratna and Mrs. Shubba RatnaTongue!
[/QUOTE
 
too good gisel...ROFL, cant stop laughing...the whole scene imagining shubba as coy, shy, reluctant, and ratna --super...but did i miss ratna proposing to shubba somewhere or this turns out to be conveniently luv cum arranged?
shobi as the glaring mom--cud well imagine that, even w/o knowing how she looks...rofl..
and how come lab attendant at the ponnu paarkira scene?..and the twins...real cute...
 
and yes it wud be nice to know what happened after the coffee...does this hv a part 2 also?

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Posted: 03 March 2013 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Hahaha...got confused at who Shubba will be afraid of...so kept juggling between who the mother will be and who the lab attendant will be...so a typo...edited it! Tongue!
Part 2...hm...atha Mr. Ratna sonna nala irukum!LOL!

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Posted: 03 March 2013 at 11:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by viswai123

Write a small OS on Tanu and Shammu reunion after 20 days.

"TAAANNNUUU! Una evalo miss panen theriyuma! Epdi iruka?"
"Fine, I.."
"Nee onum sollatha! Nan evalo kashta patein theriyuma nee illa ma."
"Athu theriyum. Athu..."
"Un kuda chat panna ma thookam varala."
"Sha.."
"Un voice a kekama sapda mudiyala."
"Ai..."
"Un neenaipu eppovumai ein thalai kula poi..."
"Oru nimisham..."
"...ethuvumai panna muidyala. Nee pesatha. Irunthalum oru varutha kuda sollama. Epdi unala?"
"Shamu..."
"Evalo bayanthein theriyuma?"
"Ai looseu. Oru nimisham!"
"Huh?"
"Un phone enga?"
"Kanama pochu."
"Un laptop?"
"Athu repair panna shop la iruku."
"Un internet connection?"
"Romba weeku"
"Postmail a check panuviya?"
"Letterlan evein vasipan?"
"Hhn. Approm? Loose ponnu. Nan summa 20days joliya Gisel kuda time spend panna ponen. Etho sollitu polamainu phone panna; out of range...oru email, chat, forum PM um check pannala...serinu letter amicha atheiyum read pannala."
*Crying*
"Aiyoo...Shamu azhatha...enakum azhuga varuthu..." *Crying*
"Tanuu...Nan romba bayanthiten"
"Shamu...Nan mothalaya sollirukanum...sorry."
"Un thappu illa. Nan thaan over a react panitein."
"Illa ein thappu thaan. Nan thaan modhala sollirukanum."
"Illa..illa..ein thappu thaan."
"Ein thappunu sollurein la!"
"Tanu."
"Ena?"
"Tanu."
"Ena?" *wiping her tears*
"I love you."
"I love you too. Enuma antha Gisel nama renduveruka naduvula varamata."
"Enaiya nadakuthu inga?"


Edited by Gisel - 03 March 2013 at 11:41am

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Posted: 03 March 2013 at 11:40am | IP Logged
Ith undan intha nigalichi il en neram neraivu perukirathu...Marupadiyum kandippa santhika venam intha nela meila...maybe on the 'Surya' side of the hot-seat Tongue!
Thank you! Had loads of fun and shivers!
I have completed all questions right? or anything left?
Time for  the next MOTW!

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Posted: 03 March 2013 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Gisel chancey illa da... Too good. StarClap Felt like watching movie Tongue

Haha strict lab attender Jeya and shubba,'s mom Shobi... Rofl rofl

Characters so well etched. Hmmm... Ratna engalukum sollu what happened nu ROFL

Well done gisel Star

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Posted: 03 March 2013 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Ennathu done a? Ennoda Suchi Vs Shyamala scene enga...

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Posted: 03 March 2013 at 12:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by viswai123

Ennathu done a? Ennoda Suchi Vs Shyamala scene enga...

Oh...aama la...hmm...shaabaa...ippo vei kaana katuthei!

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