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Posted: 13 February 2013 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
The parts were mind blowing
I really love the concept, even though it's sad
Thanks for the PM love
Continue soon <3
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Posted: 13 February 2013 at 1:58pm | IP Logged
Hey :)
Nice story! Liked the start Embarrassed
Thanks for the Pm! Hug
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Posted: 13 February 2013 at 4:05pm | IP Logged
read all the parts loved the storyline please pm me whenever u update
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Posted: 13 February 2013 at 5:02pm | IP Logged
Great update!
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Posted: 13 February 2013 at 10:46pm | IP Logged
The Mysterious Girl



I walked down the streets not knowing where exactly to go? Devasted by her departure was not just enough that here I have another thing to think upon.

Who was there?

Zoya?

Or that b*oody leech?

I was just walking blindly when I collided with someone. Our foreheads collapsed and I immediately asked for forgiveness.

"I'm Sorry" knowing it was my fault.

The woman's face was covered with a piece of cloth only letting the one to see her eyes.

The eyes that reflected innocence.

But oh wait!

How am I able to read them? After all I'm very bad at it except for...

My eyes widened as something flashed in my mind and I turned to see over the girl again but she was gone...

Who was  she?!

Why did I carve for her fragrance?

Why am I carving for that look?

Why the **** I'm so tempted to see that face?!

For god's sake she was just a random girl like others!

But it do affect me!

WHY?!

Why I was tempted to go to her and hug her tight?

Why am I tempted to see her face?

Why am I tempted to see those eyes?

The eyes which somehow gave me solace?

Wait!

Solace? Really asad?

From when did you started to find solace in some unknown person?

My mind was fully occupied with those thoughts.

What had an unknown girl done to me?

Out of anger, I broke the vase kept on the near by table.

This was so confusing!

That... that fire?

Did she escaped that fire?

No! How is it possible Asad? I myself took out her dead body from that fire no?!

For god's Sake what actually did happened yesterday?!

I fell down on my knees with my head in my hands trying to figure out actually what is happening in my life?

Me and Humeira had shifted to the new house... only we both and no one else.

Humeira!

How could I forget about her?

Damn asad you are just a big idiot...!!!




Sorry for a short one guys.

Will do update this FF on a regular basis only if we get good review?!

Pm's will be sent later.

Precap -

Some AsYa flashbacks and what actually happened which caused Zoya's death in Asad's POV.


Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 February 2013 at 10:42pm

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Posted: 13 February 2013 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
beautiful update... poor AsadOuch is that mystery girl is ZoyaSmile continue soon and pls pm me
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Posted: 15 February 2013 at 1:32am | IP Logged
awesomeee updateBig smile
waiting for d nxt partSmile


Edited by aishu3003 - 15 February 2013 at 1:27am
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Awesome update :-)

Nikki <3

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