Originally posted by: Cherishh
Refreshing concept Manisha and its quite obvious that I am loving it.
--okay i m relieved!😆
What a beautiful start dear...its has a complete different essence in the very first chapter of it...I felt it has been a bit more descriptive than ur usual style...be it of the surrounding filled with greenery and the feel it gives of soothing and calming affect or the presentation of the bungalow our AshNi reside...had idea about this style of ur writing thru one of the last parts of JKBH...its just amazing to read.
--yeah..i got descriptive thr.. it has a definite purpose though😳.. and it also gives idea abt Nidhi's character..without it she wud've seemed more harsh and less innocent a character!
Nidhi's characterization seems a bit different...especially the way Ashu thought..cunning, opportunistic, etc, etc😆😆..but the real Nidhi might be hidden somewhere
--😆no she is conniving.. calculative.. opportunistic.. and everything.. tht he says.. and yet.. he will fall in luv..😆
She answering him this way was quite a refreshing thing😆
--😆 i luved the "perk" wala dialouge..😆
Hayee Rabba her nickname Sugar (missed it so very much) but the reasons quite different
--😆wait and read!😉 Its my fav nickname too!
ohhoho..Nidhi in this shade is defo unbelievable ..Gosh I really don't know how I am able to digest it.
--so was she appealing or not?
Awww...was that a way to describe My, poor baby, Ashu...I am so very angry on u for that😡😡...however he is he is a sweetheart😉..u know that right..no one charm any1 like he does.
--yeah.. tht was Nidhi's way of describing him.. and u saw his charming effect in the later part of update..😉
Well seriously this AshNi is so very unexpected from u yaar...when u said they gonna hate each other, I never thought of these shades of them which led to their hatred..now I am more interested in how they fall in love
--originally thr shades were even harsher.. bt thn i felt i needed to tone thm a bit down.. otherwise readers wudnt b able to digest thm..😳
When u said u want to make me ready for the worst..but why the hell u didn't give the hint of this type of characterization dear..its cheating
--so r u okay with tht or not?
OMG...OMG...yeh kya hogaya..u got them married in the first part itself and the venom they spit with their words is so very different and nice too😆😆😆...but the reason or how they ended up being tied was so very funny.
--nice na..and its jst a trailor of wat thy have actually experienced..😆 and the reason for thr mrg.. is very funny.. esp the whole before wedding sequence..😆 its highly dramatized.. i luved Nidhi's attitude tho!😳
Oh their fights and talks were ever so interesting and entertaining though they are not so welcoming for them, though it be their entry into house, fight in study, their encounters in office and so on
--fight in the study was cool i luv Nidhi stomping on Ashu's foot!😆 now dont u get mad.. hamesha Ashu baazi mar leta hai.. end mein to waise maar hi li.. 😛
But what I read ahead..reflected the other side of the coin in bits, which is making everything all the more interesting
--yup.. thy will slowly see the other side of the other's persona.. and with tht readers too..😳
Aww..their romantic dance and pair ..with their ever charming smiles...just thinking about Ashu's smile, I am all dead and in my dreamland
--yeah.... so slowly thy r getting into tht friendly mode!😳
But their kisses..gosh where is this all leading to I wonder...it defo isn't clearing their state of mind or emotions
--i wanted to initially give a disclaimer at the begining.. Relationship Status: Complicated!😆 the fite betn heart and head is always confusing!😳
Thanks for such a wonderful SS...looking forward to more of it.
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