HAMESHA AND FOREVER AARYA OS Complete - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
This is so nice! I totally loved the way you wrote it out.. πŸ‘πŸ‘ Good job! πŸ‘β­οΈ

Wow.. all the scenes are superb! πŸ˜ƒ AarYa scene was awesome! Aarti tried to make Yash calmed down by topping up his confidence through her words! β­οΈπŸ˜ƒ Loved it.. Awww.. Yash slept on her lap.. πŸ˜³πŸ˜³ I wished this could be a real one.. πŸ˜‰

Suicide scene.. 😲 Oh god! Thank god.. She came at the right time and others too! 

Great.. waiting for next part! πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: swaggerchick16


wud love some aarya scenes too hehe😳

 
i m sorry this part didnot have that much aarya scenes..
but dont worry in third part i would add some cute scenes... it wont as  hot but i promise it will be cute and emotional..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: princess121993

 
i m sorry this part didnot have that much aarya scenes..
but dont worry in third part i would add some cute scenes... it wont as  hot but i promise it will be cute and emotional..


ok then😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
⭐️Wow, beautifully written, waiting for d next part, feelin sorry for gayatri
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR

This is so nice! I totally loved the way you wrote it out.. πŸ‘πŸ‘ Good job! πŸ‘β­οΈ


Wow.. all the scenes are superb! πŸ˜ƒ AarYa scene was awesome! Aarti tried to make Yash calmed down by topping up his confidence through her words! β­οΈπŸ˜ƒ Loved it.. Awww.. Yash slept on her lap.. πŸ˜³πŸ˜³ I wished this could be a real one.. πŸ˜‰

Suicide scene.. 😲 Oh god! Thank god.. She came at the right time and others too! 

Great.. waiting for next part! πŸ˜‰

 
thanks buddy
will update asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh dear you write so well dear i am amaze that this is your first attempt.. love the whole family couples intraction of thir own... AARYA oh always how they support each other and get their strength to fight outside cruel world... then again AARTI our heroine come up as Saviuor for g3  ignboring her pregnancy condition and injured herself..
 
looking forward to more emotional part whre AArto and G3 tal not as in a realtion but women bonding.. you really did a fab part dearπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved the first part and second part as well. I would love to see this happening in the show as well. I can't wait for the next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovable OS friend...

WAITING FOR NEXT PART. PLZ UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow u r so great dear i am loving ur part so much !!!!
ARya's part was simply superb and i cannot stop from admiring them !!!!
 
continue soon dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
I enjoyed part 2! It was very emotional. Can't wait for the next chapter!