Tales From a Fly on the Wall... (Tale 3: p. 6) - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you all :).
It is truly sad though the direction the show has taken... I hope they come to their senses before it's too late.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: cosmogirl77

This is super... 🤗 You are a marvellous "Spy Fly" 👏

For a min I thought whether I missed some part of this epi...😆 Certainly did not remember her bandaging his hand.
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Spy Fly ;). Hehe... I like it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow amazing, this is the point from where they ruined the story completely , and you have done just the opposite, thanks for writing such a sensible and meaningful scene which i expected and sadly did not get.

Well done 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
Devi, your 3rd part of the fly tale reminded me of William blakes poem, it somehow abstractly relates to Mithvi 😳 The tiger to be substituted to fire 😊

"Tiger,tiger burning bright
In the forests of the night,
What immortal hand or eye
Could frame thy fearful symmetry?"

The fire, passion & sparks are missing in them  Those are the things which define Mithvi 😳

I absolutely adored the way you've written the chapter, it would have been awesome if the show had taken this route 

Nicely written 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderfull story.Wish the makers also thinks like this...Edited by arv619 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Do I sense a beginning of a new story? ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hello Readers,

  I am so incredibly disappointed at the turn Junoon - and particularly Meera's characterization - has taken that I decided to rewrite a bit of it...  So, here it is...

And I was wondering when the makers will lose it and it happened sooner than later. So was waiting breathlessly for your version 😆 😛

Thank you as always 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh wow! This is amazing! Seriously!

You know? I started watching IPKKND after you started "Lavender," just so that I could understand your characters and context better! Looks like I might have to do the same with this show!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wonderful, story.. 
I think its the beginning of a new track.
Oh, i m damn excited!!!

~Dee~
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Posted: 11 years ago
excellent writing...👏loved it...❤️keep writing more...👍🏼