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Hey plz continue really soon, eagerly waiting for nxt update!!

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galat time pe rukh gayi aenna tu... i wanted to read what was tanya's solution...Confused
and thnk god... virat president ban gaya...Tongue
precap was...awww..Day Dreaming. virman hug!!..Embarrassed. please please please update soon...LOLWink
thnx 4 pm dear:):):)Hug

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Aenna dear finally i read ur story. Blv ne its an interesting cncept nd i hope we get virman soon. M lukng frwd to it nd pls pm me. Lo bachi badi ho gayi kal tak humara story padti thi ab khud likh rai hai aur wo v itnaaa acha.. 1st doc mei hi mujhe clean bold kar dia..<3 dil garden garden ho gaya.

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<font size="4">PART - 4</font>


T: i hv a solution karan come here . Students karan will be our Cultural Secetary ( C.S )
K: really mam
T: yes karan i think its d bst idea as virat nd manvi doesnt know much about all dis so u will help dem in everything
   u will arrange everything for shows , costumes etc. Nd manvi nd virat only hv to concentrate on d show i mean dey will either perform or make others ready for d performance so dats final dey both will manage d performances nd karan u will manage d show activities..
M: dats a great idea mam
V: yes mam ( glaring at karan )
K: thanx mam
T: ur welcome. Virat u just come wid i need to talk to u
V: sure mam
K: manvi u also come i want to tell u sumthing

here tanya drag virat outside d class nd dere karan takes manvi back to dere seats
Outside d class

V: wat happened mam??
T: virat i think it shud be my ques
V: wat do mean mam??
T: virat m coming straight to d point why u make me replace karan from his president post
V: mam its nthg lyk dat its just dat i was fed up of karan i wanted sum1 else to be d president thats it.
T: virat r u serious i mean i was asking u for being d president from d past 2years but u were never interested so wat happened suddenly ??
V: mam i told u dat i wanted sum1 else to be d president besides karan
Nd yes i hv agreed becoz i just wanted to be
T: virat i think sumthing is fishy kahi tum ye sab us manvi ke liye to nai kr rahe
V: ( shocked ) wat?? Mam aesa kuch nai hai wo to bus..aap to jante ho karan kaisa hai so dats y
T: so i was ryt virat tumne kabhi kisi or ke liye to aesa kiya nai i mean yaha tak maya ke liye bhi nai i no ki u didnt love her but she was ur gf or manvi she has just come . Omg plzzz virat dont tell me dat u fall for manvi i mean love at first sight ( she teases virat )
V: ( hell shocked ) huh!! Mam aapki tabiyat to theek hai na i mean mjhe kuch samjh nai aaya aapne itna kuch pucha
T: virat i was asking dat hv u fall for manvi i mean love at first sight
V: what?????? ( he shouts ) mam app pagal to nai ho gayi na mai or pyar i mean aap to aise baat kr rai ho jaise aap mjhe jaanti hi nai ho i cant fall for any1 ijust dont believe in luv have u forgot??
T: virat i no but i thought may be ( she was cut by virat )
V: no need to think about it mam i no want to know listen mam
maine ye sab isliye kiya becoz i no karan is not a good person oaur yaha sabko uske baare me pata hai i mean mostly sabko but manvi wo to bikul bhi nai jaanti use aur yaha tak ki wo to is sheher me kisi ko bhi nai jaanti so i thought i shud help her nd dont let her be wid wrong people.
T: ohkk wese virat today m sooo proud of u
V: wo to hona hi chahiye mai hu hi itna smart Wink
T: kk now come i want to take sumthing about d upcoming shows wid u nd manvi
let me go nd col her

here karan was talking wid manvi suddenly tanya come nd tell manvi to come wid her while going karan said to manvi

K: manvi be careful
M: hmm bye

Tanya make virat nd manvi wait for her in d drama club as she has sum work
on d way to drama club virat starts d convo wid manvi

