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ll_piya_ll
Poonam..../Piya @ll_piya_ll IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 11 years ago

Vo jo hamesha hasti rehati the.
vo jo hamesha khush rehati the.
vo jo hamesha mujhe himmat deti the.
vo jo..
before he comlpleted..
riya remove his grip n shouted..
yes yes u right ..nahi huin main vo riya..
suna tumne arjun nahi huin..
riya grabbed..arjun. coller n say..
vo to use din mar gaye jis din..
Ar-use din kya riya(he very well knon what happned next..i meen what riya wanna to say..but arjun wanna to listen this by her mouth.. he wanted to do bez riya comes out her past memory)
bolo chup kyun ho..
Ri-haan haan she is died..
vo to use din he maar gaye jis din rohan ne mera rape kiya tha..
yahi sunana chahate they na tum..
suna tumne maar gaye vo..
mar dala us rohan ne use..
main kitna gidgidaye(begging) kitana roye(cry)plz jaane do mujhe..chud do mujhe..
per usane..
she culd not hold anymore herself n breack down in arjun shoulder...
arjunnn..!!!..(she sobbing)
arjun vo mar gaye..vo mar gaye arjun..mar dala rohan ne tumhari riya ko..
Ar-arjun wrepped her in his strong arms n console her..
jitana rona hai riya ro lo..
Main tumhen nahi rokunga..
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Teri bahon main mili aise rahat se mujhe..
ho gaye jane jahan ..
teri adat se mujhe..
Dekhon main jab tujhako ..
tab din mera ye dhale..

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tumhen es dar se es dard se bahar ana hoga ..
or main tumhare sath huin riya..i m always with u riya..
nafrat hai mujhe khud se..
why i not trust u ..kyunmaine ye jaane ke koshish nahi ke..
ke ye sab kerne ke piche tumhari..
kya majburi hogi..kyun main tumhari akhon main. chupe use dard ko nahi pehchan paya..
Ri-during sobbing..plz arjun ehsa mat kahiye..esmain tumhari ke koe galti nahi..
etna kuch hone ke baad main bhala kaise ..
arjun parted hug n put one finger to her lips..Shhh riya jo kuch huya usmain tumhari koe galti nahi.
T.B.CONTI.
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Edited by Piyarani - 11 years ago
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Payal_156
Payal Goel @Payal_156 IF-Sizzlerz
Anniversary 11 Group Promotion 5 + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
Grt update dear..
congo fr d new thread!!
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sdhg
sdhg @sdhg Goldie
Anniversary 13 Group Promotion 3
Posted: 11 years ago
loved it
👏wonderful!!!!!!
u dealt with emotional aspects well...
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shrutisweety
shruti @shrutisweety IF-Sizzlerz
Anniversary 11 Group Promotion 6 + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
it was wounderful update
aakir riya ne apne aap mai chupi huvi dard bol di
continue soon
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devildiva21
devildiva21 @devildiva21 IF-Sizzlerz
Anniversary 11 Group Promotion 6 + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
superb update...!!!!
loved it..!!!
hahah raute ne rathore ke car ke tyers pehle hi puncture kr diye
taki wo unhe follow na kar sake..!!!😆
finally riya told about her pain to arjun..!!!
loved the way arjun consoled riya...!!!!
the poem ws awsum vry beautiful..!!!⭐️
cant wait for the next part..!!
continue soon..!!!
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DEEPZzzz
DEEPZzzz @DEEPZzzz IF-Stunnerz
Anniversary 11 Group Promotion 7 + 5
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update and congrats on the new thread
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fasiha_rocks
fasiha @fasiha_rocks Senior Member
Anniversary 12 Group Promotion 2
Posted: 11 years ago
really nice update
feeling sad for poor riya
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ll_piya_ll
Poonam..../Piya @ll_piya_ll IF-Rockerz
Anniversary 11 Group Promotion 5 + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by M.V.Kohli007


Congrats dear for 2nd thread. 🥳

Nyc Poem..
Great update..
Ye rawte bhi na , tire puncture kar diye. 😆
And finally Riya ne sab bol diya Arjun ko , ab shyad vo theek ho jaaye.
Arjun use theek se handle karega..
Thank u so much manu dr...yes she tell him...but abhi to twist n turn baki hai...
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ll_piya_ll
Poonam..../Piya @ll_piya_ll IF-Rockerz
Anniversary 11 Group Promotion 5 + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by sdhg



     
👏👏
<font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">awesome update...</font>
<font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">ariya scene was fantastic...😛😛😛
<font size="2">loved arjun's love for our poor riya⭐️, i<font size="2"> think roshini has sumthng 2 do wht ri faced😡</font></font>
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<font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">come soon with next part...😃</font>



Thank u dr ...yup about rosh...yes next part main kuch to pata chalega dr...sur dr i will try ...
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ll_piya_ll
Poonam..../Piya @ll_piya_ll IF-Rockerz
Anniversary 11 Group Promotion 5 + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by fatima15



great update :) loved it
congratulations for the new thread :)
loved the poem :) beautifully written
omg arjun punctured rathore's car tyres😆
so he took her to the beach
continue soon

Ohhh thank u fatii ...soncha thoda or pakati huin..
u realy lik poem thank u dr..!!
age bhi likha diya dr...
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