Originally posted by saibanu
First of all , I am extremely sorry for being late ..I read your chapter Friday night itself but could not comment as i was traveling ...From now on I will be regular , I am sorry about that !
--i know life is very hectic.. so i understand.. π³ waise i can only ask if i myself practice such punctuality na!πππ
Coming to chapter , I think I missed out few details in previous chapter so reread it again both chap 3 and 4
It is beautiful chapter , lot of things are happening and but everything binding ASHNi , making them fall in love with each other
hmmm.. its a slow progression and yet thr bond is so palpable.. thy mite not want to accept it jst yet tho!π³
There were so many question running in my head when i read last chapter but now , you are giving answers one by one ...While reading first para . I could clearly picture Ashu here ...His love for Nidhi is very well expressed...
yeah..one cud really feel his pain.. he is starting to get very attached to Nidhi.. and indirectly it was responsible for him going back to Nidhi!π³ Nidhi understood his need and dependency for her company and forced him to confront his helpless situation! I luv this girl!π
I really like the way you come up with new way to show their intimacy , their passion for each other ...it is treat to read about your ASHNI
yeah.. i didnt know tht i cud describe plain attraction with such purity.. bt i guess its the characters who r honest and pure hence this apparent attraction is not lust bt a result of deep emotional need!π³
Attack on Nidhi is very sudden...Gosh ! Good that Ashu came on time , love the way he tok care of Nidhi ...Arey this is too much wahin par bhi jagda shuru kiya ππ
jhagde ke bagair to koi bhi kaam nahi banta na in dono ka!π Thr luv has a tangy taste with a sweet aftertaste!π
Wonderfully written ,Now All set to read next part ..
Thank you so much dear for this chapter and and also Sorry for being late ...
Maaf kardo agar gussa hotho ...
its okay.. again.. i m not angry bt yes.. always eagerly await ur reviews.. phir sochti hun ki hectic life hai to busy to honge hi na!π³
so thnk u soo much for this lovely review again!π€
saw u updated HKA.. still havent gone thru it! will PM u once i review.. π³