V: so hi manvi
M: ( completely ingnoring him ) hmm
V: i thought hi ka jawaab hi hota hai
M: did any1 ask u. Mind ur own business
V: hey hey its ok if u dont want to talk but dont be rude
M: i dont need to ask u how to behave so just hv a life dude
V: i thought u r really a nice person but i think i was wrong . Tum bhi un ghatiya bigdi hui ladkiyo jaisi hai jo sif apne bare me sochti hai
M: just shut up who r u to judge me nd how dare u say dose things about me ( vry angry ) i think first u shud look at urself nd tell me how to behave wid ur kind of people
V : wat r u sayingg ???
M: dont act so smart ok . I no u hv made tanya mam to replace karan . Dont u??
V: ( shocked ) yes i did but dere was a reason behind it
M: i no ur "so called" reasons . Karan had told me everything

           "FLASHBACK"

karan take manvi to dere seat nd start telling her his fake stories

M: karan ise pehle tum kuch kaho i want to tell u sumthing wo jo ladka hai na virat usne intentionally tumhe replace karwaya manvi use or tanya mam ko msg krte hue dekha
K: mjhe pata tha aesa hi hua hoga mai tumhe virat ke bare me hi batane wala tha
M: matlab tum jaante ho ki virat ne ye sab jaanpuch kr kara hai to fir tumne us waqt kyu kuch nai kaha
K : kyuki i didnt wanted to argue wid tanya mam that virat is her fav so dat was expected ki wo mjhe hata kr virat ke alawa kisi or ko nai banaengi


M: i just cant believe people over here r dat desperate to be president
K: manvi wat do think he has done all dis to be president?? No its not lyk dat if he wanted to become d president so he had been that before a long tym. Tanya mam hv asked him so many tym but he never wanted to become but today ( he was cut by manvi )
M: matlab?? To fir wo aaj kyu tyar hua is post ke liye?
K: mai yahi batana chahta tha ki wo ye sab sirf tumhara pass aane ke liye kr raha
M: what??
K: haan or sirf tumhare sath rehne ke liye kr raha hai
M: omg he is such a looser
K: or iske aesa krne ka ek or reason hai
M: or wo kya hai?
K: mai
M: matlab??
K: matlab ye ki he hates me nd we both r enemies nd whole collage no about dis. So dats why seeing u besides me he was feeling like a looser so he wants u to be wid him. As he is d collage's bst playboy so how can he break his record of not dating any1. So he want u to be his..(was cut by manvi)
M: what?? How disgusting!!! I just h8 dese kind of people. Thanx karan for telling me his true intensions.
K: ur welcome nd how will i not tell u m ur frend . Akhir dosti ki hai to nibhani to paregi
K: uff ye filmy dialouge
then tanya come nd tell manvi to come wid her nd karan spoke
K: be careful

        FLASHBACK ENDS

V: wat?? Mjhe lag hi raha tha ki karan tumhe jarur bhad- kaega.
M: excuze me i no mjhe kisi baat sunni chahiye or kiski nai so just stay away from me.
V: manvi listen to me.
M: dont just dont u even try to talk to me
V: i think jab tumne karan ki baat suni to ab tume meri bhi baat sunni chahiye aese kaise tum mere bare me kuch galat soch sakti ho
M: meri marzi mai kisi ki bhi sunu tume usse koi faraq nai padna chahiye samjhe tum
V: mjhe kyu faraq nai parega tum mere bare me kuch galat nai soch sakti.
M: i love u mai tumse bahut pyar krti hu...

To be continued...
Precap - no precap.. Neep thinking..

Luv aennanext part on page 9

Edited by Aenna - 15 February 2013 at 8:03am

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Posted: 04 February 2013 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bhabani90

Aenna dear finally i read ur story. Blv ne its an interesting cncept nd i hope we get virman soon. M lukng frwd to it nd pls pm me. Lo bachi badi ho gayi kal tak humara story padti thi ab khud likh rai hai aur wo v itnaaa acha.. 1st doc mei hi mujhe clean bold kar dia..<3 dil garden garden ho gaya.


haye di thanqqq so much aap meri inspiration ho
thanxxx alot

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Posted: 04 February 2013 at 11:09am | IP Logged
Nice update...Virman fight was nice...both fighting to justify their POV...continue soon!

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Posted: 04 February 2013 at 12:46pm | IP Logged
Aenna lovely update I am loving this drama club college scenario and their fight

hey one suggestion use some fonts or bold
it will attract readers eyes

awesome going Clap
manvi said she loves him awee Embarrassed
Heart

Edited by preity_d - 04 February 2013 at 12:45pm

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