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Posted: 05 May 2013 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by KS_Shreya

Kya baat hai RP aur GD!Clap</font>[/I]
thank u shreya
aap bhi kuch arz kardoSmile

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Posted: 05 May 2013 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rosepink.

@GD
loved ur lines belEmbarrassed

q tu acha lagta h waqt mila toh sochege
tujh me kya kya dekha h waqt mila toh sochege

saara shehar shanasaai ka dawedar toh h lekin
kaun humara apna h waqt mila toh sochege

mausam, khushboo, baad-e saba, chaand, shafaq aur taaron me
kaun tumhare jaisa h waqt mila toh sochege

ya toh apne dil ki mano ya phir dunya walo ki
mashwara uska acha h waqt mila toh sochege


Shukriya,...Embarrassed

wo bhoolta hy na dil mei utarta hy mujhy
hamesha maar muhabbat ki maarta hy mujhy;
mai us ka lamha-e-maujud hun magr wo shaks
fuzul waqt samajh kr guzaarta hy mujhy;
bazahir aisa nahi hy pairr is haweli ka
hawa chaly tou buht phool maarta hy mujhy;
mai us k haath sy jaata hun mal-o-zarr ki tarah
wo roz qarz samjh kr utarta hy mujhy...

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Posted: 05 May 2013 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
hmm bohot emotional poem h..

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Posted: 05 May 2013 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
kabhi un ka naam lena
kabhi un ki baat karna
mera zauq unki chahat
mera shauq un pe marna
kabhi chalte chalte thamna
aur tham k baith jana
kabhi ladkhada k girna
aur gir k phir sambhalna
kbhi raat raat rona
kbhi din chadhe sisakna
kbhi darya darya rehna
kabhi boond ko tarasna
humesha koi wasta h apna
yehi zindagi h apni
yehi raasta h apna

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Posted: 06 May 2013 at 3:54am | IP Logged

@aman di

nice lines diTongue
 
@rose
hadsaate zindgi
beautiful linesTongue
kabhi unka
soo seet lines roseStar
tfsClap
 
@dada
both r awesome Thumbs Up bt q tu achha lagta hai was touchy  
                                                                                    

 



Edited by cutie006 - 06 May 2013 at 4:10am

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Posted: 06 May 2013 at 4:09am | IP Logged
Deep,RP, GD... Lovely lines...!!!ClapClap

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Posted: 06 May 2013 at 8:14am | IP Logged

Hi,frndsTongue

after ghazal,dis is my first attempt 4 POEM 

TongueEk baat tujhe samjhani thi
mere dil ki baat batani thi
kya haal hai mera bin tere
bas aaj tujhe dikhlani thi.Heart
 
tera hansta hua khila chehraSmile
jab samne mere aata tha
gum jaane mujhse dar dar ke
dur kahin kho jaata tha
teri ek hansi ke sadqe me
mujhe jaan apni lootani thi
ek baat...
 
jab bahte the tere aansuCry
dil ke tukre ho jaate theBroken Heart
teri aankhon ke bahte aansu
meri aankhon me aa jaate the
ye aankhe teri na nam ho kabhi
bas baat ye man me thani thi
ek baat ...
 
Starteri ek jhalak pa jane ko
dil rahta tha betab sa kyun
par samne jab tum aate the
har labz lage anjaan sa kyun
ek pal me wo pal beet gaya
waqt ki ye manmani thiAngry
ek baat...
 
kuchh to tha teri baaton me
jo dil ko sukun de jaati thi
ek lamhein me jane kitni
umra meri kat jaati thi
jaadu tha teri baaton ka
ya waqt ki karastani thi
ek baat...
 
ek lamha aisaa na gujra
jab na tujhko yaad kiya
mil na sake jab rahon me
sapno me mulakaat kiyaDay Dreaming
kya baat thi tujhme rab jane
main kyun aisee diwani thi
ek baat...
 
Aur bhi thi baatein kitni
jo karni thi tere aageLOL
par gaye jo mud ke dekha nahin
main aayee thi bhage bhage
teri nazron ne kuchh kaha to tha
kya jaan ke main anjaani thi
ek baat...
 
Cryab beet gaye sadiyan kitni
na wo aaye na khabar unki
kisse aur chaman ka phool tha wo
ya phir meri naadani thi
ek baat use samjhani thi
mere dil ki baat batani thi.Tongue
 


Edited by cutie006 - 06 May 2013 at 8:20am

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Posted: 06 May 2013 at 1:48pm | IP Logged
So nice GD, RP, and Cutie. Clap

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