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"You can fool some of the people all of the time, and all of the people some of the time, but you cannot fool all of the people all of the time." ~ Abraham Lincoln~

 

Raizada and Sons

This story showcases two areas of my interest, Politics and the serial IPKKND on Star Plus. The story bears some similarity to the serial and the due credit is extended, the rest I own, the content, premise and writing style.

I would love to read your comments and suggestions, I would not promise to include all in my writing and would like to add, constructive criticism is always welcome; it would greatly help the story and my effort to stay true to the concept. I am relatively new to writing and though I enjoy it immensely, my ability at writing regular updates is limited. The update soon comments, honestly cannot be honored as I mentioned earlier, cannot type that fast.

I request you not to copy/duplicate this work, it's petty to plagiarize and sincerely hope you enjoy my work, like and comment. In case you do find my work interesting enough to recommend to others, please direct them to this page. I strictly prohibit unauthorized use of this fan fiction in parts or whole.

Thank you for reading, please do hit the like and leave a comment if you found the update/story interesting enough. I do send out PMs to those who do so, as I would not want to flood anybody's inbox if they are not interested in reading or receiving PMs for this story. Alternatively, you can also block my name if you don't wish to receive PMs from me, I would not mind. I would want you to enjoy my writing and not like it to be forced.

Once again, thank you for reading

- Kalyaani

Thread One - Chapter 1 to 23

Thread Two - Chapter 24 to 37

Thread Three - Chapter 38 - 49

Thread Four - Chapter 50 - 60

Thread 5

Chapter 61 - Five steps back (below) / Chapter 62- Strong ties / Chapter 63- Evil begets evil

 

Edited by Kalyaani - 11 years ago

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Firstly congrats on the new thread Kay 👏

Yay I'm first tom comment... feels like won an award...😆😆

I loved this update... awesome... Arnav and Khushi talked it out... they'll take time to come out of it, but i know they'll come around...

It was very quick for Arnav to realise his mistake so soon... but now that he has found it, I know he will take all his efforts to make Khushi come around...

and we all are well aware what happens when Mr. Arnav Singh Raizad turns his charm factor on!! dont we?? 😆
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Twiggy i waited for you. I've to log off now. So res. Unres will come late

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Sorry for the late edit. You know I was feeling lazy :)

Both think the other hurts them, both think their point of view isn't understood, both love each other and express it but both feel helpless because of it.

I agree with Khushi here. In my life I've decided things as simple as which ice cream i would have. So the question of having a baby...

Anyways it has to be mutual. This and everything about marriage. It is about two people sharing their lives.

I really wasn't expecting Anjali to have spoken those words of wisdom. But she did...

Her words and Khushi's should together knock some sense in Arnav's brain for a woman who smiles at him on leaving the washroom even though they just had a fight...Edited by Rasgulla_sp - 11 years ago

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so sorry for spamming...

 I think I was so happy to be first I didn't know when I clicked multiple times the post button 😳, and also to mention the cache problem of my browser... sorry again
Edited by valeyrie - 11 years ago

Res Edited by vgedin - 11 years ago

1st page!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved the chap!!!!!
khushi finally let it out...
let see what arnav is going to damage control...
w8ng for next!!!!!!!
Edited by jisa - 11 years ago

Congratulations kalyaani

As usual awesome update...

I loved this chapter!