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Posted: 11 years ago
A 100/100 ud dear..it waz too cute..loved taani's dress..nd swayam d possessive indian bhai..lol...nd d last scene just stole ma heart..rey takin taani away frm ol of 'em..!! Plz continue soon..nd thnx fr d pm!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was so good yaar i lovd it reys reaction and swayam indian possesive bhai(lol!!) i lovd it
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Posted: 11 years ago
hehehe thwas really awsum dr!! rey's vishaka dialogue 😆 lovely update dr!! update soon🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
The End?! THE END?! * in broken voice* ARE YOU FREAKIN SERIOUS?!! Gosh.. I was so so loving this and you ended this.. * crying drastically* PLEASE PLEASE EK AUR PART LIKHO NA JAB TR FIRE EXIT ME HOTE HAI... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE.. * down on my knees*
 
Gosh.. the update was amazing.. Loved SABKA reaction when Taani entered the canteen.. Specially humera boys + Reyam.. Swayam ka possessive side is always a treat to read.. N hayyee.. Rey getting lost in his princess's beauty was shoo shweet!! Loved it!! Please ek aur part likho.. please!! N agar likhogi then do do pm me!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey guys I knw I knw u all r thinking ke OS end hoke bhi maine nxt part kyun likha.. bt my new frnd suggest me to write fire exit scene n guysss how can I say no to any TRians after all we r a family.. hehe.. so this part is actually goes to shivangi_taarey.. I'm dedicating dis part to you.. :-) hope u'll like it..


Part 3 (now seriously last part):


Taarey enter in fire exit.. rey is still holding taani's hand.. he jus den pin her to the wall n stare at her very intensely.. He does not let her hand go cuz he knws dat she can't resist dis much intensity n she will definitely run.. taani looks into those intense eyes n her heart beat skips a bit.. she feels so shy so she decides not to look into those eyes n den she looks here n der.. here rey notices this but he was too busy in staring at her so he jus smiles.. there was a pin drop silence but rey could clearly hear taani's fast heart beats.. but then taani decides to break the silence..


Taani: ummm.. rey.. rey' rey pls mujhe aise mat dekhiye..


Rey: (while staring at her) kyun taani????


Taani: vo.. umm. Vo' vo mujhe kuch kuch hota hai..


Rey: (comes near to her ear n in his husky voice) kya hota hai taani???


Taani feels butterflies in her stomach..She shivers by his husky tone n by his closeness.


She closes her eyes tightly n struggles for words to come out from her mouth..


Taani: rey.. mujhe sharam aa rahi hai..


After hearing this a very cute smile appears on his face.. He looks at his princess who was still standing wid closed eyes' 


Rey goes near to her eyes n kiss her eyes.. taani tightly grabs rey's shirt.. rey places his one hand on her hand which was grabbing his shirt.. n holds her tightly by her waist n pulls her closer.. taani still stands wid closed eyes' rey gently kiss her forehead.. n he bent towards her neck n
brushes his lips on her neck' by this taani turns her head into another direction giving him better access.. den rey moves towards her lips n about to kiss her but suddenly something strikes into his mind.. n he moves back.. 


Rey: taani u can open ur eyes.. 


(Taani opens her eyes n stands there in confusion ')


Rey: (cupping her face) taani I won't cross my limits.. I mean I knw I'm ur boyfriend but I also knw dat ur not ready for dis.. I mean it is just a kiss bt u r very different from other girls n dat's wat I like about u.. so main nahi chahta ke tum kabhibhi kisi ke liye bhi khud ko badlo.. mere liye bhi nahi.. I respect u a lot.. kabhibhi khud ko kuch karneke liye force mat karna pls.. 


(hearing this taani hugs him tightly' )

Taani: rey I love u so much' n thanx for understanding me.. I mean main aapse bohot jyada pyaar karti hu bt ye baat bhi sahi hai ke mujhe bohot jyada sharam bhi aati hai..


Rey: (while hiting his chest wid his hand) hayyeee par ye dil nahi manta na.. jab tum sharmati ho to badmash aur bhi control se bahar jata hai'


(taani blushes on dat)


Rey: plss taani itna blush karogi to main yahi mar jaunga.. hayyee ek to koi aaj itna jyada pretty lag raha hai iss purple dress mein aur upar se ye blush.. hayyeee main mar java' 


Taani: (tries to hide her blush) rey shut up.. aap na sach main bohot naughty ho jate ho kabhi kabhi.. 


Rey: Kaise Samjhaau Tumjhe
         Mera Phela Phela Pyaar Hai Yeh 


(taani laughs on dat)


Taani: kya bol rahe ho aap..??


Rey: nahi samjhi.. abhi samjhata hu..


Rey start singing a song..



(makes taani sit on stairs n sits beside her' places his head on her shoulder.. taani smiles on dat)



Na Jaane Kab Yeh Hua

Na Kisi Ko Khabar

Na Khud Ko Pata

Khoye Khoye Rehte

Hum Yahan Hai



(holds her arm n looks into her eyes)



Silsilo Ka Silsila Hai

Hua Shuru Abb Jo Nikle
Bhi Jaan

Abb Se Hai Hum raahi
Chahton Ke


Yeh Jaise Phela Nasha.

Woh Pheli Nazar Phela
Gumaar

Yun Lage Mohabbat Hi
Jahan Hai

Doston Ki Dosti Yaaron
Ki Yaari Kam Lagne Lagi

Behke Hai Hum Behka Yeh
Sama Hai



(Stands n comes in front of her
takes her hands in his hands n sings looking into those beautiful eyes ..)



Kaise Samjhaau Tumhe

Mera Phela Phela Pyaar
Hai Yeh

O O OO O O

Aankhon Mein Aitbaar Hai
Yeh

O Ooo Oo O

Mera Phela Phela Pyaar
Hai Yeh

O O OO O O

Aankhon Mein Aitbaar Hai
Yeh

O Ooo Oo O



Hawa Bhi Mili Thi Humein

Jhokon Mein Pooch Rahi
Thi



(asks taani)




Pyaar Yeh Agar Nahi To Phir Kya Hai??




(looking up)




Aye Aasmaan Tu Bhi
Aajkal Saang Chalta Hai

Saaath Leke Chanda Taare
..



(pulling her into a hug)



Kaise Samjhaau Tumjhe

Mera Phela Phela Pyaar
Hai Yeh

O O OO O O

Aankhon Mein Aitbaar Hai
Yeh

O Ooo Oo O

Mera Phela Phela Pyaar
Hai Yeh

O O OO O O

Aankhon Mein Aitbaar Hai
Yeh

O Ooo Oo O

Mera Phela Phela Pyaar
Hai Yeh

O O OO O O

Aankhon Mein Aitbaar Hai
Yeh

O Ooo Oo O


both stands like this for 5 to 10 mins n den leaves the fire exit happily.. :-)



Hey guys I am very bad at writing romantic scenes.. so pls pls pls forgive me.. n pls tell me how was it???????







Edited by kady_taarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thnx 4 dis vry cute n beautiful update :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg pls dea u r nt bad writter this ws freaking hawt uff rey :-* m blushing ...nd omg this is my fav song ... thnks fr updating dea :-D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow it's a wonderful ending, Rey being naughty, Taani blushing like crazy, their romantic moment, their llhh, Rey singing for Taani everything was awesome,thank u for writing another amazing part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear...loved it ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww... it was so so so so sooo cuteee... loved it... thanks for not ending in the last update... this update was super cutee <3

loved it and thanks for d PM... keep writing more =D

and awesum song choice...love their llhh moments...and rey teasing and taani bushing...its jus so damn cute... :D